Nice prologue. It started with their love making and at the end we got to see the emotional side too. So things are not good between them seems like. But are they married? Loved how you used the "kaash mein tumse nafrat kar paati" and "kaas mein tmse mohabbt kar paata" phrase. Waiting to read more already.
What the? They were bestfriends? :o and now are married. If they were once besties then why are things so complicated between them now? The story with unfold with the coming chapters i suppose. Waiting to read more. Continue soon