Teri Umeed Tera Intezaar Karte Hai, (6), COMPLETED - Page 6

Originally posted by: dqno1

 

Nisha  mera original plan wo tha hi nahi

 

you know I work from an outline

 

scenes are also decided ahead of time so that the flow does not break

 

now I see I was wrong in this outline

 

MG cannot be separate for readers, even the ML is hard to digest

 

My effort to show that she falls in love again blah blah blah makes no effect on readers

 

I have not shown him to be cruel or harsh and yet just the fear that he will be, is not letting anyone enjoy the story, so why to write it this way?

 

It is better to give readers what they want...

Originally posted by: Susegad

<div>Sometimes readers just don't know what to say and create storms in a teacup.😛

You stay your course Avi. If you cut it short, I promise you at the end of it, you will be the one who regrets it the most. Coz you are the one who knows what the story could have been like.

Anyway, why is this a poll story based on readers emotional barometer.

You write it just like you planned, and I promise each and everyone is going to love it.

This Maan just does not have the ability for cruelty. It comes across clearly in the way you have written his character.

As for the ML, always love the track.The journey of see ingthe brain and heart guide you back to the same person who is in you sub-conscious is amazing.

I hope you will let the story metamorphise completey.

Nobody likes the caterpillar stage, but we have to go through it, to see the butterfly.

To some perhaps, some parts of the story are like the caterpillar stage. But everybody is waiting to see the potential butterfly

And the process of the transformation cannot be rushed, or the butterfly will be ruined.

I hope you will not cut the story short and kill its' essence.

So please explore and let us explore along with you, the full potential of this story.

🤗