Do Dil Ek Jaan

~kashmir main tu kanyakumari ~A Rantara s as(chapter 7 @ page 14)

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Posted: 9 years ago


Hello.. I m her with my new ss..

Plot
Raghu is south Indian boy.. He was from kanyakumari.. But now he stay at Mumbai with his family..becose of raghu s father s work.. An Antra is kasmeeri girl.. Hu came Mumbai at his mama s daughter s wedding..

Cs
Antra-a kasmeeri girl..she love mujik.. But her papa hate her mujik..her papa want to Antra as doctor.. Antra s papa can'tcan't know about Antra s dream..

Raghu-a south Indian boy.. HeHe alwesh think about his family.. His family was his life..

Ruksaana-raghu s best frinde

aman-antra s best friends..

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Posted: 9 years ago

nice concept , waiting 4 it 👏

plz pm if possible 😛
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Originally posted by: shivika838

nice concept , waiting 4 it 👏

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Tnx sivi..
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interesting concept Yashvi 😊
continue soon :)
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lovely... north south ki ban gayi jori..😉😆
waiting..
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[QUOTE=rima4ever]nice start [/QUOTE
Tnx dear
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Originally posted by: ifians

lovely... north south ki ban gayi jori..😉😆

waiting..

tnx riu
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

Nice Plot

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plzz update soon

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Chapte 1
Its beautiful morning..
At station of kanyakumari..
raghu say are ama chodo ye bag muje do.. Tera beta hai na..
Raghu s ama say haan..mera bacha..
Raghu an his ama seat at trean..
Suddenly..raghu s phone was rang..
Raghu was wake up an gone..ama was shoked..
Raghu was came..
raghu s ama say daya mai ka phone tha..
Raghu say haan..
Raghu say ama aap daya mai ko pasand nahi kar te..Mujeb Pata hai..hum jab Mumbai jate hai aap paresaan rah the ho..raghu said
Raghu s ama say aaj main tuje daya mai kya hai ye bata te hu..
Raghu say daya mai..
Raghu s ama say tare baba Mumbai ke The.. Aur main south Indian.. Daya mai tare kaki tare baba unke liye kuch bhi kar sakte the.. But mare liye wo kanyakumari aye.. Feer thoda time baad turn aya use din daya mai aye..aur muje apna liye.. Tare baba ko mana liya feer se daya mai ke sath kaam kar ne.. But main nahi Jana chahte the..tare baba kabhi kabhi mill ne ate.. Aur feer hum bhi waha jate.. But..ab tare baba ke Jane ke baad hum waha hamesha ke liye..
Raghu say ama daya mai bahot achi hai..
Raghu was wake up..
Raghu was gone

At kasmeer
Antra s house
Antra s mama was came
Nahi..hum nahi aa rahe.. Mr kaul said
Main Antra aur mari bahen ko le ne aya hu.. Antra s mama ji said
Agar wo tare sath jaa na chahte hai to theek hai.. Mr kaul said
Antra kaha hai.. Mr kaul said
Wo..abhi collage se aye nahi..Antra s mamaa said
Kya.. Main ne kaha tha name..mujik se door rah.. Mr kaul said


he rode was fully cotead by snow..all was look to lovely..an winter was gone an starting day of spring..the lievs born agen on the tree..an a green grees was was cotead by waight snow..snow full was start..one girl hold guitar.. See came at stage
"Now its time for a beautiful performance by antara and ..put your hands together for the beautiful young ladi..The host announced..there was a huge round of applause...probably aman and made 70% of the total sound...they were super excited..!!!

Antara came on the stage...Everybody cheered...Antara looked at aman...He smiled at her..Antara smiled back. and he gave her a huge grin..Antara nodded at aman see was smailing..Antara looked at aman one last time before the performance...aman winked and antara blushed...

Antara started singing...aman kept staring at antra..antra start sing..hey sang beautifully. The crowd cheered for them. There performance got over soon and aman rushed backstage to congratulate them. Antarafinally performance was over and it was a success. Suddenly they turned around and saw aman coming towards them with huge smiles on their faces...congratulating her for her concert. Antara hugged aman ..
[DIV]Noor apa was came.. Antra tare mama ji aye hai..nargis ke sadi hai..
Kya..mamaji..aaj to papa bahot gussa ho ge na..antra said
aman say tare papa ko tare mujik se kya problame hai..
Pata nahi..papa chahte hai main doctar ban jao..antra said
aman say koi baat nahi..ak din wo tare dreem ko jarur samje ge..
Antra was smailing

at antra s house
antra chal..ready ho jaa..hum mumbhai jaa rahe hai..antra s mama ji said
acha..antra said
haan..antra said
papa nahi chal rahe..antra said
nahi..antra s mamaa said
at stetion
antra kya hua..antra s mamaa said
kuch nahi..antra said
noor apa say ye apne dreem boy ke bare main soch rahe hai..
Nahi..antra said
antra was blasing..
Haan..antra agar tuje tera hero mill jae..to use apne dill ke baat kah de na..antra s mamaa said
kya boll..antra said
antra s mamaa say
jaan nahi the..muje main feer bhi sanse le rahe the..
Khaab bahot the par kahi chup rahte the..
Aaj sanse ruk se gye hai tuje se mill ke
par jaan aa gye hai dill ke dhadkan main..
Antra was smailing..
Edited by RANTARAlovelife - 9 years ago