Ashlok SS-Game Of Destiny(Chapter5-Pg40)...14/12/2014 - Page 3

Posted: 9 years ago
This sounds so interesting meerab. No worries we will wait for your return. And all the best for your exams. 
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice start...
 
Interesting fact is that Shlok hate his father...
 
eagerly waiting to know what happen next...
 
Take your own time ...concentrate on your studies dear...
 
thanks for the PM..
Posted: 9 years ago




                 
               Chapter 1


Sorry I couldn't resist myself from writing this chapter😆...so enjoy ...
And this part is dedicated to our shlok and anjali only... with no others😃


''How it feels when you are blessed with everything but life cheats you and makes you alone even in the crowd of people...
You crave for love,attention,care and what not but it all seems like a dream with open eyes...you can feel but something you can never touch...something you can never have...
You are just forced into a prison of loneliness''...



Life was the same way for shlok agnihotri...filled with the curse of loneliness...

He was never loved neither he thought he would be...but he was having no regrets...
as he was leading his life according to rules he set for himself long back ...

He was living in a world of his where there was no place for any relationships and love...not his fault...as he was just reflecting what he was given his whole life...unjust treatment,hatred and rejection...

In his whole lifetime as far as he remembered he was only loved once...and was loved to the fullest by his own father...by his real father Ankul mehra...who left him when he was too young even to understand the meaning of life...


He was hardly 6 when his father died in a plane crash...leaving him and his wife anjali at the mercy of others...


Life no longer remained a bed of roses for them...their sweet home was gone
...they were made homeless by ankul's relatives...


Being a naive and weak women anjali never couraged to fight back ...
With her son she went to her brothers house as her parents were no more alive...


For few days she was given sympathy and love but soon taunts replaced the affections...


She was extremely hurt by those pricking sentences of her vahinis...
Why don't she starts working...for how long our husbands will look after her and her son''...


To lessen the guilt and humiliation she started working as a  average earning teacher...but her this single step affected her son's life badly...


Most of the time she remained busy with her job and the poor little kid was at mercy of his aunts...who never bothered about his needs...
Many times he was kept hungry...was beaten by his aunts on a small fight between cousins...many a times he was forced to work in the house like servants...

All this was happening in anjali's absence ...she was totally unaware of sufferings of her son...number of times he found little shlok crying and thought he is missing his father...she used to love him...give all the affection she could... totally ignorant that how badly his little mind was harrased and affected...

Shlok started spending most of his time playing with the street children...to avoid the sufferings at the hand of his aunts...he indulged in fights with boys of bigger age just to let out his frustrations...
Most of the time he came home beaten badly...

And again a long unending list of blames was stamped on anjali...
''You are spoiling our kids...they are well-mannered not like your wild son...its better that both of you leave our home soon and stay at some other place because now everything is getting beyond our patience''...


Anjali was helpless...she cried on her condition...but the thing which was hurting her the most was that her sufferings are ruining her son's future...she wanted to see him emerge as a successful and strong person in life not as weak as she was...

May be destiny also felt petty on her condition and one day her brothers talked to her about a marriage proposal...


''Look anjali we know our wives will not let you stay here peacefully but they are right upto some point...how long we can support you...tomorrow when our children will grow up they will question you and your son the same way our wives and people are doing today ...that's why we want you to lead a happy life...we have a proposal for you from Mr.Niranjan Agnihotri...his mother saw you in the school function and she wants you as her daughter-in-law...he is quite a rich person..will give u and ur son a good life...and moreover he also knows that you have a son''...

At first she refused but when she was emotionally forced she agreed only for shlok's better future...

Another bomb exploded on her at the wedding night when she came to know that nirajan also had a son varad of 7 years from his late wife...she was numb crying badly on her fate and wrong decision...

But niranjan's  initial care for her and shlok proved her thoughts wrong to some extent...

She also proved a good mother for varad...

Shlok was happy too with his new elder brother...things really changed...he started his school and came up as a quite brilliant student...

Everything was going ok when anjali and niranjan's daughter jyoti entered their lives...everyone was happy including shlok and varad...

The occasion was celebrated in a grand way...

Niranjan bought toys for shlok and varad...
unfortunately while playing varad broke his toy and started demanding shlok's toy ...but shlok became adamant that he will not give his toy to him...

Anjali was trying to pacify both but varad started fighting with shlok...and as niranjan stepped inside the room...he scolded anjali for taking her son's side and gave the toy to varad snatching away from shlok...leaving him crying bitterly he left the room lifting varad in his arms...

This first time anjali saw the difference in niranjan's behavior and  shlok felt jealous from varad...first time he felt that he is not his brother but his rival...

Whenever he saw niranjan pampering varad he forcefully wanted to gain his attention by doing nonsense things...but every time he was beaten or scolded...

Anjali was again helpless about his son...her only love was not enough for shlok..shlok was craving for fatherly love too but soon it was clear to him that niranjan is only varad and jyoti's father not his...when he started discriminating between shlok and varad even in small things...


And this thing increased his hatred for him...


Like his height his hatred was increasing for niranjan...but it crossed all limits the day he sent varad abroad for higher studies despite his less marks...when he was the topper of university and requested his mother to talk to niranjan for giving him some money as he wants to go abroad for further studies...


That day until today he considered niranjan his biggest enemy because of whom he lost his single dream of studying in abroad...and now troubling him was the greatest joy of his life...

He joined a small office on temporary basis  to earn enough for himself ...he never asked for a single penny from niranjan after that day...only he was living in that person's house because of her mother for whom he was having some respect ...who always waited for him till late..who still cared for him...


Even today he was trying to open the door silently on her repeated requests otherwise he used to beat the door loudly just to irritate niranjan and to disturb his sleep...


Coming home late and drunk ...verbal fights with niranjan were like a normal routine for him...

And the poor soul anjali was torn apart between the two fulfilling her duties of a mother and a wife...


Shlok and niranjan she had to listen to both  ...about their anger and hatred for each other...

Thousand a times she requested shlok to behave nicely with niranjan so that he gives him respect but he was at no point of return ...

He had already built strong walls of hatred around him in years and now it was almost impossible to melt those with the warmth of love and affection...






Precap is still the same ...😃and don't know when I will update the next chapter...😆

By the way sorry for any mistakes...


Edited by meerab... - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
good update dear👏
poor shlok already go through so much pain😭helpless anjali😭hate na😡😡
waiting for astha's entry❤️
update soon dear...
Edited by DEVU.NAIR - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago

Nice update Meerab...

Poor Shlok has faced so much torture from childhood...
 
Feeling pity for Anjali who has undergone so much taruma in her life...
 
NA is proved to be a bad father...to treat his own kids and step son in a different way...
 
Anjali is got struck between his son and husband...
 
Hope shlok will find all the joy and happiness with Astha...
 
thanks for the wonderful treat...
 
 
Posted: 9 years ago

Nice prologue and update 1...
Thanks for the PM.
Posted: 9 years ago
it's awesome meerab
I loved it thanks for pm
Posted: 9 years ago
ok so dat is y shlok is like dat 
bt y is astha is here
do update soon

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