ArAkshi FF: Tere Ishq Mein part 6 Pg(22) updated! - Page 9

Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by veenisha


woow superb update yaar loved it :D
thank u
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by EashaYousufzai


Awesome update.
Loved it very much.
It was so intense and full of mystery.
Why Arjun and Rathod reacted like that seeing Sakshi?
And who is Naina?
Sakshi and Shree besite!!
It's going too good.
Please con soonz..
thanks eash api
will continue soon😊
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by _Nikita_


Awwwsssmmm Part
Loved it very much...
Supperbbb...
Loved Arakshi met...
Arjun's eyes were wet when he saw Sakshi... Why...????
Why Sam n Arjun calling Sakshi Naina...??? Who is She...????
Cont Sooon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM
thank u so much😳
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Nethravathi


Nice update. Sakshi's scooty raaste main karaab hogayi aur Arjun ki SUV se takraagayi

Arjun is shocked seeing Sakshi. Naina kaun hain aur Arjun itna shocked kyun hain.

Sam also shocked seeing Sakshi. Precap is so cute. Sakshi abt to fall n Arjun preventing her frm falling
thanks dear😃
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by NainaSM


Ahaaannn super start 
who is naina ?
plzzz naina ko arjun ya sam ki bahan maat banana 
dead wife bana dogi to bhi chalega
awesome part
continue soon 
thanks..
well who is naina will be reveal soon...
and no dont worry naina will not by arjun's or sam's sis etc Lol and she's also not wife of anyone rofl🤣

Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Arakshiya_58


ch:2
awsssmmm chappy...
loved it...
their first met was superbbb...
why arjun sam call her naina.????
shree sakki besties ...nice one...
cute precap..b.
con.sooonnn...

thanks dear...
will gonna cont soon😊
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by sisodia_shefali


nice update
arjun sakshi ki pehli mulakat toh but interesting thi 😊
but who is this naina and  why both arjun and sam were shocked to see her
precap was interesting sakshi in arjun's arms 😉
thank u dear...😊
jald hi pata chal jayega who is naina ðŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by sweetpari4u97


awesome story.
just read it.
loved it.
thanks😊
Posted: 9 years ago
Hey ramii...
so sorry for being late on update i just read the part now and i must say it was awesome yaar!
Loved it.
but like others mine is also the same question. who is naina?
plz reveal the mystery soon 
Posted: 9 years ago

Hello everyone..how are u all doing? hope everything is fine. and sorry for being so late on update actually was very busy in study and did'nt got time write up. but as i got time i wrote up!

So here is a short update...do read and tell me how was it!

 
 
 
 
Chapter 3

in the Crime scene ETF officers + Police officers was inversigating the whole house. Chottu and sakshi were investigating near the dinning way. Suddenly chottu's eyes move's on the Fruit's basket.

 
 
He explained His heart not to eat while on Duty but he could'nt stop him for long...and he steps forward the dinning table and pick the banana and started eating.
 
 
 

Arjun was still in bathroom where suddenly his eyes move on a broken teeth. and a bear bottle from there. he came out and show these two clues to the Team.

 
 
"rathore look at this broke teeth ad bottle of bear" said arjun

"From where do you find these rawte" asked rathore

"I found it in the dirty bathoom" replied arjun.

" Ho na ho ye toota hua daant (Teeth) uss killer ka hai jiss ne victim ko maara hai" said rathore.

 
 
"Right...aur ye khaali bear ki bottle...shayed victim ki ho. Aisha isse bhi analysis ke liye bhejo" said arjun. "Right Sir" said aisha and move...
 
 
 

Arjun saw chottu eating banana. Sakshi saw that arjun is glaring chottu she wanted to call him but forget his name. for a while she was busy in thinking his name and finally call him " Chottu" but he did'nt listen as he was busy in eating.. she again repeat his name. he listen her whisper and look at him saying "what?". she move her head and say him to look forward. he move his eyes forward and stop bitting his mouth and though that banana peel down,he smile fake and continue doing his work.

 
 
After sometime arjun went to dinning hall where there sakshi checking the foot print's she fount on the floor . Arjun was moving forward while sakshi stand up and walk while looking here and there...suddenly she step's her feet on banana's peel arjun saw her falling...he move ahead to save her..and she fell in his arms...
 
 
 

sakshi look in his eyes with a little smile on her lips and arjun too look in her eyes...both had an eyelock for some moment's then suddenly he got flashback of a girl which look likes sakshi (in fact sakshi look's like her). and someone shoot's her...she fell down in pain when arjun screams naina..." his eyes became red of anger and fill with tears after that flashback. he leave sakshi (She fell down on the floor and hurt her back) and he move forward.

 
 
"Iss aadmi ki aakhir problem kya hai?...ye acha hai ya acha ban-ne ka natak kerta hai. pehle girny se bachata hai aur fir...khud ki gira deta hai"..ouch..Mummy...kitni zorr ki lagi hai" said sakshi while making faces...
 
 
 

They come out from the villa and there victim's younger brother asked then if they have solved the case or not. arjun noticed that he have losted his one teeth but he ignored."ap ko kisi pr shaq hai"? asked rathore... "Nahi sir..bade bhaiya thy hi itna ache dil ke aur neek insaan. bhala un ki dushmani kis ke saath ho skti hai jabke unka koi dushman hai hi nahi"..he replied while crying.Rathore convince him that they are trying there best he have not to worry..

 
 
 
At ETF's Headquarter's
 
 
 

all were sitting in the conference room. shree enter' and said " Sir forhesic lab se report's aa gayi hain...Victim ki death raat 12 se 1 baje ke darmiyaan sar (head) per kisi bhaari cheez ke saath vaar kerne se hui hai... aur daant bear ki bottle ka dhaakkan kholte hue toota hai...aur ittefaq dekho..us bottle per victim ke lips ke ilawa kisi aur ke lips ke nishan bhi hain"

 
 
 
"Ho sakta hai ke wo lips ke nishan killer ke hoon"...said aisha..

rathore: to iss ka matlab ,mera shak theek that wo toota hua daant killer ka tha.

 
 
"right sir...ek aur interesting baat pata chali hai" said shree..."Kya?" Asked arjun."wo bear ki bottle uss ghar ke near ek mini market se kharidi gayi thi" said shree...
 
 
 

" To phir intezaar kis baat ka hai? let's go to that Mini Market" said arjun. Everyone left behind him...

 
 
They reach to that Generl Store and enter inside. the shopkeeper got worried seing them there.
 
 
 

sakshi show him the bottle and asked " kya ye bottle ap hi ki dukan se gayi hai?".he took to bottle and had a look on it " Ji haan...ye bottle yehi se gayi hai" said the shopkeeper

"Ye aap ka ek daant kahan hai?" Asked Chottu...
 
 
 
 

"Arry ye to bachpan se hi aise hai, jab mein chota tha to school mein khelte waqt toot gaya...lekin ye baat ap kyun pooch rahe hain?" Asked shopkeeper..

"kuch nahi bs aise hai...kya ap hume bata sakty hain ke ye bottle kab aur kis ne kharidi thi?" asked rathore..
"dekhiye yaha din bhar mein na jane kitne log ye bottle le ker jaate hain..iss liye ye batana na mumkin hai"said the shopkeeper. "friday ki night 12 se 1 baje ek death hui hai aur us maut ka iss bottle se bohat bada taluq hai..." Said arjun angrily to the shopkeeper.

"Haan...yaad aaya...waise to meri dukaan raat 12 baje tak khuli rehti hai lekin raat 11 baje ek aadmi aaya tha aur wo ek bear ki bottle le ker gaya tha"..

"Kya ap humein us ka hooliya bata sakty hain?" asked aisha...

 
 
 
 
shopkeeper told them that he had worn a (vig) on his head and he had (mooch) and he have also lost his one teeth. the scetch he told them..they understand who he was.. arjun hurridley ask them to go to victim's younger bro's house.they reach there and come to know that he was missing.

"Damn it"said rathore while hitting the wall...

 
 
 
"sir...ho sakta hai wo iss shehar se bhagne ki koshish kare...humein chaaro taraf nakabandi laga deni chahiye" said sakshi"Right"said rathore and call police. At evening in the etf Conference room they were re-discussing the case where rathore got a call,he pick it and come to know that they have arrested victim's younger brother.
 
 
rathore hurry to go there with team. After reaching there they asked him the reason for killing his elder brother while he was so generous and wisdom.

"Generous?huh...Your mistake...he was not generous...uss ne hamesha mujhe mere hisse se kam diya...hamesha mujhe neecha dikhana chaha..hamesha mera haq mujh se cheena aur uss din...uss din uss ne 70% property apne naam karwa li aur jab mene uss se apne haq ke liye deemand ki..toh us ne mujhe dhaake maar ker ghar se bahar nikal diya...iss liye mene socha ke agar ye sb mera nahi ho sakta..to uss ka bhi nahi ho sakta...iss liye raat 12 baje...mene usse maar diya. lekin badqismati se mera bhi ussi raat toot gaya jis ki waja se mera gunah pakda gaya.." they took him bhind the bars...

 
 
 
"Kisi ko apne haq se mehroom rakhne se us ke andar ki insaaniyat khatam ho jaati hai aur wo ghalat raste per chalne ke liye majboor ho jaata hai" thinks arjun in his mind...Sakshi stare at him with smile...he also look at her once but then just move his eyes on the other side and walk away...
 
 
 

No Preaap!

 
 
So...how's it?

it was'nt so good as i wanted to have.but still plz hit like if u like it and do leave your views :)

Edited by Devilicious - 9 years ago

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