KRIYAANSH OS 'HBD david bhai'

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey guys this is a os specially for the birthdayBoy David aka arshafan94. it was his bday yesterday  Half of the credit goes to MD tnxx for giving me tips  muaah <3 . Once again happy birthday bro hope you like it as it's my first ever os.(warning it's realy short)

 

 

Kriyaansh os: sport's and chocolate cake is all you need.

 

The whole gang was in the rehearsal hall discussing which sport they would choose  for sports day. Vp sir was out of town and gave them the responsibility to organise a sport competition on sports day. Here in the rehearsal hall the boys and girls were fighting.

Boys: CRICKET!

Girls: TENNIS!!

Boys: CRICKET!!

Girls: TENNIS!!

Kr: STOOOPPP!!! 

All looked at kriya who shouted.

Kr: guys first stop screaming and second we will do tennis.

Rey: but baby..

Kr: no but's we will do tennis and that's final. Last year we had cricket already and we need something fresh and new.

Sw: kriya something fresh and new that's fine but we know nothing about tennis.

Girls: WE DO.

Rey: oh realy and what do you know about it???

Kr: we know that it is a sport and that boys look very hot while playing tennis.

Sha: especially Federer. The girls went in their Federer Dreamland. And the boys were burning in jealousy. Rey took swayam aside.

Rey: listen I think we should agree with the girls I realy don't want kriya to be irritated with me again.

Sw: yeah I agree. They told the other boys and then all shouted out loud which brought the girls out of their dreamland.

Boys: OKE WE AGREE.

Girls: huh what ??

Rey: we agree.

Kr: itni jaldi?

Rey: yah koi problem??

Kr: no no koi problem nahi hai.

Rey: but we have one condition.

Kr: what condition?

Rey: you all will have to teach us.

Kr: that only?? Theek hain will do right girls?? She turned to the girls and nodded to them. All said yes and took their respective boys away. Rey and kriya were now alone in RH. Kriya showed him videos of Federer and teached him how to hold his racket and how to react when the ball comes to you.

After a few hours of practice both went to fresh up in the changing room. Kriya told rey to come to her house after she's ready.

After an hour  kriya heard the doorbell ring. It was rey. She opened the door and led him in.

Rey: hey baby. He said and pecked her cheek.

kr: hey, come in.

rey: so why did you called me here.

Kr: it's a surprise. She went to stand behind him and covered his eyes with her palms.

Kr: walk and don't stop till I say so. Rey followed her orders.

Rey : oke mam.

Kr: stop. Rey stopped and she removed her palms.

Kr: tadaaa. In her room there  was a table with one chair two red candles and a delicious looking dark chocolate cake.

Rey: wow dark chocolate cake my fav. Thank you baby.

Kr: your welcome. Now go sit. Rey sat down but then said.

Rey: kriy your chair??

Kr: is here. She said and went to sit on his lap.

Kr: now what are you waiting for cut the cake. She gave him the knife when he putted his hand on hers making him cut the cake with her. And then they both fed eachother.

Rey: waise why did I deserve this cake?

Kr: because you worked very hard today. And she went further with eating cake. Rey looked at her cutely.

Rey: you look like a monkey

Kr: what??

Rey: I said you look like a cute monkey when you eat there is chocolate all over your face.

Kr: oh realy I look like a monkey. She said and then putted some cake on his cheeks

Kr: now you also look like a monkey.

Rey: oh god what would I do without you.

Kr: you know someone once said that sports and chocolate cake is all you need.

Rey: really?

Kr: no I just made that up in my mind.

Rey: well actually you're right. If I wouldn't have you I would just make sports and chocolate cake my gf.

Kr: reeyyy!!!!

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So that was my first attempt on a os.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome os...

loved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
resss
unres
awesum os shan...
Loved thein convo...
cute...
It seemed like u n sharwin were having ur date on ur first anni.
Was it really like that?Edited by Meghna_kriyansh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ahaaa!!
totally rofling dii!
ANd the trust me, an amazing os!!!
I want a bigger one next time okiess!!!
loved it!
And the last part, me  want moreee

Loved the os and u!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowww this was a superb os
Loved it ❤️
So cute one thanx for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
cuteee...
luvd it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsumm one...
heheh Tennis and cricket... argument was sooo cuteee.

and lat chocolate cake part wasss superbbb... <3

amazing attempt...
meghzzzz thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
unresd on pg 1
do read my comment n then answer too
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome os
Cute so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing attempt pari.
i really liked it.
but you must know cricket and tennis are my two favorite sports.
i don't like any one more than the other.
and i admire and idolize sachin as much as i do federer.

but i really liked the fighting and the cake part.
very well written