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This content was originally posted by: farz_parachute

Kheer.




I want kheer!

Edited by sageflower7 - 9 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Dhanesh27

Whoa second page for this thread... Not my best moment. :(

Hello sexy individuals.😉

Farz you gorgeous girl I love the banner! I even started concocting my own idea with the one picture 😆

And ladies and gentlemen after what feels like 500 PM's we are here!!! Sorry I couldn't reply to all of them, I have three tests this week. In other words I'm screwed😆 But I promise to make time for this and for ya'll.

Love you all naughty nine, and thanks Anisa once again for making me part of this. My aorta is working In over drive with excitement that it's finally happening! 

Xx

Res'd for part one.

I saw the chapter after I posted my comment 😆 Curse my ill fate :/😆

Unres! 

Is it too late to back out? I mean I'm pretty much at the tail end of things with 7 genius minds before me!  I suddenly feel the need to check my face and head because what have I gotten myself into? Ridiculously incompetent kinda sums up what I'm thinking of me right now 😆

This was mind blowing, you had me at chocolate souffl! I mean yes yes yes! Their inner turmoil and feelings. Fighting down their memories. Oh my hotness! Those flashbacks! It's was just a snippet and yet still so consuming! You left it at F*ck! And all I'm thinking right now is Who's at that door?! 

I can just tell I'm gonna have dreams about this, cos I'm crazy and this usually happens when I get to involved and the suspense kills me so my mind does it's own thing 😆. 

This chapter is what we in SA call "boss" take a bow pretty girl.😳

:* 

Edited by sageflower7 - 9 years ago

You guys. Kill me now. I don't even know where to start. Like I am on the 4th page alreadyyy.. I am so embarassed right now. Even Aaloo got a spot before me 😆😆 *no hard feelings Aaloo* 😆

I mean like really it feels really bad you have been involved in something with so many others and when that something finally appears you disappear like 😕

I am really so so sorry, for not replying to any PMs. I was like really busy today! My internship is screwing me up and I had to prepare for a Moot Court along with one already today!! I came only in the evening and now I have logged in here to see..oh well..everything is already been said and done sigh!

So first things first. Oh well. I haven't said first things first actually 😕😆 I am lame I know please guys forgive me. I apologise. Like Aahil said "ghutno ke bal, hath jodkar, naak ragadkar' I am ready to do all that OKAY? Just give me Aahil in front of me ;) 😆

I am so sorry again for all this, I don't know what just happened to me. Maybe after reading the first part I just got freaked out so much. Oh no no maybe after seeing the banner! Oh maybe realising that THIS IS FINALLY HAPPENING! 😲

I mean the banner!! Farruu! OH GOODNESS!! My #4. You. What a bloody friggin' banner that was!! I mean. GORGEOUS!! How intense that looked!! I swear I swore seeing that! No trust me 😆 Super brilliant! Like brilliance all over the place, bursting with brilliance, or any synonym of that, I suck at vocab 😆

Oh which reminds me of the first part of the story.

...
!!!
?!?!?

Can I just drop my jaw again for that #$#$%%# title Sarru gave?!! I mean. I don't even know. What. What would I do now?

Ani!!! OH MY EFFING GOD!!! Yeah yeah I am back to these 😆 I can't resist saying these. Like these just complete me.
WHAT EVEN WAS THAT?!! I am feeling so complex after reading this, I already had so much reservations about this. How would I cope up with all this excellence you have written in the first part?! Adding to that, the next one is Myhrahh darling before me. And now I might have panic attacks.
Dhannu babe, I am on the same page with you on that of thinking of backing out 😆 I don't even know how to carry the legacy now which Ani has started. Anisa! You are love! You so immensely awesomely talented girl. And a huge thank you for this amazingly awesome idea you gave, and included me in this!!

And the part?! Oh this was such a cracker of a part. A misunderstanding has already set up a home in it and it felt so painstakingly beautiful to read such intensity in their flashbacks. I mean. Only the memories are so powerful for these both. And how you wrote it!! Goodness!!

That imagination of Sanam falling in Aahil's arms and that one flashback of their session that they had. It was enough for me to get all heated up in the insides. 😆
And you say, you can't write the hot sex stuff??! Dude. If this is what you write when you can't, then I am okay with the fact that you "can't" 😆 JUST IMAGINE. If you COULD!! 😲😆
This is so much hotter than the actual sex stuff, more like more orgasmic and foreplay-thing ;) 😆

And this is just the flashback. Wonder what would be the present. The first part only gave me chills. How I could survive after reading second and then to actually write the 3rd!! 😆

Oh, this is such a long comment!!

This content was originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

You guys. Kill me now. I don't even know where to start. Like I am on the 4th page alreadyyy.. I am so embarassed right now. Even Aaloo got a spot before me 😆😆 *no hard feelings Aaloo* 😆

I mean like really it feels really bad you have been involved in something with so many others and when that something finally appears you disappear like 😕

I am really so so sorry, for not replying to any PMs. I was like really busy today! My internship is screwing me up and I had to prepare for a Moot Court along with one already today!! I came only in the evening and now I have logged in here to see..oh well..everything is already been said and done sigh!

So first things first. Oh well. I haven't said first things first actually 😕😆 I am lame I know please guys forgive me. I apologise. Like Aahil said "ghutno ke bal, hath jodkar, naak ragadkar' I am ready to do all that OKAY? Just give me Aahil in front of me ;) 😆

I am so sorry again for all this, I don't know what just happened to me. Maybe after reading the first part I just got freaked out so much. Oh no no maybe after seeing the banner! Oh maybe realising that THIS IS FINALLY HAPPENING! 😲

I mean the banner!! Farruu! OH GOODNESS!! My #4. You. What a bloody friggin' banner that was!! I mean. GORGEOUS!! How intense that looked!! I swear I swore seeing that! No trust me 😆 Super brilliant! Like brilliance all over the place, bursting with brilliance, or any synonym of that, I suck at vocab 😆

Oh which reminds me of the first part of the story.

...
!!!
?!?!?

Can I just drop my jaw again for that #$#$%%# title Sarru gave?!! I mean. I don't even know. What. What would I do now?

Ani!!! OH MY EFFING GOD!!! Yeah yeah I am back to these 😆 I can't resist saying these. Like these just complete me.
WHAT EVEN WAS THAT?!! I am feeling so complex after reading this, I already had so much reservations about this. How would I cope up with all this excellence you have written in the first part?! Adding to that, the next one is Myhrahh darling before me. And now I might have panic attacks.
Dhannu babe, I am on the same page with you on that of thinking of backing out 😆 I don't even know how to carry the legacy now which Ani has started. Anisa! You are love! You so immensely awesomely talented girl. And a huge thank you for this amazingly awesome idea you gave, and included me in this!!

And the part?! Oh this was such a cracker of a part. A misunderstanding has already set up a home in it and it felt so painstakingly beautiful to read such intensity in their flashbacks. I mean. Only the memories are so powerful for these both. And how you wrote it!! Goodness!!

That imagination of Sanam falling in Aahil's arms and that one flashback of their session that they had. It was enough for me to get all heated up in the insides. 😆
And you say, you can't write the hot sex stuff??! Dude. If this is what you write when you can't, then I am okay with the fact that you "can't" 😆 JUST IMAGINE. If you COULD!! 😲😆
This is so much hotter than the actual sex stuff, more like more orgasmic and foreplay-thing ;) 😆

And this is just the flashback. Wonder what would be the present. The first part only gave me chills. How I could survive after reading second and then to actually write the 3rd!! 😆

Oh, this is such a long comment!!

f**k.
Damn its unfair.. Can't express my feelings perfectly.. Hehe
The update was awesome.. So Billi-Bitch snapped.. Uff.. Hate her!! Aahil does not know.. Hope he gets to.. Soon..
Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Wowiee!!

First of all cheers to all you brilliant writers.

Hating the one you love?!?!?!?
 Damn!! Damn!!! Anisa darling. You killed me. Wohhh!! What a kick off start to the story. Absolutely brilliant. :)
 They are confused...confused by their sudden bouts of love and hatred welling inside their heart. They are drawn together despite the tragic past they share wondering who truly was the monster between them. Love, love it. 🤗

Faruuu sweetheart. Banner is awesome. Perfectly made by you. Absolutely love it. 🤗 :*

After reading this part am gonna go and hide in some cave or whatever and come out when something comes up in my oh-so-pathetic mind. 😆