A Swayam OneShot: In Front Of Me - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
❤️ed it..
Beautifully written...
You Rock Nishu 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awhhh 
Jaan u wrote it soo beautifully
Literally, Mujhe pata bhi chala ki he was blind,
Chal ab iska mai continue Karne waali hu :p
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Posted: 9 years ago
really nice os
different concept
loved swayam's POV
sharey through swayam's words wer really awesome
love  swayam's potrayal in this
as someone who cannot see
but feels everything and sees everything
through his inner eyes
nicely penned
hoping many more of such unique write ups...
thnx for the pm
sorry for the late reply
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Posted: 9 years ago
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waise good because i love it !!
nishu you deserve an award for this...this is simply amazing..like totally amazing...
gosh your ideas and the way you penned it down...the words just flowed in making swayam's emotions evident..this is one of your best works sachi...its unique pleasantly adoring and perfect!!
p.s-there was no one to type for you:P you had to do it on your own :v
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .Vrushanholic.

like button not working -_-

waise good because i love it !!
nishu you deserve an award for this...this is simply amazing..like totally amazing...
gosh your ideas and the way you penned it down...the words just flowed in making swayam's emotions evident..this is one of your best works sachi...its unique pleasantly adoring and perfect!!
p.s-there was no one to type for you:P you had to do it on your own :v


Rach thank you so much!
I am overwhelmed sachi..
Because i wasnt really happy with this. socha kuch aur tha..but likhte likhte it became this. :/
I am really glad you loved it :D
P.S yeah -_-
Wish i had someone to type it for me.. :P
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Posted: 9 years ago

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Rach thank you so much!
I am overwhelmed sachi..
Because i wasnt really happy with this. socha kuch aur tha..but likhte likhte it became this. :/
I am really glad you loved it :D
P.S yeah -_-
Wish i had someone to type it for me.. :P

you are never satisfied _/\_
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .Vrushanholic.

you are never satisfied _/\_


Aise kuch nahi hai..😛
I was very satisfied with Mirage.. XP
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Posted: 9 years ago
exceptionally penned 
swayam's side of the story 
i hav to say nishio u are getting better at tis 
ur language use of emotions n sply the 
themes tat ur writing is getting brilliant 
do keep them cuming buddy 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow so deep nishi, a cooler swayam who for a change never relies on the destiny. I really liked it!
Indeed a refreshing read.
Keep it up!
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Posted: 9 years ago
It penned beautifully. It's been such a visual treat to have read something like this. Good and refreshing enough.
Nice one!