Bharat Ka Veer Putra -Maharana Pratap

Mehendi hai Rachne wali-PrAja vivah bhent SS [Epi6-Pg19] - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
The letter, the letter!! Ah! Couldn't we get something like this in the show. This much of understanding and trust...The beautiful words that Pratap said in the letter. Ohmigosh. I could so imagine Ajabde's face beaming with contentment.
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Posted: 9 years ago
That bangles wala part...smart !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG... Pratu's letter took my heart away... it expressed everything so well... πŸ˜³  bangles and Radha-Krishna locket... that was really sweet gesture by him.. πŸ˜³ I'm jst in love with this story.. β€οΈ I can see that smile on Ajab's face after reading my bhai sa's letter... πŸ˜³ πŸ˜‰ really beautiful update Aru.. β€οΈ



sorry jaana!.. it's going really hectic for me here.. not even able to come to AT properly nowadays... I hv pending other updates too.. will read soon and cmmnt as I get some time... πŸ˜Š

lol!! Kammu.. Ratan Panwar.. πŸ€£ usne padh liya to teri shamat A jayegi re..!! πŸ€£

no I didn't know.. ab isme humari bhi koi galati nahi he.. aaj tak humne kabhi Hiral ji ko baarati kheme me bhul se bhi nahi dekh liya toh hum kya kare!!... πŸ˜›

..aur hume humare bhai sa ka uphaar bahut hi pasand aaya!! πŸ˜› πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome...
no words...
the letter and the gift was fab
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Posted: 9 years ago
very nice dear ,,,,,
beautifully written,,,,
update next part if possible 
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's beautiful one aru...I don't have words.  The Lester,  the gifts - they all were PERFECT πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
Love it Aru😳❀️
Don't have adjectivesπŸ˜›, so kshama kar dijiye hume.  
I know it's exams so u take ur time... And rahi baat gussa hone ki then don't be conscious for that,  u don't need to worry for the reason we r here is PrAja!!! 
BTW u r talking to me or not???? πŸ˜³
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aru !!πŸ€—
Amazing .. read all the three parts !
U r such a beutiful writer !!
Loved it !
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

Awesome update Aru dear πŸ€—

Thank u Chitra di...
btw, u r on baarati side right?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: deeptiya

unres 1πŸ˜†

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ok ,,,,,pehle serious wale comment,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,without any emo,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

girl u write so well,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, i thought of it a way to gain ataraxia,,,,,,,,,, it possess such a great pulchritude that it grabs the reader till the end,,,,,,,,,,,,,, from the writing style u r an autodidact...

that is what i want to write about the story as a reader,,,,,,,,

okay...
thank u di...i can catch ur feelings...
but honestly, i cant understand half the vocabulary
but i get  what u r saying...
thank u so much for so much tareef...
oh...i'd love to know ur pov...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: deeptiya

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beware this one is with lots of emos,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, so b ready πŸ€£

u must b feeling like this,,,,,  while writing the story and studying side by side,πŸ˜†


i m sooo  dissapointed,,,,aur  cvs ke dimaag kho jane ke gum me maine daru bhi kharid li thisocha tha sath sath milkar piyenge sabhi praja jan🀣


i was planning something like this for them also,,,,,,,,,,,,, πŸ€£


but u  saved them😳,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,so muhaaa,,,,,,,,

loved it,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, so nice,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,waiting for the update like a despo,,,





so can i have the question  plz,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, mera number kab aayega?




*frozen*
*slowly melting*
*normal*
OMG deepu di...me so sach me freeze ho gayi itne saaare emos dekh ke...
so true...i'm literally in that state...doing both things together...
arre arre...why so depressed...i'll always be here to save the day...
don't go to daru n murder plans...
thodi si waiting to inevitable hai...but will try update soon...
thanku... :*
and ur entry...ermmm...lets see...will try do it on my b'day ;)