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AngelTeen
AngelTeen @AngelTeen IF-Sizzlerz
Anniversary 18 Group Promotion 6 + 8
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by What_the


Short yet powerful...you did it again!!
The ansgty Arnav...makes you feel for him...no matter how big a jerk he may act like...

Good read...an Arhi piece after a long time...thanks for the pm!

Thank You so much! And not such a long time mate...wrote a few OS' as part of a little series a little while back only :)
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AngelTeen
AngelTeen @AngelTeen IF-Sizzlerz
Anniversary 18 Group Promotion 6 + 8
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by meera30


The opening lines of this OS set the tone. Such beauty, such imagery! As always, your writing is nothing short of magic when it comes to angst!

Thank You so much, Meera! Humbled you think so :)
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shr1234
shr1234 @shr1234 Senior Member
Anniversary 11 Visit Streak 30 0 Group Promotion 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing Rae. At the outset I knew this is something different and through to the end it was all poetry. You conveyed so much in so few words, poetic indeed. So poignant.
Thanks for the PM dear :)
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faffy
faffy @faffy Goldie
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 3 Commentator 1
Posted: 9 years ago
Poignant and agonizing!! Succinct and intense!!!

In this you have reached the deepest recesses of Arnav's heart and decrypted him completely! My heart cried for both...they were so meant for each other...
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ranogill
ranogill @ranogill IF-Sizzlerz
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 6 + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
you can never turn the clock back...awesome
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AngelTeen
AngelTeen @AngelTeen IF-Sizzlerz
Anniversary 18 Group Promotion 6 + 8
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by MysticRiver


well written..

Originally posted by Arshi.Sugi.IPK


Sad os well written

 
Thank You! :)
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stg1
stg1 @stg1 IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 5 Commentator 3
Posted: 9 years ago
wow, u paint such a vivid picture with ur words, beautiful and haunting ❤️
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xMIC.Dropx
Pastellitesoulx @xMIC.Dropx IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 10 Group Promotion 5 + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the way you have written arnav's broken state.
It is brilliant <3
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nnhk
nnhk @nnhk Senior Member
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 2 + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
very emotional and touching.

love reading your stories and posts
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aquagal
aquagal @aquagal IF-Rockerz Inactive
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 5 + 6
Posted: 9 years ago
Sad and heart-breaking!!! Love the way you write this angst filled Arnav filled with self-loathing. I especially loved the lines where you wrote "she was no longer to make his house his home, his existence his life..." In simple words, one line you showed that he has lost meaning of his life without her. And then the end with his reasons of hating her, hating himself!!! Can a man be hurt more than this??!!!
Lovely Rae...
I haven't yet heard the song - Let Me Go but this OS has strangely left me humming "Gaye tum gaye kyun..."
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