MDT SS (6/10) MFEIT - Page 2

Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice track, great start.
Plz update soon.
Posted: 9 years ago
interesting story 
cont.soon
i love all ur ff 's
i enjoy reading them
Posted: 9 years ago
start with separation..missing each other...
thinking raman loves shagun... ok ishu's pblm i got it...

but wht with raman...y s he nt talking
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Nichuss


start with separation..missing each other...
thinking raman loves shagun... ok ishu's pblm i got it...

but wht with raman...y s he nt talking
they consummated .It si big issue as Raman was not in his conscience as trap of Shagun and Ashok.
But Ishita breaks it going there.They both blame themselves for it considering others dont love them.
Raman thinks Ishita hates him for his act and Ishita thinks Raman loves Shagun (actually he tells  it thinking it is Ishita and misfortune Shagun stays there."
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by SAKIV-RAM


they consummated .It si big issue as Raman was not in his conscience as trap of Shagun and Ashok.
But Ishita breaks it going there.They both blame themselves for it considering others dont love them.
Raman thinks Ishita hates him for his act and Ishita thinks Raman loves Shagun (actually he tells  it thinking it is Ishita and misfortune Shagun stays there."

😲ohhh

updt unnamed one... it cliffhanger
Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 2

Scene starts with Raman in school to pickup Ruhi.

Ruhi comes out along with Shravu .

Ruhi "Papa hum bahaar jaayengey naa khaana khaaney?"

Raman "Haa hum bahaar jaa rahen hain."

Then Adi sees Raman and comes running.

Adi "Dad aap yahan?" same time shagun comes.

Raman "Ruhi ko lunch key liyen bahaar ley jaana hain issliyen aaya hun.Tum bhee aaon naa ."

Adi looking at Shagun.

Raman "Main Adi ko chod doonga.Main ussey lunch key liyen ley jaa rahan hun."

Shagun has no other option but to agree.

Ruhi and Adi were happy now  .Adi has changed completely after an incident before few months which changed Raman's life.

Shagun was in life and death situation and Ashok was not ready to help her as it is risk for his survival or planned by him.Adi last hope went for Raman and helped her for Adi's sake.

Now Adi and Shagun are living in Raman's care bur Raman was not inspeaking terms with Shagun and just providing them money for their needs.But Adi is completely changed.He is completely in terms with Raman.

He calls him when ever he need help or want to speak to Raman and comes to Bhalla house when ever bored to play with Ruhi or go outing with Romi and play with his dad.

Adi "Dad hum kahan jaayengey .Main decide karoonga."

Ruhi "Nahen main karoongi."

Adi "Main karoonga."

Raman "Tum donon apnaa jhagadha bandh karo aur bathaon kaha jaana hain."

Adi "Papa bandara road waala restaurant ."

Ruhi "Papa nahee hum Italian restaurant jaayengey."

Adi "Mujhey Italian pasand nahen hain.Mama ko banana nahen aatha."

Ruhi "Papa aur mujhey dono ko Italian pasand hain."

Adi "Theek hain papa wahen jaayengey."

Friendly tuff between brother and sister are inevitable.Adi loves both his parents but he knew they can't be together and he respects Ishita  so he is talking terms to her.

Adi "Dad aapko Italian pasand hain?"

Ruhi "Han mujhey bhee.Ishima ko bhee banana nahen aatha but hum bahaar khaatey hain."

Raman "Theek haintum order karon."

Then Ruhi and Adi order combined and they were whole time quarreling but it was fun for Raman watching them.

But he is missing Ishita then.Raman then gets a call from Ishita.
Raman knew it was for Ruhi but he takes the call.But surprisingly on other side it was Maya.

Maya "Raman sir main Maya bol rahen hun Ishita ke friend."

Raman "Aap Ishita key mobile sey call kyon kar rahen hain."

Maya "Sir Ishita achaanak behosh ho aye hain.Kuch health problem hain."

Raman was shocked and tensed he want to see Ishita immediately.

Raman "Mujhey address bejhiyen main abhee aa rahan hun."

Maya  "Theek hain sir." She then texts a message to Raman.

Raman then tells Adi to take Ruhi to Bhalla house and stay there un til he comes back.

Adi very well knew that Ruhi can't stay even for a minute with Shagun and he has no complaint with it,He is happy that he got his dad's attention regularly.Ruhi and Adi always quarrel for it to prove that their father loves them most.

There on other side Ishita wa layng on bed while some doctor was examining her.

The after few minutes doctor informs Ishita that she is expecting.

Ishita was shocked listening this.She is happy and same time worried on what Raman might think over this child.

Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update
so ishitha is pregnant
cont.soon
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesom yar...pls pm me fr nxt updte...

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