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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Those are my fav lines from this as well...glad you liked them too! Thank You so much for the kind words and for the constant encouragement! :)

And is this song the one from that Bipasha Basu movie...the name of the song is 'Jiyein kyon'? I love that song! And its a nice fit here...

Yes it's the same song from Dum Maaro Dum :)

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Tithi

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Posted: 9 years ago

I read the whole story in one go...

It's wonderful.

Please continue it...

What will gonna happen in Arshi's life?

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tirtharupa
I read the whole story in one go...
It's wonderful.
Please continue it...
What will gonna happen in Arshi's life?

Thank You so much! I am glad you liked it! :)

This was a One Shot so will not be continued :)

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Farwa

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Posted: 9 years ago

woho just 500 words but a whole story was described n that too so so beautifully. .. I just loved it.. . Arnav is living in a hell made by his oen hands n how beautifully u described it Rae AWESOME. .. simply amazing. His love for her, his self hatred n his pain AWESOME hats off to u n yes I am sorry for late comment just read it

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Farwa_Ibrahim-
woho just 500 words but a whole story was described n that too so so beautifully. .. I just loved it.. . Arnav is living in a hell made by his oen hands n how beautifully u described it Rae AWESOME. .. simply amazing. His love for her, his self hatred n his pain AWESOME hats off to u n yes I am sorry for late comment just read it

Thank You so much! I am glad that you liked the story! :)

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Brishti

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Posted: 9 years ago

I hate seeing these two separate so this was painful to read. I almost sympathize with Arnav here, almost. But then I think if Khushi's pain and compared to it, his is nothing. Love this!

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

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Posted: 9 years ago

That was so poignant and beautiful.

Very poetic, you have that dreamy flow in your writing.

Maybe because you write from your heart ❤️

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...Doctor...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Reading something by you after so long :') Missed it so much!

You are so good at playing with words, you know that right? I don't know how to say it! I mean look at the first few lines of this OS, sheer perfection. Such beautiful words weaved into a perfect story. This is so short yet so deep. It took you 536 words to explain Arnav's mental and physical state without her, only 536 words.

I loved it.

Keep writing!

P.S.- Write a book! You're way better than some of the 'most popular' Indian writers. You know what I mean, right?

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: brishti84
I hate seeing these two separate so this was painful to read. I almost sympathize with Arnav here, almost. But then I think if Khushi's pain and compared to it, his is nothing. Love this!

That was the idea...the reader should almost sympathize with Arnav so I am glad that got through! Thank You so much for commenting and encouraging! :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -FriedriceJi-
That was so poignant and beautiful.

Very poetic, you have that dreamy flow in your writing.

Maybe because you write from your heart ❤️

Thank You so much! And specially for the last line because that is what I always try to do! :)

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