Arshi SS: Rabbe Mere... Kya hai Teri Marzi (Sorry Note page 26) - Page 7

Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by crazy_sweeto


Tearse was nice yet confusing, but please update 1st chapter soon.
Thanks πŸ€—
 
Originally posted by RizArshi


Bada teasing teaser tha πŸ˜› Jassi the lassi girl iska matlab he cares too for Khushi. Acchi baat hai
 
 
Don't Go sarcastic on meπŸ˜†πŸ˜† yes he cares for her!! baaki.. updates ke saathTongue
thanku πŸ€—
 
 
Originally posted by nishu_shorna


Yeh dono best buddies hain... Toh phir the distance u showed between them in prologue, woh kaise... How have they reached to that point... Jaldi se update kar Jassi... cant wait...
 
yes, Nish... they were best friends... and now its thei journeyTongue waitingwa karo nishuu
thanks πŸ€—
 
 
Originally posted by IsleOfCapri


simply brilliant
loved it\
 
 
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Originally posted by Sarun.Zayaholic


awesome..i love this..
 
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Originally posted by AzraZaidi



Awesome prologue and teaser
eagerly w8ing for update
 
Thanks Azra πŸ€—
 
Originally posted by Divyahet


Jassi meri Jugani...
Beautiful teaser...
Waiting for the whole update...
Take care ...
Lots n lots of love.
 
Thanks di.. now I am nervousπŸ˜†
 
love you :-*
 
Originally posted by Rohinid


Awesome start.
cont soon
 
 
Thanks πŸ€—
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by broken.silence


Nice prologue.
It started with their love making and at the end we got to see the emotional side too.
So things are not good between them seems like. But are they married?
Loved how you used the "kaash mein tumse nafrat kar paati" and "kaas mein tmse mohabbt kar paata" phrase.
Waiting to read more already.
Thanks a ton dear for the comment πŸ€—
yes they are married...
 
Originally posted by broken.silence


What the?
They were bestfriends? :o and now are married.
If they were once besties then why are things so complicated between them now?
The story with unfold with the coming chapters i suppose.
Waiting to read more.
Continue soon
 
yes, upcoming chapters will fold everything... and I am trying to unfold all mysteries... so you all don't get confuse😊
thanks for the comments πŸ€—
 
Originally posted by -BROKEN_ANGEL-


Interesting starting!!!
Love to read further chapters.
 
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Originally posted by sarunsashasingh


Very intresting prolouge...do update soon!!
 
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Originally posted by nirmal1992


heee!!...besties!!!!...πŸ˜•
yeh kya ho rha hai!!!...waiting...
 
haha, yes kuku... u will know it soon :-*
 
Thanks πŸ€—
 
 
Originally posted by Payaash


Voh dono friends bhi hai !!! 
OMG itna bada twist 
 
haha, yes they were friends!!! πŸ˜† loved your reactionπŸ˜†
thank you so much for the comment dear!
 
Originally posted by Skiran


Nice teaser.

They were happy.. They are married now? Then whats the matter with Arnav?
Too many questions πŸ˜•

Update soon 😊
 
your questions will get answered will upcoming updates di.. do not worryπŸ˜›
Thanks di πŸ€—
 
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by piyaarshi


I found the teaser cute...
And prologue is hot...
Plz do pm me
thanks πŸ€—
 
 
Originally posted by Angellic_doll


Nice teaser and ya was lil confusing... Update soon...

************************************
Thanks.. your confusion will clear soon😊 πŸ€—
 
 
Originally posted by sakshiarshifan


Interesting
Nice teaser
Waiting for update
Thanks Dear πŸ€—
 
Originally posted by ashnitaa


I liked the concept.
update soon.
please pm me.
 
Thanks πŸ€—
 
Originally posted by Nish_alisha


Awesome teaser! Looking forward for the update! Hope their past gets revealed soon!
 
it will😊
thanks for the comment and support dar πŸ€—
Posted: 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
Add this account for the PM's
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Posted: 9 years ago

NOTE:

 
1. Silent readers, I don't have problem in PM'ng you... I know there'll be a reason for you not commenting, I understand that! But please atleast like' I would appreciate that a lot!

 

2. I will start PM'ing From JasPM account as soon as I'll turn Groupbie.. thanks for understanding!!

 
3. I've replied to all you comments, pleasec cheack page 9-10, if I missed anyone's.. I am sorry, it was not intentional at ALL 

Love you all!!

Edited by jas0308 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. 
Loved it. 

Posted: 9 years ago
Oye meri lassi πŸ€—
sweet update..
I enjoyed their beautiful past as BF..
eager to know what happened between them that caused this pain ?
thanks for the pm,
waiting for the next part.πŸ€—
Edited by Divyahet - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice story ... :D itz confusing... I would love to read more of this...


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