Arakshi - Do Dil Bandhe Ek Dori Se - Ch.8 @ P.29

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Posted: 9 years ago

HAPPY BIRTHDAY GUDIYA

DO DIL BANDHE EK DORI SE

 

This story starts with Arjun being tortured in the police station

 

Inspector Satya:  Iss baar bas haath pair thod raha hoon, phir kabhi bhi mere honewaali biwi ke aas paas bhi nazar aaya naa tho seedha upar bhej doonga. Be careful.

 

Arjun's mother comes to the police station & bails him out.

Arjun:  Maa aap yaha kyu aayi?  Papa akele honge ghar pe upar se unki tabiyat bhi teek nahi hain.  Aap ghar chaliye main aata hoon.

 

Mrs.Rawte:  Kaha jaa raha hain tu phir se uss ladki ke pass jisne tumhaare saath pyaar ka naatak kiya aur ab tumhe chodkar kisi aur ke saath shaadi kar rahi hain.  Tu kab samjega Arjun.  Usne apne zindagi se tujhe hamesha hamesha ke liye nikhaal chuki hain. Tu kyu uski zindagi main waapas jaana chahtha hain. 

 

Arjun:  Maa main jaanna chahtha hoon ki usse mujhe chodna hi tha tho mujhse pyaar kyu kiya?  Aaj main usse apne saare sawaalo ka javaab lekar hi ghar lautoonga.  Aap jaahiye

 

Mrs.Rawte:  Tujhe meri kasam Arjun.  Mujhse waad kar ki phir kabhi tu usse nahi milega.  Aur phir bhi tu jaana chahtha hain tho teri marzi.

 

Arjun saw tears in his mother's eyes. He hugged her & said Maa mere life main aapki aur papa ki khushi sabse zyaada maaine raktha hain.  Aap jaisa kahengi waisa hi hoga maa. Main Pooja se kabhi nahi miloonga.  Aap rohiye matt maa.  Aapki aankhon main aasoo nahi dekh saktha main. Chaliye ghar chalthe hain.

 

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Sakshi:  Ye Poorab phone kyu nahi utaa raha hain.  Ek hafta hogaya iska koi ataa patha nahi.  Upar se papa ka torture.  Oh god help me.

 

Mr.Anand:  Sakshi beta mujhe tumse baat karni hain.

 

Sakshi:  Main jaanti hoon papa ki aap mujhse kya baat karna chahte hain.  Aur aap ye bhi jaanthe hain ki mera decision kya hoga.

 

Mr.Anand:  Bahut hogaya Sakshi.  Ab main tumhaari ek bhi baat nahi sunoonga.  Tumhe meri baat manna padega.

 

Sakshi:  Bachpan se yehi tho hota aaraha hain papa isme naya kya hain.  Aapke paas time hi kaha tha meri baat sunne ke liye. Subah mere utne se pehle aap ghar se chale jaathe the aur raat ko mere sone ke baad ghar lout the the. Aap apne har decision mujhpe toupthe the aur aaj bhi wohi kar rahe hain.

 

Mr.Anand:  Kyunki main jaanta hoon ki tumhaare liye sahi kya hain aur galat kya hain.  Hamesha dil se nahi socha jata Sakshi kabhi kabaar dimaag se bhi sochna padtha hain.  Vo ladka tumhaare liye teek nahi hain beta.  Accha tumhe tumhaari decision pe itna confidence hain tho ghar bulaavo usse main baat karoonga. Aur haan ek aur baat agar tum iss baar galat nikli tho tumhe meri decision maanni padegi.

 

Sakshi:  Thank you papa.  Aap dekhna vo zaroor aayega aur aapko vo pasand bhi aayega.

 

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Index:

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Absolutely fantastic and fantabulous update... 

Mindblowing... 

I really love the twist in which you have portrayed both the situations... 

Coming to Arjun's part - amazing... kudos... loved the way his situation was reversed..

That inspector!

Damn man!

So his mother is his support... and he loves his mother a lot... 

Coming to Sakshi's situation..

She too is in love with another person... 

THe only similarity being that maybe both are ditched by their lovers...

But one knows and the other does not...

Fantastic yaar... and I liked the fact both the other people's name started with P... 

And the difference being that she shares a very cold relation with her father... 

Really looking forward as to how do dil bandhe ek dori se... 

Good Job... 

Loved it!

Aur haan... fairy thank you sooo much for writing this for me!
Edited by Armagadon - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome update.

Loved it soo much.

The name I attracted towards it just reading it's name.

And then you started with bang!!!!!!!!!!

Arjun is being beaten in police station!!!!

Iss inspector Satya ko to main jaan se mar dungi.  

Uss pooja ki bacchi ke waja se aaj Arjun ka yeh haal hai.

His mother came to police station and bailed him.

She also took promise from him

Skahsi is in love with another man.

But why that moron is offline for one week??

Sakshi's dad seems strict but he has knowledge of the world.

Con soon plisshhh.

I guess Arjun is not a police officer in here..

Eagerly waiting for the next part..

Edited by EashaYousufzai - 9 years ago
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Res /unres 
Different concept dear 
Arjun being torturred in police station us sataya ko toh how dare he beat Arjun 
Sakshi and Arjun have different life's let see how they good thier luck will be for each other 
Cont soon 
Edited by NATURESHIVANI - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting start dear
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing start...
something new...
what the arjun tortured by that inspector😡😡😡
sakshi is in love with someone else...
i had guess somehing...wont tell ...
lets see what happen next...
con.soon...

p.s.at least inform by pm tha u update di...
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Posted: 9 years ago
I Just loved ur comment Eashu. Don't worry Satya ko maine bas ek hi chapter main rakha hain. U get to in the next update hw Arjun n Sakshi's life will be connected. Yes Arjun is not a police officer. Next update main u'll get to knw abt his profession.Edited by Nethravathi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NATURESHIVANI

Res /unres

Different concept dear
Arjun being torturred in police station us sataya ko toh how dare he beat Arjun
Sakshi and Arjun have different life's let see how they good thier luck will be for each other
Cont soon

Thnks Shivi for liking the story. Satya ka hatya kardoongi dnt worry Shivi. Yes their luck will connect them together.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58

amazing start...
something new...
what the arjun tortured by that inspector😡😡😡
sakshi is in love with someone else...
i had guess somehing...wont tell ...
lets see what happen next...
con.soon...

p.s.at least inform by pm tha u update di...

Thnks dear for such a lovely comment. Yes Sakshi is in love with someone but luck plays its role in everyone's life. Haan dnt tell wht u hv guessed. Sorry darling hadbadi main PM karna bhool gayi. Dnt worry meri story ka har update ka PM pehle tujhe bhejoongi.
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice start for a change arjun ko police peet rahi hain ðŸ˜¡
sakshi ka hero purab hain kya isme toh arjun ka kya hoga pehle hi uss pooja #### ne usse dhoka de
pls do pm me also for the rest of the parts 😊