m typing from phone, so pl. do not mind the typos and no-caps..
ok review time:
first a perfect ending to a perfect story.. politics-based stories are necessarily 'not sweet or feel-good' becoz politics are dirty n ugly by nature,, atleast in some northindian states - m glad you did justice to the genre 👏👏👏
loved that ashni decided to keep nirali in dark abt ashu, until she is matured enuf to understand...
loved, actually superloved nidhis self thots, liked it that she was human - not a selfless saint..
the way u wrote the scene where ashu gets shot was good, I mean, 2 things were clear from that scene - the buller was meant for nidhi, and it was done by a relative amateur. I immediately understood that lallan's man could not mk a mistake as silly as this - he wud not aim at nidhi in ashus presence, that wud make things too too obvious.
so, it was ashus dad - that and his own suicide were like poetic justice...
radhika - what do I say abt her? I cant neither hate her fully nor symphatize with her. living with the knowledge that her hubby breathed his last in nidhis arms, kind of served her ryt, but then what was her fault after all, only her political genes n her ego?
but these political ppl - nothing holds them down for long.. they get back to politics with a bang and know to convert their personal tragedies to public sympathy translating into votes. - she kind of reminded me of Sonia Gandhi - she too was totally against politic and her family have always been at assassins' target, still when she got a chance, she cud not resist the hunger for politics and power, cud she?
And vidisha, hats off to u for having the guts to kill off Ashu, - a clichd end wud hv ruined the effect of the entire story n diluted the impact.
a totally hatke story, v v well-penned..
And LADY, I BOW DOWN TO UR WIDE VOCABULARY.. THE WRDS U USE R JUST FAB👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️
