~kashmir main tu kanyakumari ~A Rantara s as(chapter 7 @ page 14) - Page 4

Posted: 9 years ago
Grt update yashvi dear
thanks fr d update.
update soon.

Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by AnjaliAnand


superb update Yashvi 😳
loved it !!
continue asap :)
Tnx anji
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by rima4ever


nice date 
Tnx dear
Posted: 9 years ago

Sry for commenting late...

Wow Yashvi great start...😛

Raghu is frm kanyakumari gng to mumbai...

N he think dm is nice...😡

Antu also gng to mumbai wow...

Hope thy meet soon...

Cont asap...

Thank u😊

Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by ankusanu


Grt update yashvi dear
thanks fr d update.
update soon.

Tnx priyanka..
Love u..
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by amfi123


loved it
:)
Tnx amfi..
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by ifians


wonderful and lovely.
cont asap
Tnx riu..
Love u..
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Komali14


Sry for commenting late...

Wow Yashvi great start...😛

Raghu is frm kanyakumari gng to mumbai...

N he think dm is nice...😡

Antu also gng to mumbai wow...

Hope thy meet soon...

Cont asap...

Thank u😊

Tnx dear
Chapter 2 was updated..
Tnx for cmnt..
Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 3
Raghu came at basti.. Machmach say daya mai bulla rahe hai..raghu say haan.. Apun abhi ata hai..raghu was gone..
Pata nahi.. Hamesha sab se pahele bhai daya mai se mill ta hai aaj kya hua.. Machmach said
At Antra s house
Mama ji WO aap se aiae baat nahi kar sakta.. Antra saidsaid
Antra.. WO gunda hai.. Daya mai ke bate jaisa hai..door rah name use se.. Antra s mama ji said
Nargis say Antra tu dar mat.. Papa na raghu bhai se dar te hai..raghu bhai bahot ache hai..
raghu was came
Raghu look Antra.. raghu was smilingsmiling..see thought raghu came to near of Antra an try to hug her..but raghu hug nargis.. Now Antra feel good
Nargis kaise hai.. Raghu said
Ache..ama bhi aye hai..nargis said
Haan.. Raghu said
Nargis.. Tuje se kuch baat kar ne hai.. Raghu said
Are..mama ji ache se rah na.. Dar na mat.. Nargis ko Khan nahi jaega.. Raghu said
raghu look Antra..Antra was shocked..
WO..muje kyu dekh raha hai..Antra thought..
Raghu..chal..nargis said
Raghu an nargis was gone
Nargis say kya hua..koi kaam tha..
Raghu say WO larki bahot tez hai.. Ask dum tikhi mirchi..
Tune muje  Antra ke baat kar ne bulla ya..raghu bhai mari sadi hai.. Tare love set kar ne ka time nahi hai.. Nargis said
Kya..apun to sirf..raghu said
Kya.. Nargis said
Kuch.. Nahi..ragav ka phone aya tha.. Raat ko ready rah na jungle main mill ge.. Raghu said
Theek hai.. Nargis said
Main ama she mill le ate hu..nargis said
Antra came at terrish..raghu look antra..
Antra look raghu with angry nesh.. See feel same think they time raghu look her..see was tern..
Ye muje kyu gur raha hai.. Antra said

At raghu a house
Raghu was came 
Raghu tach daya mai s feed..
Raghu.. Tu kaha tha..daya mai said
Daya mai wo nargis ke gar.. WO nayi larki aye hai.. Raghu said
WO tare daya mai se pahele ho gye kya..Daya mai said
Nahi.. Daya mai I m sorry
Daya mai say main kuch din le liye bahar jaa rahe hu.. Tu sambhal le na..
Raghu look satya..
Raghu..tu satya se larai mat kar na.. Tu mare bate jaisa hai..satya tare bhai hai.. Daya mai said
Raghu look satya..
Satya was angry on raghu.

At night
Antra look out side from window
Antra kya soch rahe hai.. Nargis said
WO.. Muje har time gur ta rah ta hai.. Pata nahi kyu..muje kuch ho jaa ta hai..I m blasing..Antra said
Raghu was jump an came at room  from window
Raghu.. Antra said
Raghu look Antra but tell with nargis 
Nargis..chal.. Ragav wight kar raha hai..raghu said
Antra say nargis turn chip jar ragav she mill ne jaa rahe hai
Haan..nargis said
But.. Antra said
Tuje pyaar nahi hua..jab ho ga tu samaj jaege.. Nargis said
Nargis chal..yade tu bhi chal.. Raghu said
Nahi.. Antra said
Kya Antra an drama mat kar chal.. Nargis said
Raghu say main jaa ta hu..tu yade ko le kar aa.
Raghu try to gone
Nargis say main dekh te hu.. 
Nargis was gone
Antra hold his hend..
Raghu pus her at wall..
Raghu say tu muje se nafrat kar te hai..
Nahi.. Antra said
Antra say mera hath chodo..
Raghu came near to Antra..
Antra s heart beet was fast..
Raghu put his hend on Antra s waist..
Antra be apni ankhe band kar le.. Raghu kiss Antra s lips..
Chalo.. Nargis said
Nargis was shocked
Antra.. Nargis said
Antra was shocked..
Antra was smiling..
Antra was run..

After few minutes
Raghu set at jeep..
Antra chal..nargis said
Nargis..tuje kuch puch na nahi.. Antra said
Ye pal tera hai.. Main jan te hu..mujik tare jindgi hai.. But tare papa ko tera mujik pasand nahi.. Tera derd tuje sukun ke taraf le jaa raha hai.. Raghu hai thoda paresaan kar ga tuje..but pyaar bhi bahot kar ga.. Nargis said
Antra an nargis sheet at jeep..

At jungle
Nargis an ragav gone to telk..
Raghu an Antra walk
Antra tu muje tapaan to nahi mar ge na ..raghu said 
Kyu.. Antra said
Wo apun ne tuje kiss kiya.. Raghu said
 rain was start..
Antra feel the rain
Raghu opin his sirt an put the sirt on Antra s head..
Raghu say i m sorry
Antra hug raghu..
Raghu came in the sirt.. Raghu kiss Antra agen..agen..agen..
Raghu listion same voice..
Nargis pus ragav..an slap ragav s chick..
Antra say kya hua..
Nargis say ise lag main sadi se pahele..
Chod..Antra said
Nargis hold ragav s coller..
Nargis.. Chod de.. Raghu said
Nargis an Antra sheet in the jeep 
Nargis an antra was gone
Kya kiya tune.. Raghu said
Kuch nahi..ragav said
Larki ko pata na nahi ata tuje.. Raghu said

At Antra s house
Antra ye larke sirf besarm ho te hai..nargis said
Nahi.. Nargis WO tuje se pyaar kar ta hai.. Antra said
Nahi.. WO besram use to main chod ge nahi.. Nargis said
An muje he muje he kuch kar na padega..Antra said

Raghu say ab muje he kuch kar na padega
Pricap
Raghu s ama say mare paav main derd ho raha hai
Antra hold his ama s feed an pus..
Antra say ama an kaisa lag raha hai..
Raghu s ama say acha.. Beta tnx..turn bahot ache hai
Antra say ama main doctor ban be wali hu..so itna jan hu..
Apun haddi tod ga an ye haddi jod ge.. Raghu said
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