Do Dil Ek Jaan

~Ye Sazish Hain Boondon Ki(Rantara OS,Last Chapter @ Pg18)~

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Posted: 9 years ago

So hello pals. i am back with my another OS on rantaraπŸ˜†. This is the sequel to my previous to rantara os a monsoon night's dream and kabhi joo badal barshe. πŸ˜³.. thought to make it a OS series. Thanks for the immense appreciation for my prev two OS.😳 I hope u would like this small bit of story too. Otherwise as usual i am ready to face ur chappals, jhutas everything...🀒
PRECAP:
God those heavy jewelries and lehenga!! I couldn't even move properly as I moved towards the room with ajji and falguni. God I was so tensed. My whole body was literally shaking like a epidemic patient and my BP was surely doubled along with my heartbeat. If our physiology teacher rashmi mam measured my heartbeat and BP at that moment surely she would faint at the spot.

"Madam?!! Hath kyun thand par gaye?!!"  falguni teased from my side holding my bangle clad hand. Her eyes were gleaming with mischief. I almost gulped as my breath chock. "woo kuch naii, woo bas it's  too cold outside naa." I answered her like a fool. "hmmm!! Thand lag rahi hain. To tere chahere pe pasina kyun?!" she said looking towards my forehead. "Pasina?!! Nahin too..." I said in stumbled voice and falguni giggled. "Madam chehere kaa rang utar gaya hain!! Akhein bari bari hain... nabs itne tez chal rahien hain... madam sab samajh aa raha hain..." falguni teased again. I just looked towards down with my utterly tensed and embarrassed eyes. My chicks were feeling warm.

"Bhai nahin chornewaala aaj tujhe!!.." falguni whispers in my ears and I elbow her. can't she see my condition?! She made me much more tensed. "Kya re falguni.. kyun dara rahi hain bachi koo... aaj kee din aise koi darata hain kya?!!" ajji scolded falguni. She was also accompanying us. "Ajji, aaj kee din larkion kaa tension automatically bar jata hain. Aap ne hii too kahan tha." falguni giggled. "Haan.. jab tera waqt ayega naa tab dekh loongi.." ajji said rolling her eyes. "Meri waqt ane mein abhi bahut time hain ajji. But seriously... antu yaar why are u so afraid. Hum log medical student hain yaar... hum logon koo too pata hain kii actually hota kya hain!" falguni winked and I clutched the hem of my lehenga tightly. Gosh!! She was such a... "hey antu.. are you afraid about the upcoming pain?!" my eyes widened like hell as I looked towards her naughty frown. "Falguni!!!" I said greeting my teeth. "acha acha baba... gussa mat kar... mazak tha yaar.." she said. "chup raaho..." I just said helplessly. I couldn't even shout at her like before. As if like my voice was lost.

"Falguni... pata nahin tuu angrezi mein kya zabar zabar kar rahi hain iske sath... par antara tuu isski baton pe bilkul dhyan mat dena.. aaj tere zindagi kaa sab se bara din hain... sab se khoobsurat din.. jis din kaa har larki koo intezaar raheta hain.. dar kyun rahi hain?!... kuch nahin hoga." Ajji said caressing my face lovingly. I felt relieved and smiled towards her. "Wohin too main kahe rahi hoon antara see ajji. Itna dar ne ki kya zarurat hain... Arey THIS IS YOUR FIRST NIGHT AFTER NARRIAGE!! Aur tujhe dekh ke lag raha hain ki  tu koi bali kii bakhri hain jissey main aur ajji chara nee kee liye lee jaa rahi hain." falguni's loud laugh skipped my heartbeat again.

YES, IT WAS MY VERY FIRST BRIDAL NIGHT WITH HIM!! RAGHU!!

Seemed too unbelievable right?! Yes, but it's true. We were actually married to each other and he was my husband!!

PS: have no idea that how it will come along..🀒

INDEX

chapter 1= page 3

Chapter 2= page 6

Chapter 3= page 10

Chapter 4= page 14

Chapter 5= page 16

Chapter 6= page 18

My other works on rantara:
link to my writing index: 
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Roy.nikki143 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res
N omg riyu you seriously did write a sequel omg i love you so much πŸ€—
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Wonderful start πŸ˜³
loved it !!
Rantara ki shaadi ho chuki hain πŸ˜†
pls update soon πŸ˜‰
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Very nice . 
Loved it . 
Thank you .
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First of all what a beautiful name!
Now I've started to sing the song...
Loved it ria babe..can't wait for..you know what na? πŸ˜‰
Jaldi jaldi update kardena..intazaar nai hota 😳
Love you girl!
Hugs πŸ€—
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lovely ria...
 
awsome,start...do continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely os dear...plzzz contionue update soon
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okkksss...so here cums a romantic os...
or i shld say super romantic πŸ˜‰ os frm ria...
cool... i liked it...rantara married β€οΈ
awww...antu n falguni convo πŸ˜†
do update soon vl b waiting fr d full os πŸ˜Ž
thanks... 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ohhh...Riaaa...its sooo beautiful...😳...πŸ‘...πŸ‘πŸΌ...❀️...

wen i read d title...i was humming dose lines...😊...awesome title...πŸ‘πŸΌ...
but wen i started reading it...i was perplexed...πŸ˜•...πŸ€”...den...was like dis...😲...
y is Antu hell-scared..a little nervousness cud b understood though...but listening to Falguni......literally...besharmi ki hadd hi ho gayi...πŸ€ͺ......(...Ria...tune aisa likha...???!!!...😲...πŸ˜‰...πŸ˜†...)...

Kahin tumhaare teacher ka naam bhi Rashmi toh nahi...????...πŸ˜‰...πŸ˜†...

Acha huwa...Aaji ne acchi or calming baatein ki...πŸ˜ƒ......
Waiting for it......πŸ€—...

n in d end i was singing..."Dil...Ding...Dang...Ding...Dole..."......donno y though...???...πŸ˜•......πŸ€ͺ...πŸ˜†...πŸ˜ƒ...😳...

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Posted: 9 years ago
^^ andy ji... tera sukkon ka bhi reply de do...😭😭😭😭