Firstly Congrats on ur new SS Jas!!!!🥳I am very happy that u started writing again!!!🤗
The Prologue is very interesting..It started showing Arshi being so close to each other physically..and end showing emotionally, it was the opposite..
It was very well-written..I love the mystery part of it..when u read it..U want to know more..what happened between them etc..
And I love these type of stories..hate love ones..😳
Overall very nice start..My favorite was the last part -
''If only ...till Kaash main tumse mohabat kar pata khushi''❤️
It was awesome..Love it..do continue soon!!!!🤗
Edited by jtmbarun - 9 years ago
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