Lovely atory i loved it But why i feel like Aahil is doing all that for a reason and a very important one Maybe he knows that sanam's life will be in danger if she give birth to the baby Anyways waiting for the next part
I can't wait to read more. You have me hooked already! I wonder what will be his reasons for not wanting their baby... Is it his troubled childhood with his own father or something entirely different? Either way, you have me hooked. Sanam's happiness was infectious and her pain was heart felt. Great work!
beautiful start.. although heartbreaking, but I knew that he is not going to be happy, Poor Sanam, I wonder what's the reason for his behavior, hopefully this is connected to his past? Looking forward to next one..
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