Teri Umeed Tera Intezaar Karte Hai, (6), COMPLETED - Page 5

Originally posted by: punam2712

NOTE:  Since all that most readers keep asking about after every update is Pammi and ML to be revealed to Maan soon, I will be cutting short some of the chapters so that we can come to it quickly.

 

Story will end sooner too but hey it is your choice.  Padhna toh aap sab ko hai.  Waise bhi mujhe apni story padhna accha nahi lagta, lol.

AVI KHABARDAR JO STORY KO SHORT KIYA

I DONT WANT TO READ ABOUT PAMMI THE DRUGGIE

I WANT MORE OF BONE MELTING ROMANCE AND HEART THUDDING LOVE BETWEEN THEM

SOME JOY AND LAUGHTER WITH ADI AND PINKI

SOME GREEN EYED MONSTER IN THE SHAPE OF ARMAAN SAMEERA MEERA PARI

THODA DILI DARSHAN ALA MUMBAI DARSHAN

BY THE WAY CONGRATS FOR A NEW THREAD

dont cut  the story

Originally posted by: Susegad

Yeh kya note hain Avi, maine nahi dekha. I just saw it coz Punam quoted it😲

I agree with Punam's comment.

Yaar don't do this na Avi

There is so much potential to this story. I want to see that, not the ruined potential of it.

Cutting it short will not do justice to it.

So please, please continue it at your pace.

We want to read what and how you write, not what others want to, or don't want to  see in it🤢

Humari acchi Avi.Maan jaogi na?

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Nice. Super. Awesome. Mind Blowing. Wonderful aanddd Januable Chapter Aviii [8->]
Loved it [:D]
How innocently he asked shud I talk to adi? Daanto usey [LOL] n One Punch to Adi Sir only bcs Geet called him Sweet [LOL]
Arre yeh kia Sir bolke ghalti ki phir bhi punishment se bach gai [:$]
Glad to see Old BCC Chalu Maan is back [;)]
All the Pics were totally Januable, Unbardashtable Cute n Lovely [:$]
Kurbaan Hua ka magic phir se chaa gya Avii Waah tussi great ho [:D] [:$]
Dono taraf aagai Jo hai lagi. Dono hue Jealous [:$]
Hahaha Gorilla n Chipkali yeh Maan mile thy [LOL]
Really really loved ur version of Kurbaan hua or Khuda Jaane [8->] it was Simply Beautiful [L]
Hahaha loved the way Chalu Maan blackmailed Adi about pinky [LOL]

Regarding ur note.. I would say please do not take any rash decision, Bcs of some ppl Do not cut or edit any scene [8(]
Its a request Aage aapki marzi [|)]
I will support u always but kabhi Katti bhi ho skti hoon [LOL] [LOL]

Continue Soon [>:D<]

Originally posted by: dqno1

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Nisha mera original plan wo tha hi nahi

you know I work from an outline

scenes are also decided ahead of time so that the flow does not break

now I see I was wrong in this outline

MG cannot be separate for readers, even the ML is hard to digest

My effort to show that she falls in love again blah blah blah makes no effect on readers

I have not shown him to be cruel or harsh and yet just the fear that he will be, is not letting anyone enjoy the story, so why to write it this way?

It is better to give readers what they want...

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Readers se yaad aaya hum bhi tou Tere hi readers hain 😲
Hamari wish bhi poori honi chahye that's do not cut or shortened the story 😛 😲 😡

Wonderful update. Loved it
Geet and maan become couples... I like the bonding between adi and maan. Maan is calling armaan as gorilla. The poem was beautiful and their dance was just mind blowing . That chipku sameera is acting as maan's girl friend. Geet is very jealous seeing maan with that chipkali. The VM is very lovely. Waiting for the next part. Precap is interesting. Thanks for the PM .

Originally posted by: BDayGal-11Jan

Aaarghhh 😡 😡 😡

Originally posted by: dqno1

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abhi kuch cut bhi nahi kiya aur red face already?

Want to write it my way but if everyone is just scared, all the time, iska kya, uska kya toh mere haath hi nahi chalte to type, sacchi

I had planned a romance more than Locket.. was sure it would make everyone love this Maan and Geet more but mera confidence toot gaya hai.

Yaar Ab main apne confidence ke liye ka kahoon 😲
Kuch tou log kahengy.. Logon ka kaam hai kehna
Anyways yeh red faces was not for u.. Its for me 😳
Kitni der se comment kar ne ki koshish pe koshish karing but yeh net 😡

Congress on new thread
nice update maaneet going to pary
both are jealous and they danced
In next geet came to km waiting for next

Wow Part 😊 totally adorable yet sensually magical... Pehle I was in love with past but now I'm loving the present.. I don't know whether its Happy-LoveyDovey maan or your Writing that both Past and present becomes enjoyable