||EVANESCENT MEMORIES|| SANDHIR FF ~ FIRST CHAP/PG9~ - Page 9

Posted: 9 years ago
Wow what a start awesome yaar continue soon😊
Posted: 9 years ago
it's superb preeti...omg...randhir & selective amnesia😕...& sanyukta is pregnant with his child...& he has not remembered anything...what d hell is happening😲...eagerly waiting for ur next update... Edited by randhirsanyu014 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
😕😳😲
Edited by randhirsanyu014 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
he is asking her if they have met before...holy shit...punch to use padna hi tha😉😆🤣 Edited by randhirsanyu014 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Preeeti
I know you are going to kill me for this late reply 
But sooo sorry !!!!
I wanted to read it when I was in the right state of  mind 
And I am so glad I did because this was Amazing!!!!!!!
Girl what did you just do ... 
This is such mature writing 
I am so impressed ... This is like never before 
The scenes .. The dialogues ... Are so perfect and have so much clarity 
Shit ya I really liked this one !!!! 
But does he not remember Sanyu 
Wth yaaa!!!!!! :((((
Posted: 9 years ago
Just finished readin the prologue... very interesting and quite an intriguing too.
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice opening shot. Liked it very much. waiting for the next update.
Posted: 9 years ago
pls update preeti...i'm waiting...also update 'leap year'...pls pls pls update...
Posted: 9 years ago
Randhir suffering from selective amnesia... its getting really interesting
Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing..
ur updates are bhayanak..
how u write so well...
plz pm me if possible...
agla update jaldi..

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