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Case SS - Devil Returns Part 12 pg 34 30/07/15 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awwwsssmmm start
Loved it
Very interesting
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome start...
Shivani is here to take ETF's help to catch sikandar who is the head in carrying al ths business abroad...
Shivani knows arjun..
Rathod ka pachka sabke samne...kiske bure din a gye..hehe..
Btw shivani ki adhi bat to sach h..propose to aisha ne kia tha..ab darake dhamkake ya nehi..ye to ap hi jano..
Batch me danger log..lol...

m eager to read ds..updt soon
Title - Dimag me nhi a rha..wl tell u l8r
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Posted: 9 years ago
nyc concept
loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome !
loved it
Shivani to solve a case with ETF
that's really interesting!
Shivani ne Rathod ki band baja di puri team ke samne..hehe..
Saare dangerous category wale..haha!!
Sikander..
this seems really really interesting!
Title.. Goldi di n Pihu's suggestion is good! koi bhi choose kijiye!
Thankx for pm
do continu soon
eagerly waiting to read it further!
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome start...

so the case extends to capturing sikander..who is working from outisde...
but govt ki bhi help chahiye na?? ya fir siki khud chal ke ayega??

jo bhi ho..its gonna be interesting..will wait..

do continue soon..

PS title i am not yet sure ofthe track of the story..but just a guess..AAKRI BAZI

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsm start meri jaan... 😊
it seems.more intrestng.
Hmmm...title..."MISSION SIKANDER"
Or..."KAHANI ABHI BAKI HAI'
Or "NW IT's D END OF CRIME WORLD"...I mean as sikander crime world don hai story mein to isliye...hope u understNd wt I meant... 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
it's a very intriguing start dear...
two interconnected cases solved by two sherniyaan...aab do ek saath... saath main ETF wala bonus...upar se Sikander... cheery on the top...waaah!! pura cake kha jaane ko mann karta hain.

case is really interesting, and forArjun...it's personal   too... matlab aage aur vi mazaa aayega...
I'm not good with title or names...kuch vi rakhlo...agar iska naam 'Jaal..the spiders trap' vi rakhdoge toh vi main padungi... haan feedback thora late aayega...itna guarantee main de sakti hoon.

do continue... tab tak main bazaar se popcorn aur coke le aati hoon.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Annu
awesome prologue 👏
shivani & aisha dono ke cases interconnected hai & sikki is the main culprit 😡😡😡
ab ETF bi saath dega toh its gonna be interesting for sure 😃
lagta hai shree & chotu ko abhi se dono sherniyo se dar lagne laga hai 😆
waiting for more...thanks for pm 🤗
PS:sry for commenting late 
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome story... great entry of shivani shivaji roy... 
u put the title as mms scandle only... or mms scandle 2
 
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Posted: 9 years ago
waiting for next part .. please post it soon..