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Posted: 9 years ago
very nice teaser
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very interesting 
Can't wait for more 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello... Hope u r fine and thank you sooo much for liking my new concept so i am here with chapter 1 hope u like it...
Happy Reading...

                                    Adhoori Mohabbat


Banner Credit goes to Immortal Love... ðŸ¤—

Part 1:

Location: Delhi:

Note:

      The doctor who operated Zoya had a daughter named Ayesha Khan... Ayesha was in a relationship with her b.f and she got pregnant but her b.f ditched her which cause her to commit suicide but after meeting Zoya the doctor thought to give this girl the name of her daughter and he explains her that her b.f left her and all so now Zoya who is living a life of Ayesha Khan hates herself for giving a birth to a child without father's name but she loves her son more than herself...
Now Ayesha does not have any scar on her arm and there is no chance for her memory's come back and the doctor is also dead...
 
 
 

The most awaited wedding arrived and Maliks were already there bcox they were from bride's side so they have to welcome the groom...

 
Rehan, Arman, Maha and Aman  came together to attend all the functions... Ayesha was not allowing Aman to go alone with Malik's but Arman was not listening to him and he took Aman with them... Ayesha was coming by a bus and it was the day of Sangeet and Mehndi...
 
Arman was very nervous with all these meeting a girl and her family and all but he knew that its time to settle down bcox now Maha is growing so they really need a woman at their home..
 
Ayesha was not fond off attending weddings and all but for Aman it was new so she has to attend and also Arman was going to meet a girl for marriage so she has to be there for him who always stands with her in good and bad times...
 
The wedding was arranged in a 5 star hotel and guests are also staying there only...
 
Khan's reached there and greets everyone but Asad was feeling some unknown attraction which he ignored as he was tired with traveling...
 
Khan's were allotted the rooms and Asad after fresh n up came to cafeteria and ordered his favorite Black Coffee... Yeah you heard it right after Zoya left him he again came back to his bitter coffee...
 
Aman was in cafeteria and ordered his favorite Coffee Milkshake...
 
Asad and Aman sitting in same place while facing their backs... But Asad can really feel some hidden forces or you can say that the power of love and blood is disturbing him...
 
The waiter misplaced their order and the father son are now having their orders but Asad was in no mood to ignore this silly mistake he called the waiter again and starts scolding him... Aman was watching this and came to his rescue same as his mother who always poke her nose in others matters...
 
Aman: Excuse me Sir...
 
Asad turn to his right side and face a cute young boy and God knows what happened to him, he forgot all his anger and give a little smile to that cutest dimpled child...
 
Aman: Sir I know enki mistake hai but apko pata hai galti sab se ho jati hai aap se or mjhy se bhi ho sakti hai to app enhy kuch mat kahen or yeh lejiye apki coffee...
 
The waiter thanked him left the place...
 
Asad: Etni choti si age main kafi badi badi batey kar lety ho aap or yeh raha apka milkshake or haan mjhy mere gussy pe control karwany k liye thanks...
 
Aman: Its ok sir wesy bhi meri mama kehti hain k acha kaam akrny k liye age matter nahi karti...
 
Aman smiles and was going back to his seat when he again came...
 
Aman: Aap yaha akely ho???
 
Asad: Hmm wesy to family ke sath aya hoon par cafeteria main akela hoon??? Wanna join???
 
Aman: Yeah... main bhi family sath aya hoon par akely milkshake pena acha nahi lagta to aap ke sath bethny ka dil kar raha hai... hope you don't mind...
 
Asad: No problem... apka naam kya hai???
 
Aman: Aman Khan or apka naam???
 
Asad: Asad Ahmad Khan...
 
Aman: Waooo that's nice hum dono Khan hain phr to friendship banti hai...
 
Asad: Hmmm why not...
 
They shake hands but Asad again felt a tingling sensation bcox he never be friendly with anyone in 5 mins but this boy has some strange impression on him...
 
After finishing milkshake..
 
Aman: I am done Mr. Khan and thank you for your company I really enjoyed it... Allah Hafiz...
 
Asad: Byeee...
 
Asad smiles and left for his room...
 
 
Arman told Aman that his mom will be here till evenging so they better get ready bcox they have to meet Khans...
 
Maha and Aman got ready and reached the wedding hall of the hotel where Arman was waiting for them...
 
The trio came inside where Rehan was alredy seated with Khans...
 
Rehan introduces Arman and Maha to Khans... they all greeted and settle down...
 
Aman stood up and went to Asad...
 
Aman: Hello Mr. Khan...
 
Asad immediately remembers Zoya who always adressed him as Mr. Khan...
 
Asad: Hi... Mr. Khan... Aap yahan kesy???
 
Aman: Main yaha apny mamo sath aya hoon pointing toward Arman...
 
Asad: Ohhh that's great acha main apko apni family se milata hoon...
 
Aman turns towards Asad's family and say a Salam...
 
Najma: Aap to boht cute ho...
 
Aman: Thanks for the compliment beautiful... and shows his dimples...
 
Ayaan: Waooo dimpled boy hmmm.
 
Aman: Yeah main same apni mom jesa hoon par unky dimples mere se bhi zaida preety hain...
 
Asad again remembers Zoya and her dimpled smile...
 
Arman: Heyyy iss se pehly yeh choto apni smile or dimple se ap girls ke sath flirt kary let me warn you eski mama ko yeh sab bilkul acha nahi lagta k yeh aisi cheesy lines boly you know strict mom and all...
 
Aman: Mamo aap aisy kyun bol rahy ho mene to just enki beauty pe compliment dia aap mama ko kyun involve kar rahy ho...
 
Arman: Kitna drama kartha hai acha teri mama ko nahi btao ga ab khush...
 
Aman: Yeahhh!!!
 
Khans really like Aman...
 
Maha: Achaa app main se wo kaun lucky girl hai jo mere chahcu se shadi karny ma interested hai hmmm...
 
Dilshad: Ohhh to aap ko larki se milna hai wesy yeh hain Nuzhat agar aap ke chachu or enho ne haan kar di to phir enki shadi kra dengy kesa idea hai???
 
Aman: Allah Miyan... etni jaldi shadi???
 
Asad and Khans got shocked by hearing this but Arman spoke...
 
Arman: Aman aram se bacha or aap log ghabraiye nahi yeh aksar aisi bato pe over react kar jata hai...
 
Aman: Sorry bas wo aisy hi keh dia par mjhy mami pasand hai to shadi kar dety hain na??? kyun mamo acha idea hai na???
 
Arman: No way jab tak aapi haan nahi kahengi tab tak no shadi???
 
Rehan: Arman har bat main Ayesha ki raza mandi lazmi nahi or Asad I hope you don't mind yeh to bas aisy hi hai...
 
Asad: Its ok par mjhy kuch pochna tha???
 
Rehan: Haan haan pochieye na...
 
Asad: Aapke ghar ma to koi lady nahi hai to yeh Ayesha kon hai or yeh Aman bhi Mamo keh kar bula raha hai its confusing me...
 
Arman: Actually bhai ki PA hain Ayesha Khan but mere liye saggi behn se barh k hain or unki rayee mere liye boht matter karti hai or Aman unhi ka beta hai...
 
Dilshad: Achaa or uski family and husband???
 
Arman: Aunty... wo akeli hain matlab unke father ki death ho chuki hai bs Aman hi hai unki life main...
 
Aman smiles at that moment but Khans really feel bad that child for not having his own family...
 
Rehan: Arry aap log Ayesha ko kyun discuss kar rahy hain I hope ab Nuzhat or Arman ko kuch time sath ma spend karna chahieye function start ho chuka hai par hum log kal nashty pe milty hain aram se sab kuch final karny k liye???
 
Asad: Great... to kal subha breakfast pe kuch personal baty bhi ho jayen gi abhi to function chal raha to thek hai bas haina abbu???
 
Rashid: Haan sahi hai bas ab bacho oe depend karta hai enhy kya pasand hai???
 
The function starts officially and bride and groom are seated together and than some cousins and friends came and dance but groom was busy waiting for someone...
 
Arjun (Groom): Or kitna time lagy ga unhy aany main???
 
Suhana (Bride): Bas aati hogi thora wait kro na...
 
Ayaan, Najma, Nuzhat, Aaliya (Ayaan's wife) and Arman are standing beside bride and groom...
 
Ayaan: Arjun kya hua bhabi sath bethi hai phir bhi bar bar entrence pe kyun dekh raha hai???
 
Arjun: Yaar meri 1 hi saali hai wo bhi abi tak nahi ayi??? Usi ka wait kar raha hoon???
 
Arman: Aapi aa chuki hain bas ready ho rahi hain or aati hi hongi...
 
Ayan: Tumhari aapi eski saali kesy???
 
Arjun: Actually Ayesha or Suhana or Arman best friends hain to Suhana ki na koi sis hai na koi cousin to iss hisab se Ayesha meri saali hui na...
 
Ayan: Ohh achaa...
 
Aman and Asad were sitting and having some friend's chit-chat...
 
Suddenly Asad became restless and feels the presence of Zoya but he was in dilemma and turns around and got shocked...
 
Asad was on cloud 9 bcox he was seeing his wife his life after long 5 years... A tear dropped from his eyes...
 
" Hamara Zikar To Har Bar Hua Afsaano Main...
 
To Kya Hua Jo Thori Dair Ho Gayi Aany Main..."
 
 
 
All turn around and some got shocked and some got happy...
Khans are just shedding some tears while Arjun, Suhana and Arman were happy...
 
Asad got more shocked when Aman just ran to Zoya and she immediately bent down and took him in her arms...
Asad was too shocked bcox from afternoon he was feeling an unknown bond with Aman but he never imagined that his new friend can be his son only and he sent a silent prayer to Allah for such a wonderful gift and now he has only a mission that was just hug his Zoya and Aman and never let them go far from him...
 


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Edited by ashiii333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
aww
loved it
plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Asad attracted towards Aman. They became friends. Everyone in family like Aman & remembered zoya. Zoya lost her memory & hate her bf. Asad felt her presence & saw her. He got a shocked that his life, standing in front of him & Aman is his son. Waiting for next update soon plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful plot... asad meets zoya...but  zoya doesn't remember him...aman is asyas son...hope they join soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great story!! Love the concept!!
Aman is adorable!!
So Zoya doesn't remember Asad.. OMG
Looking forward to see what happens next!!
Update soon.. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful plot. ...asad meets zoya. ...But she doesn't remember him. ...aman is asya's son...hope they unite soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow nice updt now aman and asad god friend.asad and zoya meet with eachother asad realise aman hs won song nice story
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice story
wonder how will zoya find out her truth