The beast & his belle | ArHi OS - Page 2 | Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon

Jennifer

@Jennymyola

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

beautiful thoughts penned beautifully

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Couldn't live with her & now can't live without her.
He's broken.

Very well written.

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533840

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

simply superb
loved it.

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Japonica

@Japonica

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

AT, WOW! This is the perfect short story.

Super to read your work after so long!

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

Heart breaking, beautifully written! :(

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Maya

@What_the

Goldie

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

Short yet powerful...you did it again!!

The ansgty Arnav...makes you feel for him...no matter how big a jerk he may act like...

Good read...an Arhi piece after a long time...thanks for the pm!

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meera30

@meera30

IF-Rockerz

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

The opening lines of this OS set the tone. Such beauty, such imagery! As always, your writing is nothing short of magic when it comes to angst!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

This content was originally posted by: mistyrains
So its a 500 words something long, yet its so pictorial, so eloquent. Like I said, I could literally see Arnav crying and that image stings.

Then secondly, that phrase about leaving a scorching tale behind - I love that! Then as the drabble went on, it was like we were walking through Arnav's mind, living, scrutinizing his thoughts, his actions with him. Very powerful ( especially the last few lines!). Very poetic.

<3

Thank You Sona! As I already said, this woudnt have been written at all had you not made me remember 'Let her go' by Passengers! Also your words of appreciation each time I pinged you with a part made me decide to post it so thank you for that too! :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

This content was originally posted by: gata
Can feel Arnav's pain ... where is she? don't end it ,bring her back

Thank You for your comment and as I said in my note I havent given a clear answer to that question in the OS itself but if you ask me, this is set in the background of their relation breaking completely because of Arnav and his misunderstandings and then him realising how wrong he was...

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

This content was originally posted by: piaviviandsena
Vry emotional!

Thank You for commenting...it was meant to be emotional so I am glad you found it so :)

This content was originally posted by: DDC1
Dark angst concisely written but effectively communicated

Thank You! :)

This content was originally posted by: Jennymyola
beautiful thoughts penned beautifully

Thank You! Glad you think so! :)

This content was originally posted by: tina_1234
Nyccc

Thank You! :)

This content was originally posted by: IsleOfCapri
simply superb
loved it.

Thank You! :)

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