AsYa OS: ONE DAY AS ASAD AHMED KHAN - Page 7

Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Amin21


Beautiful os yaar
How I wish we could have scenes like this to watch in the show
But thanks to you for at least having it here
It was just awesome
Love it
Hop to get another one ASAP
Waiting

that's a great compliment...
thank u
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by radadolcevida


so adorable really, I just love it
and it was really funny , we know asad's secret , why he was a boring guy😆

glad that u got the secret 😆
thanks for reading
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by ksen


very nice os.loved it

thanks
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by aYASHIKA


Such an adorable os...
So cute and sweet. .
Loved it

thanks yash 😛
Posted: 9 years ago
this is one of thet best os i ever read really cute and sweet os 
Posted: 9 years ago

Hi...srashti...well i use to be a silent reader before not anymore...well i have followed your story UNITED WE STAND and it was a beautiful story...one of my FAV'S on this forum...now this OS it is a very well written and defined update...ASYA are as cute as adorable...they have so much of the spark and you showed it beautifully...the deal between them was actually a good idea and both got to know what they have to face...and feel when they are angry or ignorant towards each other...a lovely OS ...continue more with your work...
Posted: 9 years ago
SHO SHOLLy for late reply kaan pakad ke 
Hayye Zoya working as AAK...

ab pata chala mera asad kitna kaam karta hai...

Very new and nice concept...

iss baari kuch miley to muje batana mujhe bhi likhna h OS😉
Posted: 9 years ago
My god..
How can u think these kind of concepts yaar

Zoya as Asad ahmed khan 4 one day..


But this Os is brilliantly written srashti

Loved it
Posted: 9 years ago
Unres at page 1Edited by aniha20 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by aniha20


Res

Uhh..First of all sorry for this late shrash..
And am reading your work as first time . I can simply say you are the best and talented writer 😳

One day as AAK
vrusha part was very funny. They both burning in jealous 😆 and zoya is proud too

She finally found about her mr.khan's hardwork and sincerity in his work..

All the time, Zoya's eyes
lingered on Asad's face. His handsome face
looked relieved today...no tiredness and no
frowns. She felt silly for fighting with him...for
no fault on his behalf.
I can imagine him now

Loved that ending na !!

PLEASE DON'T KILL ME AFTER
READING THIS...I FEEL I AM NO MORE A WRITER
AFTER WRITING AND RE-READING THIS
Dont you dare to tell this okie 😡

Do write more !!

Love ya ❤️


thanks for the long comment anu
no problem at all 😊
i am glad u liked it 😆


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