MDT SS (6/10) MFEIT - Page 5

Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Vikas i love all ur stories... 
So if possible can you write a story like Ishitas parents are some other ppl not Mr &Mrs Iyer... Now they want to be close with Ishita then how raman and ishita ll handle the situation...
Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice 😊 wanna see how raman makes a special proposal for Ishu 😃
Posted: 9 years ago
PART 5

Scene starts with Raman getting a call and he wonders who it might be disturbing him in his practice.Thinking it might be important takes the call.

It is from Adi.

Adi "Dad mujhey aapsey kuch urgent baath karnaa hain.Aap mujhey milney aasaktey hain."

Raman "Kyaa huan tum ro kyon rahen hon."

Adi "Main aapko milkar bathadoonga.Aap mujhye mil saktey hain."

Raman "Theek hain kahan aana hain."

Adi "Khanna house aakey mujhey pickup keejiyen."

Raman "Theek hain main aarahan hun."

Raman cuts the call and wonders what could have happened .He goes there to know what happened.

Adi was waiting for him outside.

Adi immediately hugs Raman .

Raman "Kyaa huan?Tum ro kyon rahen hon?Koi problem hain?Uss Ashok ney kuch kahan?"

Adi "Mujhey yahan nahen rehnaa hain.Aap mujhey yaha sey lekey jayiyen."

Raman "Theek hain .Get inside car."

Adi gets inside his car.Raman takes him to restaurant.

Adi "Dad mom teen din sey gaayab hain.Main ney ussey teen din sey nahen dekha aur phone bhee nahen lag rahan hain."

Raman "Kayee bahar gayee hoge aajayegee.Tum tension math lo."

Adi "Dad but  hummesha mujhey phone karkey bathadethee thee.But iss baar nahen kiyaa.Jaroor Ashok uncle ney kuch kiyaa hoga."

Raman "Ashok kyon karega.Pehley kyaa huan bathaon."

Adi "Teen din pehley.Mom aur Ashok key beech mey jhagada huan thaa.Koi finance issue hain insurance key."

Adi "Ashok uncle ko financial problems hain aur use urgently paisey chahiyen they.Aur mama key naam mey properties aur insurance ka use karney chahthey they."

Adi "Mom ko kidnap honey kaa naatak karnaa hain but such mey mom koi problem mey hain."

Adi "Ashok uncle bee kuch madan nahen kar rahen hain .Who business meeting bolkey mujhey avoid kar rahen hain."

Raman "Theek hain main dekhtha hun.Main hun naa tum roon math Shagun ko main tumhaarey saamney rakhoonga."

Raman  "Tumhey ghar nahen lejaa saktha.Tum idhar hee rukho yeh mera hee restaurant hain.Yeh sab log hongey."

Raman calls the manager.

Raman "Yahan koi guest room hain kyaa.Mera beta aj yahen rukhega."

Manager "Hain sir."

Raman "Adi tum iss uncle key saath hee rehnaa .Koi bhee problem hon mujhey phone kardena.Main tumhaarey kaam mey hee jaarahan hun."

Raman then takes aside manager and tells him the recquirements for his next day plan.

Then Raman calls police and informs him about situation.Raman then goes to police station and gets directly involved in the matter.

Ishita calls him but he rejects the call and he reaches home around midnight while Ishita was waiting for him.

Ishita "Aap merey phone katdiyen they.Kyaa huan."

Raman "Chodo yaar ek phone nahen uthaaya issliyen jang suru kar rahen hon."

Ishita "Kyaa Raman main bassa aisey hee pooch rahen thee.Kyaa huan itney late"

Raman thinks about telling about what happened then realizing she will get more tensed diverts the topic.

Then he goes to sleep.

Then next day by afternoon police trace Shagun and arrest few goons who are holding her and it was leading to Ashok.

Then Raman brings Shagun before Adi and it is revealed that Shagun is being used to get insurance money he kept on her for  a business deal against Raman.

Raman "Adi tum donon idhar hee rahon kuch dinon key liyen .Main iss time mey tum donon key liyen koi arrangement karthaa hun."

Raman tells this and leaves outside checking his arrangements for his big night planned for his wife.

Raman checks all the preperations made and satisfied by it then he calls Ishita to  come there by 7'O clock.

Then Raman starts practicing imagining Ishita there and practices various styles.

Then around 6'30 Raman is practicing.

Raman "I don't know kabh aur kaisey but main ney kabhee naheh soch kee yeh aisaas mujhye dubaara hoga."

Raman "Kabh patha nahen once I used to hate you apnaa gusaa tumpar nikaaltha thaa.But main yeh kabhee nahen bhool paonga kee merey zindagee sabsey bade khushiyan tumney dee hain aur tumhaarey wajaha sey hain."

Raman "I never knew I could fall in love second time I love you."

Raman was telling this looking at stage imagining Ishita he din't notice Shagun standing behind him.

Raman is satisfied with this and then gets confident over his plan.Then he notices Shagun behind him.

Raman "Tum yahan kyaa kar rahen hon.Tumhey tumhaarey room mey hoona chahiyen."

Shagun was shocked assuming that I love you was for her.

Raman realized that SHagun is assuming it for her.

Raman "Main tumhey nahen bol rahan hun.Main Ishita key liyen."

Shagun who got jealous tried her brain tricks .

Shagun "Nice preparations but tumhey sach mey lag rahan hain Ishita tumsey pyaar karthee hain."

Raman "It is none of your business.Tumhey merey zindagee mey interfere karney kee jaroori nahen hain.Mujhey tumhaara shakal dekhnaa bhee pasand nahen hain.Bass merey betey kee wajaha sey yahan rehnee dee rahan hun."

Shagun "Raman.I pity you.Tum hummesha sachey dil sey pyaar karthey hon.But doosrey tumsey pyaar karthey hain yaa nahen yeh nahen sochtey hon."

Shagun "Tum Ishita sey pyaar karthey hon lekin Ishita tumey pyaar nahen karthee hain.Usskey liyen tum sirf Ruhi key papa hon."

Shagun "But tumhaara weakness hain.Tumhaara dil dubaara thootega."

Shagun "Ishita will hate you for this.Dekho who yahan nahen  aayegee."

Raman "Ishita jaroor aayege.Aur tumhaarey saamney main saabith karoonga."

Raman calls Ishita but she was not taking his call he assumes her to be driving but Ishita never reached there .

Raman waited for her whole night but Ishita din't come there.

Posted: 9 years ago
suprb twst...pls yar complte twst as soon as poss...no more tragdy draman...its enough in frst 2 parts...
Posted: 9 years ago
I knew that call either would be from adi or shagun..
still they are meddling with Raman's life..

but what happened to Ishita?

nice 1..😊
Posted: 9 years ago
Continue soon... Amazing...
Posted: 9 years ago
Oh oh please dont break poor raman's heart again. I hope there is some strong reason for ishita not.coming there. Please update next one asap.
Posted: 9 years ago
oh... No... Isita must have a valid reason... Looking forward nd pm me
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Nichuss


Wt hapnd to ishu

sorry yaar.All fell in trap.

everything is before you just jumbled .Look carefully you will understand



hint read first chapter again

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
next part you are seriously gonna surprised

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