KRIYAANSH OS!! Tennis AND U? Obvioously U! Happy Birthday David bhai! - Page 2

Wow awesome creativity :))Lovely

OMG baccha!!!
This is probably the best work of yours I feel
It's awesome!!
The start awesome!!! Rey and kria ka intro mast!!!
Their passion towards tennis mast!!!
Perfectly shown!!! And then unka ek dusre par research!!!
But their effect on each other!!! Hehehehee mast hai!!!
And the match!! Woowww just imagining it was like wwooowww!!!
And the end awesome!!!
Both excited for the match and both close!!!
Kria and rey sooo close!!!
Finally the confession it was like something unexpected and the kiss heheheee
Really nice!!!
Both are soo daring!!! Awesome!!!

AWESOME...
luvd d os...

superb nd so unique luvd it

ausome OS...

Me not a Tennis fan...but I loved the OS...

two star players falling in love...wow..

Best part was the confession...rather kiss and then confession...

Keep Writing...

Love Aditi...

Wow fantastic os Diya👏 👍🏼😛

Thanku for pm😳

i really liked it.
a very very good attempt.
two things in tennis there isn't a tie.
and it is federer not frederer
:P

but besides that it was awesome.
it was fantastic for your first attempt on tennis
thank you a lot doll

ive read the swaron version 0f this os
i lopved it extremely
this ones also nic

amazing jaanu

it was damn great choti