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Nice teaser and ya was lil confusing... Update soon...
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Originally posted by: Hina69Hina
yay
Unres-
Ya, your friends should scold you for not resting but we understand sweetheart..Jo tuje accha lage wo kr:*
Wow...Intense start and told you I love these type of angst stories and m already in love with it with just reading a prologue!
Started off as very very HOT encounter but ended on a painful note...Neverthless i LOVED it!
What happened between them that they're this aloof to eachother?
Eager to know..
Would LOOOVE to read more;)
Love you jassi:*
P.S. I am sure you gonna rock it!
Originally posted by: jtmbarunFirstly Congrats on ur new SS Jas!!!!🥳
I am very happy that u started writing again!!!🤗The Prologue is very interesting..It started showing Arshi being so close to each other physically..and end showing emotionally, it was the opposite..It was very well-written..I love the mystery part of it..when u read it..U want to know more..what happened between them etc..And I love these type of stories..hate love ones..Overall very nice start..My favorite was the last part -''If only ...till Kaash main tumse mohabat kar pata khushi''❤️It was awesome..Love it..do continue soon!!!!🤗
Originally posted by: nirmal1992oky tht was hot shot start!!...😉
arnav here holding up due to smthing!!...hope nthing serious!!...felt bad for khushi!!...waiting eagarly for story to move forward!!...p.s.i dnt mind u doing anything...bt jst dnt tire urself!!...take care bas!!...
Thank you so much yaar 🤗 thanks a ton for support... I will surely PM you😊Originally posted by: Angellic_dollHey dear, all the best for ur second work...great start... Love the theme... Pm me too dear, and get well soon
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Originally posted by: Mahi1219Interesting
Originally posted by: gmskYou got my attention with the title it self..
Prologue defiantly suited the title..I'll wait for the story to unfold..Sending a buddy reqPless do PM
Originally posted by: Sanz.😳
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Thanks Dear for the comment 🤗Originally posted by: Nish_alishaInteresting start! Very gripping!
Can't wait to read more..
Thanks for recommending Sara!
Originally posted by: Jaan_ArshiSeem very interesting...
Originally posted by: IsleOfCaprisimply superb
loved itb
Originally posted by: PayaashWonderful !!!
It is just amazing ..
Pls do pm me ...
I will buddy u , promise to comment every time u update
Originally posted by: RizArshiVery intriguing. So both of them love each other but there is something that's stopping Arnav from accepting his feelings. I hope its nothing serious and that its just a misunderstanding. Please please don't let this thing be too serious or heart breaking 😳
Jassi ji you better take it easy. Don't exert yourself trying to update regularly. Write and update only when you feel like.
Originally posted by: nishu_shornaJassiii... How am I supposed to wait after THIS prologue... No matter how short, this is gonna be painful... Such a intense beginning... So close physically, yet emotionally they're miles away... Par kyun... What happened... What's going on now... Can't wait enough to know... I'm already in love with this Jas... Love you for this...
Originally posted by: arsnehjas hugs
main abhi res kar rai bt promise will unres asap
Originally posted by: AALUSLOLWAjassiwa ...
Originally posted by: Suchi.RInteresting one.. cant wait to read more
Thank you so much di, for your supportOriginally posted by: DivyahetMeri Jassi...
Will be here only but tomorrow. 😊
lovely and garmagaram start 😆 but why "Kash me tumse mahobat kat pata ?" ARS aur misunderstanding na ho yeh namumkin he.😆
Jassi my Jugani..first of all take care of yourself okay.
I would love to read and can't wait but that doesn't mean that you put your health aside and keep writing or typing...
SS bole toh kuchh 9 se 10 updates ki ummid kar sakte he na?
thanks for the pm.
lots of love hugs and my special treat Kisses..😳😆
Originally posted by: oKBSoOK that was a pretty good concept, after reading the 1st line I thought
Again Arnav is some Casanova
But aha!!! he does have feeling, I hope and thing they are married, I thought so
Update soon
Originally posted by: nadiafarjanainteresting start
Originally posted by: piaviviandsenaInteresting prolouge.
Originally posted by: piaviviandsenaThax fr pm.
yes di, they are married... how and what happen, you will get to know soon😉😆Originally posted by: aquagalJassi 🤗
Welcome back!!! I missed you so much. But yes take rest and at the same time do what you feel like doing. 😊
Prologue was interesting. It had the physical attraction, love, longing and pain. In short everything.
Khushi loves Arnav, Arnav loves her but still he is holding back his true emotions. There has to be a reason obviously and I like this little mystery. Looks like they're married here (given the first half). Would wait for you to share his reasons of hiding his emotions behind a mask.
Originally posted by: shipra.aquaAye aye captain...
So u r back...,
& u know what u r back with a bang... 😉 😛
Loved the teaser, will be eagerly waiting for d update..,
Originally posted by: rashikaGreat prologue my dear. Hope u get better soon.
Originally posted by: opsyellow😡
Originally posted by: SkiranRes
UnRes
Khushi's love for Arnav has no bounds, she is fine even when he doesn't acknowledge his feelings to her inspite of feeling sad. Seems like there is mystery involved in Arnav's thinking of 'kaash mein tumse mohabbat karpaata..'
Good start Jas 👍🏼
Originally posted by: niya55Awesome start
Originally posted by: laksh65interesting prologue
Originally posted by: -.serendipity.-Congrats on your new story! This sounds like it will most definitely be a pleasure to read. Do continue soon and thanks for the pm!
Originally posted by: zebaliit was such a marvelous concept dear.
sound is v v interesting and deep.lovely written.can u pm me pls.tfs.
Originally posted by: LOLWAsAaluReswa... will be back soon
Originally posted by: Meerah14why arnav is holding himself from khushi...
awesome prologue.. continue soon
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