Teri Umeed Tera Intezaar Karte Hai, (6), COMPLETED - Page 4

Posted: 9 years ago
both r possessive towards each other n accepting it 
lovely update
adi finds that geet is same girl love interest of maan n maan also agree with it

Posted: 9 years ago
So finally, Geet ka Sameera wala shak door ho gaya... Lovely song and the most beautiful couple danced on it... Ab ye Meera kaun he...
Posted: 9 years ago
Omg omg.. it was one of the superb chapter I have ever come accross.. πŸ˜‰ 
Must say your song selection was awesome... it is one my favorite and loveliest song.. lyrics and all has aptly suited..πŸ‘
Dey both are crazily and irrevocably in love with each other. .😳

AVI A REQUEST PLZZZ DONT END IT SO SOONNN.. I M IN LUV WITH THIS STORY...😊

Waiting for next chapter...😊
Edited by kjn12 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Congratulations Avi!!!πŸ₯³
The banner is just wow!!

The colors, the whole feel is just superb,
Awesome job LaxmiπŸ‘
Posted: 9 years ago




Adi ka bhompu bajnewala hain.πŸ˜†
Geet is provoking him with those 'Sir's'
Haaye par aisa punishment ho toh...πŸ˜‰

Mujhe gaana yaad aa gaya
Geet ke liye perfect hai

Aaj hamne dil ka har
Kissa tamam kar diya
Khud bhi pagal ho gaye
Tumko bhi pagal kar diya
Sir sir oh sir I love you
πŸ˜†

I love this possessive Maan. His every action makes my heart squeeze with a 'Uff Tauba"😳


Par Geet bhi koi kaam nahi.

She is as equally begrudging to share Maan's attentions with anybody elseπŸ˜‰

Coming to Sameera Sharma  and Dr. Armaan. 
I loved how you brought in the jealousy angle, but through it they ended up claiming each other.😳

The dance...the song... the pics and their actions...I am dead.
Naach woh dono rahe the dhadkane meri tez ho rahi thi😳

I was cracking up at Adi and Maan's leg pulling.
I very much liked the ease that you have shown in their relationship.
But you know what I realized, the way Maan is teasing Geet, or Adi, or laughing it is as if he finding himself because of her.
I find it amazing that it is Geet who has lost her memories, but it is Maan who is finding his lost self again.

The best line from yesterday's update:

The romance novels on my nightstand lie untouched.  My hero has stepped out from them.

I absolutely loved the two things from this chapter.
The first was Maan's thought process
In an odd way, her possessiveness soothes me.  I feel needed.  I feel loved.  My actions have an effect on her.

The second was Geet's
The romance novels on my nightstand lie untouched.  My hero has stepped out from them.

Thanks Avi for giving us such a  wonderful couple.
πŸ€—






Edited by Susegad - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...my lappy is not working properly...it has suddenly become slow after formatting...πŸ˜•...look like I have to ask for help from an expert...plz bear with me if I ever commented late in ur next updates...
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by sanghita0000


awesome update...my lappy is not working properly...it has suddenly become slow after formatting...πŸ˜•...look like I have to ask for help from an expert...plz bear with me if I ever commented late in ur next updates...
NP SanghitaπŸ˜ƒ I will try to remember but if I forget you can PM me.
Posted: 9 years ago

NOTE:  Since all that most readers keep asking about after every update is Pammi and ML to be revealed to Maan soon, I will be cutting short some of the chapters so that we can come to it quickly.

 

Story will end sooner too but hey it is your choice.  Padhna toh aap sab ko hai.  Waise bhi mujhe apni story padhna accha nahi lagta, lol.


AVI KHABARDAR JO STORY KO SHORT KIYA

I DONT WANT TO READ ABOUT PAMMI THE DRUGGIE

I WANT MORE OF BONE MELTING ROMANCE AND HEART THUDDING LOVE BETWEEN THEM

SOME JOY AND LAUGHTER WITH ADI AND PINKI

SOME GREEN EYED MONSTER IN THE SHAPE OF ARMAAN SAMEERA MEERA PARI

THODA DILI DARSHAN ALA MUMBAI DARSHAN

BY THE WAY CONGRATS FOR A NEW THREAD


Posted: 9 years ago
Super like πŸ‘πŸΌ

super duper bumper update

Posted: 9 years ago


 


                   


     Good Night ,Avi ...LOL   
   sweet dreams..   

                       
        

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