AsYa OS - It Doesnt Have To Be Love! 14.9. - Page 5

wonderfull n amazing..

Awesome os dear
Thanks for pm :)

it was wonderful

You know im a very picky reader i dont like all the stuff and hence i dont comment! This is the most meaningful OS ive read after forum went batshit crazy and umm dead! Seriously it was full of emotions and so different than ur normal fluff! It was great and it brought out such a beautiful msg. Im gonna be honest i hated it wen asad said he cheated on her i just feel theres no reason or excuse good enough to justify an affair and although no where in this u ever tried to justify it but from the world around me that ive seen even the word affair leaves a bitter taste in my mouth. Anyway im glad he didnt cheat. The story was nexr to perfect. Couples nowadays lack patience marriage has become a means to meet their needs and when those needs are not met they opt for a way out what they dont understand is that it dsnt have to be fluff and love and happiness all the time it just has to be you and your partner! Great os! Plz do continue writing such stuff

Wow that was some intense writing !!!

This is such a lovely OS ! 

i'm speechless after reading this! I have mixed feelings...i actually cried when Asad said he would give away zoya to some one else!!!😭

Thoroughly enjoyed reading it..
First half was sad but cute..
Apt title..
Thanks for the pm

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After reading this, what I feel for you is most definitely love.. That was awesome really.. Taking a person for granted often leads to this... Both Asad and Zoya stopped putting their everything into their relationship and it eventually died.. We forget that we can fall more in love with a person everyday only if we put in the effort.. And you portrayed it beautifully.. :)
And the revelation.. Asad's sacrifice for Zoya was proof enough of his undying love for her...
And the ending was so good.. I am a sucker for happy endings.. Love you for giving the story one...
Loved every word of it.. :)