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FF: Dastaan-e-Sachcha Pyaar.... |Chap12: Pg 49| - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: rima4ever

fantastic update 

Thanks...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Winds.of.Heaven

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Ummm...you think they will EVER come FACE-TO-FACE??😕😛😆 If yes, then how???😃



heyy😊
got ur pm and checked the cs n read the chapter again...😊
and again, yes it was a wonderful part⭐️
enjoyed the flashback👍🏼
well ofcourse i think they will come face to face at some point 😆.. otherwise how will the love story begin and progress. but honestly i dunno how u plan to show that😆. im just looking forward to each part of your story😳
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: rima4ever

continue soon 

very soon...
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heyy😊
got ur pm and checked the cs n read the chapter again...😊
and again, yes it was a wonderful part⭐️
enjoyed the flashback👍🏼
well ofcourse i think they will come face to face at some point 😆.. otherwise how will the love story begin and progress. but honestly i dunno how u plan to show that😆. im just looking forward to each part of your story😳
thanks for the pm

Thanks!
You guys are sooo eager! GREAT!!!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
You guys were very eager for PreeMan's FACE-TO-FACE meet!
So...here's it! 
Hope you guys LOVE it!😉😛😆

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Chapter 4

{continuation from the previous}

Preet reached the stage, set in the lawn of the palace. Lots of people were present for her coronation. All were throwing flowers petals. She slowly got up through a long road, filled with red rose petals, on the stage and on the other hand, Anshumann entered the crowd.

~~~~Background Music~~~~
Main tenu samjhawan ki, na tere bina lagda jee
Main tenu samjhawan ki, na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera, main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil, tunhion jaan meri
Main tenu samjhawan ki, na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera, main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil, tunhion jaan meri
Jaan meri.. jaan meri.. jaan meri...
Mere dil ne chun laiya ne, tere dil diyan rahaan
Mere dil ne chun laiya ne, tere dil diyan rahaan
Tu jo mere naal turehn ta, turpe meriyaan saahan
Jeena mera haye, hund hai tera, ki main karaan
Tu kar eitbaar mera, main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil, tunhion jaan meri
Jaan meri.. jaan meri.. jaan meri...
Main tenu samjhawan ki, na tere bina lagda jee
Tenu chadd ke kitthe jawaan tu mera parchanwa
Tere mukhde vich hi main taan Rabb nu apni pawaan
Meri duya haye, sajda tera, karti sada
Tu sun ekraar mera, main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil, tunhion jaan meri
Jaan meri.. jaan meri.. jaan meri...!!
~~~~Background Music~~~~

But Anshumann couldn't go near the stage because it was a very large crowd. And all were shouting, "Rajkumari Preet...Jai Ho! Thakur'yon ki...Jai Ho! Rajkumari Preet...Jai Ho!"

Preet slowly went towards the mic.

Preet: (at heart)Babasa...Maasa, mujhe aashirwaad dijiye!

She gathered courage, signaled the crowd to stop and she finally spoke.

Preet: Aap sabko mera...Rajkumari Preet Thakur, ka pranam! Mai aap sabka shukriya adaa karna chahti hu ki aap mere rajjyaabhishekh mei aye... Maine kabhi apne sapne mei bhi nehi socha tha ki mera rajjyaabhishekh iss tarha se hoga! Mai chahti thi ki ye Rani ka Taaj mere Babasa khud mujhe pehnay...apne haatho se! Lekin...honi ko kaun taal sakta hai? Jo hona hota hai, vo to hoke ki rehta hai... Mai umeed karti hu ki aap sab mujhe bhi waise hi pyaar karenge jaise mere Babasa aur Maasa ko karte the...

Anshumann tried to cross the crowd, but he failed, he could only hear her voice.

And after the speech, Preet took off her Princess' crown and wore the Queen's crown.

Princess' crown:

Queen's crown:

Preet: Mai aasha karti hu ki mai bhi mere Babasa, Swargiye Raja Utkarshh Thakur, ke tarha aap sabke umeedo pe khaari utar paungi. Dhannyabad!

They again started shouting, "Rani Preet...Jai Ho! Thakur'yon ki...Jai Ho! Rani Preet...Jai Ho!" With this Preet  left the stage. And Anshumann couldn't meet her...

Anshumann: Iss bar to Rajkumari Preet se nehi mil paya... Koi baat nehi aage bhi bohot mouke ayenge.

Thus, he left the place.

Man: (without noticing that Anshumann had already left)Dekha, kitni khubsurat hai Rajkumari Preet?(without getting any response)Are, aap kuch kehte kyu nehi?

Without getting any response, he turned to find him. But saw that he had already left!

Man: Are, vo aadmi kaha gaya? Ussne apna ye sketch bhi nehi liya... Mai isska kya karu?(after thinking)Rajkumari ke toufa de deta hu! Vo bhi khush aur uss aadmi ki mehnaat bhi kaam ayega! Haan, yehi sahi hoga!

The man wanted to go inside the palace, but was stopped by the guards.

Guard 1: Kaha jaa rahe ho?

Man: Ranisa se milna hai.

Guard 2: Aur tumhe lagta hai hum tumhe aise hi andar jane denge?

Man: Mujhe bohot zaruri kaam hai!

Guard 1: Aisa kya kaam hai?

Man: Vo...aap kisiko bula dijiye.

Guard 3: Are! Tu aisa kaun hai jo hum tujhe kisi se milva de?

Man: Mujhe kaam hai. Kisiko bhi bula dijiye!

Guard 2: Tujhe ek bar mei baat samajh nehi aata!

Guard 3: Chal nikal!

Man: Meri baat to suniye...

Deepak heard all these shouting and came to them.

Deepak: Kya chal raha hai yaha?

Guard 4: Sahab, ye aadmi Ranisa se milna chahta hai.

Deepak: Kyu? Ye koi Raja ya Rajkumar hai kya?

Guard 1: Ranisa ko toufa de chahta hai.

Deepak: Kaisa toufa?

Man: Ye! Subhe mujhe ek aadmi mila tha, Dehradun mei naya tha. Ussne Ranisa ka tasveer banaya aur galti se mere paas hi chhut gaya! Iss liye maine socha...

Deepak: Thik hai, thik hai! Mujhe do, mai pohochva dunga. Ab jao!

Man: Shukriya!

The man left and Deepak went back inside with the sketch.

Deepak: (annoyed)Kaha kaha se chale aate hai! Chale hai RANISA ko toufa dene! Ye toufa gaya...kachre ke dabbe mei!(threw the sketch in the dustbin)

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Bad luck! PreeMan couldn't meet FACE-TO-FACE... 
And Deepak threw Anshumann's hard work in the dustbin...

What will happen now?! 
Will PreeMan ever be able to meet?

So many questions... What will the answers be?

Just wait to see what happens!

Till then, be happy and enjoy life!

Love, 
Zariyat
Edited by Winds.of.Heaven - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
aab to milado preeman ko!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
 superb story...
jst luved it❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update Zaryat.
Loved it sooo much.
I really loved the way you are giving twist and turns.
Milke bhi woh na mile..
But they are going to be face to face soon.
The lahenga is beautiful.
Waiting eagerly for the next update.
PS- I love this song very much..And best of luck for ur JSC. 
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Posted: 9 years ago
God when will these two meet?
And this Deepak🤢How dare he throw that sketch into dust-bin😡! I dont like this Deepak guy😆!
Preets Rajyabhishek was nice!
Continue soon and yesss! I WANT PREEMAN FACE TO FACE right now 😭.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.
Loved it very much.
Gaaahhh iss bar bhi nehi mile.
Chalo koi bat nehi.
Agle bar mil lenge.
Loved both crowns..
Con sonz..