Ek Veer Ki Ardaas - Veera

If only..(A VeeBa One shot) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
This content was originally posted by: Sukhmani05

Beautiful OS ... Loved it so much ... Loved the way you described Veera regretting her mistake ... Just Wow !!! ... If something similar could be shown in the show from Veera's side , then it would be Awesome !!



Thank you😃 yeah i know...😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
This content was originally posted by: ElireEli

Awesome! Awesome! Awesome!!! Loved it to the core...loved the way you made Veera realize Ballu's true worth...only if something similar happened in the show as well😭...I think I should return back to reality😆 Thanks for this wonderful OS dear🤗 Keep writing more please...helps to survive this awesome track😳



aww thank you so much Eliza😃🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
This content was originally posted by: sarah333

Awww !!  I just loved the OS...Please keep writing more!You are one amazing writer! it was really touching 😭 !



Thanx Sarah..😃
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This content was originally posted by: Lovelyvb

Wow.. Jst amazing!!!!! Loved it to the core... Plz write more u r amazing.. ⭐️ 😳



Thanks Saffa😃 hope i got ur name right😉
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This content was originally posted by: Princessxyz

It's awesome... 😭 touched my heart...
Ur an incredible writer , your expression of emotions and selection of words is brilliant..
Keep writing 😳 you rock literally 😆



really? thanks a lot dear😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
This content was originally posted by: wowmoon

Beautiful  OS 😭

LOVED IT 😃...



Thank u Rekha😃
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This content was originally posted by: Asmimelody

Wow! Ye kya tha?pehle gussa aaya tumpe ki tumne veera ko maar daala..but last ka part saara gussa khagaya..itni acchese aur koi feelings express kar sakta sivaye meri sis ke...lovely story..superb ending..hamesha Jo hosh mein hota hai usse ehsaas hota hai ki wo doosre se kitna pyaar karta hai tumne toh ulta dikha diya..loved it boss..keep it up👍🏼btw thanks for the PM



Tumne mera OS padhne ka kasht kiya?😲😆 is review ke liye Thanks😃
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Thanks😃
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This content was originally posted by: krock

Vibha beaitiful os .kash veera bhi yeh bolti but aisa kabhi nahi hoga



Thank u Ankita😃
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This content was originally posted by: rashi...

for a second i thought what was happening...awesome and lovely start...loved it...



oh... thank you😃