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MDT SS (6/10) MFEIT - Page 6

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next part you are seriously gonna surprised

i got u...nd i must admit excelntly written...waitng fr ishra rmce nd ishra retrng hme...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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i got u...nd i must admit excelntly written...waitng fr ishra rmce nd ishra retrng hme...

then what is it?
I hope it is good
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Posted: 9 years ago
Verry nice part
Continue soon!!
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Amazingg. Super twist! Loved it! Continuee soon!
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then what is it?
I hope it is good

read frst chaptr...nd ishra propsd each othr...bt restrnt seen is ishu heard saying i love u frm raman thinkng its to be shagun bt raman didnt notice ishu...nd part 3 nd 4 are dicsn of ishra...flash bak y ishu avoidng raman nd cme to camp...
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Posted: 9 years ago
did ishita heard everything??? n thought its for shagun ... dafod I'm feeling bad for Raman poor he hoping so this mu solve soon
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This content was originally posted by: shavi2311

read frst chaptr...nd ishra propsd each othr...bt restrnt seen is ishu heard saying i love u frm raman thinkng its to be shagun bt raman didnt notice ishu...nd part 3 nd 4 are dicsn of ishra...flash bak y ishu avoidng raman nd cme to camp...

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
shagun & her dirty tricks 
cont.soon
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part 6

Scene starts with Raman sitting on hospital bed Ishita was looking at him shocked and surprised hitting her head by her own hands.

Raman "Mainey poorey raath wait kiyaa but Ishita nahen aayee?Mujhwy wajaha nahen patha thaabut uss din sey theek sey baath  bhee nahen kar rahen thee."

Raman "Mujhey pehlee baar Shagun key baath par vishwaas aaney laga.Tum mujhsey pyaar nahen karthee hon.Issliyen nahen aaye.But mujhey phobe karkey bhee batha sakthe hon naa?"

Raman "Kyaa huan Ishita?Tum kyon naheen aaye?"

Ishita "Mathlab who saarey preperations merey liyen they?"

Raman "Abhe hee tumhey poora kahaani bathaaya naa.Fir sey pooch rahen hon?"

Ishita has tears in her eyes.

Maya "Ishita tum kyon nahee gayee thee?"

Ishita "Aaap Shagun ko I love you' nahen boley they.Aap balkee mujhey bolney key liyen practice kar rahen they."

Raman "Han."

Ishita "Raman main wahan aaye thee.Mainey aapkey baath  bhee sunee thee.But mujhey laga aap Shagun ko bol rahen they."

Raman shell shocked "What?"

Ishita "Raman aapney mujhey 7 O' clock bulaaye they .Main jaldee free hogayee tho main 6:30 ko hee pahunch gayee thee aur mainey sunlee.Mujhye laga aap Shagun sey patchup kar rahen hon.Merey plan lekar.Issliyen Raman mujhey nahen patha main  kyaa soch rahen thee."

Ishita "Raman I don't know whether I was hurt or angry.Mujhey lagaa aapney Shagun sey patchup karney key liyen aapney mujhey istamaal kiya."

Raman "Kissney kahan tumhey itnaa zaldee aaney key liyen."

Ishita was silent.

Raman "Time jyaada hain tho kuch shopping karo but patha hain.Koi aur kaam nahen thaa kyaa."

Ishita smiling seeing Raman's anger now.She is scolding herself for what she assumed.

Ishita "Mujhey kya patha thaa .Aap pehley bathaay hotha tho sab kuch theek hotha."

Raman "Surprise naam kee cheez ek hothe hain.Tumney mera poora plan kaa band bajadhee aur mujhey Shagun key saath fasadiya."

Ishita "Mainey nahen aapney khud apney pair par khuladee marlee"

Raman "Han tumsey shaadi karkey.Ek seedhe see bath samajh nahen payee"

Raman "Mainey bola 7'o clock aana hain.late hoga tho chalega but jaldee aakar tumney merey poorey plan kharaab kar dee."

Maya "Tum donon waapas suru math hon.Pehley iss liyen jhagad rahen they kee dossrey aapsey pyaar aneh  karthey jab aapko patha chalgaya fir sey doosra jhagada suru."

Maya "Yaar abh tho tum donon shaanth ho jaon."

Maya "Ramanjee aap bhee.Ishita ko propose karney poora  restaurant khareed lee"

Raman looking embraced.Ishita shy.

Raman trying to change the topic.

Raman "Abh saaman baandhloo ghar jaana hain."

Ishita "Raman topic divert math keejiyen."

Raman "kyaa ho gaya naa abh uss baarey mey kyaa baath karnaa"

Maya "Restaurent poora chahiyen thee."

Raman "Kissko patha yeh madraasan wahan drama create kiyaa tho.Sab log key saamney.Issliyen Akeley key liyen plan kiyaa thaa.Kee koi drama nahen dekhey.Aur yaaadey bhee tho hongey." Looking at Ishita.

Raman "But madam ney screen key peechey drama create kardee"

Ishita "Mainey kuch nahen kiyaa galathee aapkee thee."

Raman "Mera"

Shagun "Sabkey saamney hotha tho shaayad mujhye galath faimey nahen huin hothee aapney Akeley plan banaakar sab kuch aapkey wajaha sey hain."

Ishita "Aaap mujhey pehley hee bathaya hotha Adi aur Shagun key baarey mey tho bhee koi problem nahen huin hothee."

Raman "Kyaa main tumhey undonon key baarey mey bathaakar tumhaara mahaanataha ka mode on hogaya hotha tho mera plan chaupath."

Ishita "Abh kyaa mila aapko .wohin naa ."

Maya "God.Tum log kaisey hon yaar.Ek doosrey sey itnaa pyaar karthey hon aur jhagada wiasiey kar rahen hon kee jang ladrahen hon."

Maya "Abh bhooljao uss baath ko."

Maya "Ishita  tumhey kasiey laga .Jabh aaj tumhey patah chala kee Raman ney yeh sab kuch tumhaarey liyen kiyaa."

Ishita blushing gives a sideward hug to Raman.

Ishita "Jitnaa guss uss din aaya thaa aappar kee merey idea aap Shagun ko impress karney use kiya.Usey bahuth jyaada aaj aaya khudh par jaldee jaaney key liyen."

Ishita "Raman I am sorry.I love you.Mainey aapkey poorey plan kharab kardee."

Raman smiles kissing her over her head.

Raman "Maaf kardiyan"

Maya "Wha wha Ishita."

Then they hear the siren ringing.

Maya "Packup ho rahan hain.Theek hain tum log jaon "

Ishita "Tum bhee aon naa.Tum Akeley kyaa karogi.Tum tho mujhye assist kar rahen thee na."

Maya "Han but "

Raman "Mujhey koi problem nahen ."

Then after few minutes they were  in car.

Ishita was happy and blushing sitting beside Raman.

Ishita "Aapney Ruhi ko bathaaya."

Raman "Ghar mey sabko surprise dengey.Party rakhoonga."

Raman "Sab log .Yaaney sab log jisseney tumhey apney kamzori kaa yaad dilayan.Subbu,Shagun.sab log aayengey.Kehnaa hoga kee aisey party kabhee nahen dekha."

Raman has tears in her eyes telling this.He never reminded about this to Ishita.But seeing her crying over this made Raman more sad and angry but he never let it out and hid it beneath his taunts for her.

Ishita hold his hand seeing tears in her eyes.

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Posted: 9 years ago
tell me truly .
How many of you are shocked  and surprised.

How many of you think that I was creating  a new tiff.
Please answer yaar.
The answer justifies whether I did what I wanted to correctly.
I was able to deceive you to think that way.(exactly opp to what is actually happening)