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Arshi SS: Rabbe Mere... Kya hai Teri Marzi (Sorry Note page 26)

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Posted: 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago

INDEX 

Prologue... Up
 
 
TEASER => Page-6
 
 Part - 1 - Page 10
 

Part -2 - Page- 17

 
PS: Add account on 5th Post for PMs😊
Edited by jas0308 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hina

yay

Unres-

Ya, your friends should scold you for not resting but we understand sweetheart..Jo tuje accha lage wo kr:*

Wow...Intense start and told you I love these type of angst stories and m already in love with it with just reading a prologue!

Started off as very very HOT encounter but ended on a painful note...Neverthless i LOVED it!

What happened between them that they're this aloof to eachother?

Eager to know..

Would LOOOVE to read more;)

Love you jassi:*

P.S. I am sure you gonna rock it!
Edited by Hina69 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Firstly Congrats on ur new SS Jas!!!!🥳
I am very happy that u started writing again!!!🤗

The Prologue is very interesting..It started showing Arshi being so close to each other physically..and end showing emotionally, it was the opposite..
It was very well-written..I love the mystery part of it..when u read it..U want to know more..what happened between them etc..
And I love these type of stories..hate love ones..😳
Overall very nice start..My favorite was the last part - 
''If only ...till Kaash main tumse mohabat kar pata khushi''❤️

It was awesome..Love it..do continue soon!!!!🤗


Edited by jtmbarun - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
oky tht was hot shot start!!...😉
arnav here holding up due to smthing!!...hope nthing serious!!...
felt bad for khushi!!...
waiting eagarly for story to move forward!!...
p.s.i dnt mind u doing anything...bt jst dnt tire urself!!...take care bas!!...😳
Edited by nirmal1992 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

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Thank you😊
Edited by jasPM - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear, all the best for ur second work...great start... Love the theme... Pm me too dear, and get well soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
You got my attention with the title it self..
Prologue defiantly suited the title..
I'll wait for the story to unfold..
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Pless do PM 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting start! Very gripping!
Can't wait to read more..
Thanks for recommending Sara!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting 
Pls continue it soon