If only..(A VeeBa One shot) - Page 2

Wow.. Jst amazing!!!!! Loved it to the core... Plz write more u r amazing.. ⭐️ 😳

It's awesome... 😭 touched my heart...
Ur an incredible writer , your expression of emotions and selection of words is brilliant..
Keep writing 😳 you rock literally 😆

Beautiful  OS 😭

Wow! Ye kya tha?pehle gussa aaya tumpe ki tumne veera ko maar daala..but last ka part saara gussa khagaya..itni acchese aur koi feelings express kar sakta sivaye meri sis ke...lovely story..superb ending..hamesha Jo hosh mein hota hai usse ehsaas hota hai ki wo doosre se kitna pyaar karta hai tumne toh ulta dikha diya..loved it boss..keep it up👍🏼btw thanks for the PM

Vibha beaitiful os .kash veera bhi yeh bolti but aisa kabhi nahi hoga

for a second i thought what was happening...awesome and lovely start...loved it...

Very nice OS, Vibha. As always your written very well ⭐️ Edited by Jyo_Veebafan - 9 years ago

What a beautifully written story. Its always a nice surprise to find a new story by you and a pleasure to read

awww this was just perfect vibha,i loved it to the core ,thank god that wedding sequence was just a dream even i was restless as veera.this is an awesome work

You made me cry mate. With every line was praying Oh no! let it be a nightmare only and finally!!! This is simply fantastic.