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Roli controls her fear & turns to khushi.
Roli - yes.. whatever said by you is correct...(looking at SID)I love him... more than me... I know that he too loves me more than him(looking at all family members)... no one can separate us...(she then turns to khushi & veeru) if u want to see our love towards each other then stay here till our marriage & u'll know everything...(veeru thinks that all she said was about him).
Khushi is shocked by hearing this & keeps quiet bcoz Roli is not letting her to know any clue as she is talking facing Sid at one side & talking about marriage with veeru on the other side ... veeru smiles at Roli & asks the priest to continue the chants from where he stopped..
Everyone afraid with Roli's behavior... All are thinking that veeru might have planned something to marry Roli from which Roli is not able to come out...especially simar, mausiji, prem are trying to find the reason always looking at Roli...Roli looking at Sid unable to say anything with a pale expression on her face but with a lot of pain in her wet eyes. Sid who is standing little far to Roli observing her behavior silently... Mataji, Sujatha were in tears for the plight of Roli...
Priest asks Veeru & Roli to sit in their places opposite the fire... Veeru holds Roli's hand & walks forward... Veeru smiles to Roli... Roli who is dull, smiles too to veeru...when he turned forward again her smile disappeared which is observed by Sid... Roli is walking slowly wantedly so that to make delay... due to the effect of pills she is losing her sense slowly closing her eyes but with the firm hold of veeru she gets some consciousness... Veeru takes his place leaving Roli & starts pooja as instructed... ... Roli's eyes are on Sid only... Everyone in the family are seeing their love, but kept faith on God that Roli is doing all this bcoz of some reason...
Priest now tells Roli to take her place... Roli who is looking at Sid getting weaken, not listens to priest's words... veeru observes it & raises his head holding Roli's hand & turns her to his side to face him... When he is about to drag her on to her place, he feels someone holding his hand firmly...
Edited by latharosid - 9 years agoPART 8
Sid - (slowly) Roli, I love you.. don't get afraid... no one can take u from me... I know why you fear. I have seen gun which is with veeru...(Roli heartbeat raised hearing Sid's words in happiness which Sid can feel clearly in their hug) I came to know that just a while before... & got confirmation when I felt the fear in your eyes when u were seeing veeru many times... be strong Roli... don't worry, nothing will happen to me & to our family when your love is protecting us...
Roli's heart melts & raises her hands hugging Sid more & more firmly... Roli caresses his back with one hand & his hair with the other...all the family members are happy to see them... Simar & prem join their hands in happiness...
Veeru is shocked to see Roli hugging Sid...
Sid feels that Roli is still fearing as her hold on his back is shivering... he breaks hug holding her cheeks, looks at her face & moves forward kissing on her forehead lovingly...
Veeru loses his temper & furiously takes out his gun screaming Roli'.
ROSID open their eyes who were in deep love... Sid holds Roli cuddling more & Roli too...all the family members r screaming at veeru's enraging act. veeru aims at ROSID... Roli's fear for which she is pretending all the time to save Sid and family turned into real... Roli is getting nervous & covering Sid so that veeru can aim her... Sid is not ready to accept his defeat before veeru & trying to free Roli from his hug so that nothing could harm her...he observes Prem slowly coming to veeru to hold the gun & plans to divert his attention...
Sid - veeru leave Roli.. if you want to take this property no one stops you... But leave Roli... she is innocent...(Roli hugging & looking at Sid in fear)..
Veeru - shut up... I'll not spare anyone between me & Roli...she is mine... Leave her... If not I'll kill u both...
Siddanth, Roli, Mataji, simar & all others observe that Prem is coming close to veeru & when he is about to hold the gun...
Khushi - v e e r u...look behind...
So veeru becomes alert & looks behind & kicks prem in his stomach & he falls down... when veeru is about to turn & pull the trigger which is aiming at ROSID, Sid holds his hand taking it upside & veeru fires it in air... Sid handles him carefully & twists his hand...by that time prem got up & gave a hard punch on veeru's face...Roli's head is spinning & she is becoming drowsy...she is trying to call Sid but unable to raise her voice...Sid gave a heavy blow on his shoulder & veeru dropped the gun...& then on his face...veeru lost all his strength with those punches of Sid & fell down on d floor...khushi went to veeru to get him up but he slowly closed his eyes while looking at Roli...