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Posted: 9 years ago
Who are you?
 

As I walk down a lonely beach
A set of gentle waves begin to soak my feet
Tickled pinked by the icy water
I feel blood rush rustling through my veins awakening my senses!
 
 
Grinning, immersed in a deep thought, I look above
Watching the horizon see its sun slowly fading away
Painting its skies in deep, rich organza!
Like some pastel dream where innocent wishes are born in disguise!
Wishes from the heavens above awaiting
Ready to wrap me in its massive arms!
 
 
A wish in the form of a falling raindrop
Like a drop of pearl caressing my cheek
A recurring wish overpowers me
Whispering sweet nothings that echoes
Filling all the little caverns of my blushing heart
Awaiting to scribble madness onto the blank pages of my life
Like floating together on the cotton clouds dancing to waltz
You are what my dreams are made of
I remain incomplete without your presence, my recurring wish
Won't you tell me for once just who are you?
 
 
Am I engulfed in the storm of illusions
Or will a day come where dreams come true
You are my wish from the depths of wishes
Come and tell me you exist just for once!

 
 
PS: I would like to dedicate this post to all IF members, who have ever read my lines ... and always encouraged me to scribble away a few of my random thoughts ... thank you, I am sure you all know who you are!!!
 
 
All comments are welcome!

 

Posted: 9 years ago
My lubly turtle-dove, crazy cat, this is sheer brilliance of writing.!⭐️ πŸ€—
your words sounded like playing a violin! How sweetly you write! The below are the lines I love the most!

You are what my dreams are made of
I remain incomplete without your presence, my recurring wish
Won't you tell me for once just who are you?
Am I engulfed in the storm of illusions
Or will a day come where dreams come true
You are my wish from the depths of wishes
Come and tell me you exist just for once!


I exist,
I exist, seen yet unseen, known yet unknown,
I'm the fragrance that floats from blooms,
and the wetness of falling raindrops,
I'm the warmth of a hand clasping your hand,
and the coolness of moonrays seeping through clouds,
I mean the words you write,
I colour dreams you weave,
with my fingers lazily waving,
waves a breeze that keeps you at ease
I'm a wish, divine, born sleeping,
sleeping deep in your sleep,
until you wakeup to find yourself,
and see me shining your smiles.


Ahem. Ahem. Forgive my poetry. I'm not much good at writing them and I've not tried writing one in last two years! But I couldn't resist my tendency.πŸ˜†
And thanks a million for writing the poem dedicated to all of us!πŸ€—
Edited by Brahmaputra - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Oh my sweet TJ, you spin brilliance with your words! Everytime I read something from you my heart flutters as much as it. This is such a beautiful piece...thank you for dedicating it to all of us! Wish I were a poet, I would have sung a sonnet to let you know that my dreams like yours are now colored in pastel!

Beautiful again!!

Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Brahmaputra


My lubly turtle-dove, crazy cat, this is sheer brilliance of writing.!⭐️ πŸ€—
your words sounded like playing a violin! How sweetly you write! The below are the lines I love the most!

You are what my dreams are made of
I remain incomplete without your presence, my recurring wish
Won't you tell me for once just who are you?
Am I engulfed in the storm of illusions
Or will a day come where dreams come true
You are my wish from the depths of wishes
Come and tell me you exist just for once!


I exist,
I exist, seen yet unseen, known yet unknown,
I'm the fragrance that floats from blooms,
and the wetness of falling raindrops,
I'm the warmth of a hand clasping your hand,
and the coolness of moonrays seeping through clouds,
I mean the words you write,
I colour dreams you weave,
with my fingers lazily waving,
waves a breeze that keeps you at ease
I'm a wish, divine, born sleeping,
sleeping deep in your sleep,
until you wakeup to find yourself,
and see me shining your smiles.


Ahem. Ahem. Forgive my poetry. I'm not much good at writing them and I've not tried writing one in last two years! But I couldn't resist my tendency.πŸ˜†
And thanks a million for writing the poem dedicated to all of us!πŸ€—


lub you Jamy πŸ€—... you have been with me over the years, encouraging and motivating me always ...your words have been unfailingly beautiful for me!! ... can't thank you enough for everything!... still remember the beautiful moments we shared ... the crazy times we had... our posts were loaded with comedy, romance, letters, diary entries ... the anger the jest, the hope the love ... we all felt during those times ... the emotional ups and downs, i actually miss all of that ... reminds me of everyone who was there at that time ... haven't seen some people in a really really long time... would love to say hi πŸ˜Š


wow!!! what lovely poetry! ... like i was reading my reply...
thanks Jamy, i envision you smiling and shining with every breath you take!


2 lines just for you ... since i know you love flowers! πŸ˜†

You own a garden of beautiful flowers, 
Yet for me you pluck the most precious one in your power
Planting it inside of me where its fragrance shall always linger 
Proving you my Jamy to be the most inspirational gardener ever!


thank you once again for encouraging me always JAMY πŸ€—
 


Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Meself


Oh my sweet TJ, you spin brilliance with your words! Everytime I read something from you my heart flutters as much as it. This is such a beautiful piece...thank you for dedicating it to all of us! Wish I were a poet, I would have sung a sonnet to let you know that my dreams like yours are now colored in pastel!

Beautiful again!!


selfie jaan πŸ€—  love you and thank you for everything! 
your words of appreciation mean a lot to me as i have always felt we are pages of the same book! ... in many ways i consider you my partner in crime ... and selfie on IFs!!! πŸ˜†


your kinds words are like soft petals dancing on the winds tickling my ear buds!! ... thanks hon!


thank you for inspiring me and others like me with your art and talent in writing! 

Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by -TomNJerry-



lub you Jamy πŸ€—... you have been with me over the years, encouraging and motivating me always ...your words have been unfailingly beautiful for me!! ... can't thank you enough for everything!... still remember the beautiful moments we shared ... the crazy times we had... our posts were loaded with comedy, romance, letters, diary entries ... the anger the jest, the hope the love ... we all felt during those times ... the emotional ups and downs, i actually miss all of that ... reminds me of everyone who was there at that time ... haven't seen some people in a really really long time... would love to say hi πŸ˜Š


wow!!! what lovely poetry! ... like i was reading my reply...
thanks Jamy, i envision you smiling and shining with every breath you take!


2 lines just for you ... since i know you love flowers! πŸ˜†

You own a garden of beautiful flowers, 
Yet for me you pluck the most precious one in your power
Planting it inside of me where its fragrance shall always linger 
Proving you my Jamy to be the most inspirational gardener ever!


thank you once again for encouraging me always JAMY πŸ€—
 
 
I've no words but only jaadu ki jhappis!!!!πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

You rally very beautifully summerised our journey in IF! I've no words to describe what I felt reading it!☺️ and your poem for me!!! In Ami's words i'll say muah muah...πŸ€—

as you always say, a hug speaks more that words... I'm speechless reading your spellbound reply!
Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful writing...This is sheer brilliance... 😊
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by amritat


Beautiful writing...This is sheer brilliance... 😊


Thank you for the appreciation. Means a lot!! πŸ€—
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by navyasingh


bueatiful lines😊


Thanks for reading and replying! πŸ€—
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by Brahmaputra


 
I've no words but only jaadu ki jhappis!!!!πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

You rally very beautifully summerised our journey in IF! I've no words to describe what I felt reading it!☺️ and your poem for me!!! In Ami's words i'll say muah muah...πŸ€—

as you always say, a hug speaks more that words... I'm speechless reading your spellbound reply!

Jamy πŸ€—  been a really really long time!!! ... hope you have been keeping well

Its always a pleasure to rekindle old vibes!!
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