Arshi SS: Rabbe Mere... Kya hai Teri Marzi (Sorry Note page 26) - Page 5

Posted: 9 years ago
Nice prologue.
It started with their love making and at the end we got to see the emotional side too.
So things are not good between them seems like. But are they married?
Loved how you used the "kaash mein tumse nafrat kar paati" and "kaas mein tmse mohabbt kar paata" phrase.
Waiting to read more already.
Posted: 9 years ago
What the?
They were bestfriends? :o and now are married.
If they were once besties then why are things so complicated between them now?
The story with unfold with the coming chapters i suppose.
Waiting to read more.
Continue soon
Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting starting!!!
Love to read further chapters.
Posted: 9 years ago
Very intresting prolouge...do update soon!!
Posted: 9 years ago
heee!!...besties!!!!...๐Ÿ˜•
yeh kya ho rha hai!!!...waiting...
Posted: 9 years ago
Voh dono friends bhi hai !!! 
OMG itna bada twist 
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice teaser.

They were happy.. They are married now? Then whats the matter with Arnav?
Too many questions ๐Ÿ˜•

Update soon ๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 9 years ago
sweet teasers.
๐Ÿ˜• about teasers.
tf sharing.
Edited by zebali - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
I found the teaser cute...
And prologue is hot...
Plz do pm me


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