New FF: Tumhi Dekho Naa... *Chapter 3 on Page 11* - Page 2

Posted: 9 years ago
Welcome dear
Will be waiting for your first post about the story
Take your time and write in peace than post
Posted: 9 years ago
First of all a big hi to u Sanjana 
Remember me Priya on RKR 
How s ur school and studies going on yaar
Its being a long time since I have seen ur post
And why are u asking yaar just start of with ur ff
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If possible continue ur old one also if u get time
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Priya
Posted: 9 years ago
Awww you guys are so adorable <3

To let you know, I've written out the prologue. It's ready to be posted but again I'm going to be posting it only on Thursday. I'm doing this only so that people will get more time to add me as a buddy, as I don't want to rush anything.

Please add me as a buddy as soon as possible, so it becomes easier for me to PM. I had received tons of requests today and all those people have been added and will definitely be PMed. If you would like to be PMed, please add me as a buddy.

Sanjana
Posted: 9 years ago
Hey!

So this is the prologue. Quite long, according to me because I could not stop typing. My fingers were crazy on my keyboard!

Chapter 1 will be up this Saturday, as I've promised. Please comment, tell me what you think and please add me as a buddy if you would like to be PMed.

I have checked to make sure that there are no spelling errors but if there are, will try and keep a close eye next time :)

I have PMed everybody that added me as a buddy, and will continue to for all upcoming chapters.

Love,
Sanjana

Prologue

'I'm late. Two minutes, 27 seconds late. Maa is going to kill me'.

'Relax, it's okay. Do minute late hai koi maarega nahi'. Vikram said behind him, trying to catch up to his pace.

'Tu chup kar. Tere ko toh punctuality ki cheez maloom hi nahi hai, tu mujhe mat sikha'. Ram snapped.

This is Mr. Ram Kapoor. Not so old, not so young. He's 34. He's usually a very fun light hearted person, but when it comes to work, he's one of those extremely serious types. He needs to be perfect at every single thing when it comes to work. He can't stand being insulted.

'Arre itna perfect hone ki zaroorat nahi hai. Calm down, take a deep breath, and just relax. Waise toh tere paas itne paise hai, mujhe samajh mein nahi aa raha hai ki aur paise kamane ki zaroorat kyun hai'.

'Abbe just shut up. Tu chup chaap mere peeche aa warna meeting ke baad mujhse maar khaayega'. Ram stopped walking for a minute and turned to face Vikram. 'Abhi bata de, chup chaap aayega ki nahi? Nahi aayega toh tu yahin rukh, meeting ke baad hum dono saath mein ghar chalte hain, or else tu abhi ghar chala jaa'.

'Arre aaunga na chup chaap se, dhamki mat de mujhe Ram. Tere se darta nahi hoon mein. Abhi chal raha hai ki nahi?'

Without replying, Ram walked quicker than ever and he went into a large room, tall, proud, and confidently, firstly spotting his mom. He really wasn't sure if mom was what he should call her, because judging what happened between him and his so called mom a few days ago, he really wasn't sure about their relationship. He quickly looked away from her.

On the other side of town...

'Where're you going?' A loud voice called behind her.

'Where do you think I'm going Shruthi? School? Har roz iss wakt school jaati hoon mein kya?' Priya asked, quite irritated.

'Arre aaj toh mat jaa na tu, ghar pe reh le, baahar aa na mere saath, lunch?' Shruthi pleaded behind her.

'Dekh aaj nahi ho paayega, tu kal aa na tab free hoon mein'. Priya promised, quickly applying kohl on her eyes.

'Har roz yahi bolti hai tu, kitna time hua hai hum dono saath mein kahin baahar jaana. Itna busy rehti hai tu, wakt kahan milti hai yaar?'

'Dekh, aaj time nahi hai mere paas tere bakwaas ke liye, tu ghar jaa meri maa, mein aaj shaam tere ko phone kar dungi. Okay?' Priya turned to face her. 'Please?'

'Mein hi ek pagal hoon jo har din tere peeche aati hoon. Tu jaa, jo karna hai kar. Mein ghar jaa rahi hoon'. Shruthi muttered under her breath, grabbed her purse and stormed out.

'Haan, kissi ne roka nahi tumko!' Priya called behind her.

She's such a child at heart, Priya always thought that way. These small fights they have every morning is kind of like a part of the day. It was actually entertaining to see Shruthi's face during the whole arguement.

She snapped out of her thoughts right when her dramatic mom walked in.

'Yeh kya hai?' Her mom asked, looking quite disgusted.

'Kya?'

'Yeh tune kya pehna hai Priya? Har roz yahi pehenke jaati hai tu! Kuch aur pehene ke liye nahi mila? Rukh, mein na Ayesha ke kapde tere liye leke aati hoon'.

'Maa, abhi abhi Shruthi gayi hai, tum please shuru mat ho jaana. Waise bhi, mujhe inn kapdon mein hi comfortable feel hoti hai. Aur mein wahi pehnungi jo mujhe accha lagta hai'. Priya said.

'Arre Shipra, tum yeh kya kar rahi ho? Jaane do usse, der ho jaayegi. Aur Priya inn kapdon mein hi acchi lagti hai, usse jo pehena hai usse pehne do. Ab jaao tum, Ayesha bula rahi hai'. Sudhir said. He's Priya's very supportive, kind and very nice father. Priya always considered him as a role model.

'Thanks papa. Anyways, mujhe na der ho rahi hai. I'll see you later. Ayesha ko bol dena ki uski dress mere almaari mein padi hui thi, aur Kartik ka gala thodi si kharab hai toh usse garam paani de dena. Aur haan, maa ko bol dena ki kal cake banaayi thi meine aur maa ne abhi tak khaayi hi nahi toh usse khila dena warna kharab ho jaayegi'.

'Aur der karaani hai tere ko? Jaa ab, you're getting late beta'.

With that, Priya quickly grabbed her purse and rushed out.

Kapoor Industries:

'Ram! Ram, wait, I have to talk to you'.

Ram shut his eyes out of frustration and paused from walking.

'Boliye'. He said awkwardly, without looking at her.

'Woh mein soch rahi thi ki aaj shaam thodi si extra, matlab, free time hai toh I was wondering agar hum dono bahaar dinner ke liye jaa sakthe hain?' Niharika asked. She was Ram's step mother. Someone who he loved a lot till he found out something...shocking, if you will, a few days ago.

'I'm sorry, I have plans. Aur kuch?' He asked, maybe a bit rudely. He still did not face her.

She walked away, without answering, seeming a bit upset and disappointed.

'Tere shakal se hi saaf nazar aati hai ki kitna lonliness feel karta hai tu. Iss liye mein kehta hoon ki-',

'Tu apna bakwaas mat shuru kar de, chal, let's go for a walk'. Ram suggested.

'Nahi Ram, hear me out. Please, bohot ho gaya. Kitna dhoka aur handle karnewala hai tu? Kaafi nahi hai? Pehle Radhika, aur ab Niharika? Kissi ko chahiye nahi tujhe, jo tera khayal rakhein aur tujhe khoob sara pyaar karein?'

'Dekh, pehle tu Radhika ke baare mein baat mat kar. You know I don't like talking about her. Aur haan, chahiye mujhe koi. Har kissi ko chahiye. Aur mujhe milega, zaroor milega koi, I know it. Agar koi bad experiences face ki meine, then doesn't mean mujhe koi milne nahi wala. I'm just being patient, ek din aayegi yeh ladki. Zaroor aayegi. I strongly believe in love, and I know, for a fact that mere liye iss duniya mein koi hai, bas mujhe patience rakhni padegi. That's all. Aur mere saath, tu bhi patience rakh. Agar I'm confident, then you can be too'. Ram genuinely said confidently, and pulled Vikram into a nice man hug.

At Priya's bookstore...

'The Vow, kitni acchi movie thi na? Ek review hai iss magazine mein, dekh'.

'Shruthi, mein yahan kaam karti hoon, yeh ghar nahi hai mera. Mujhe kaam karne de, tu jaa yahan se, bohot distract kar rahi hai tu'. Priya snapped.

'Accha bata, tere ko yeh movie acchi lagi?' Shruthi asked.

'Hmmm... Teek thi'. Priya replied, seriously not concentrating or listening to Shruthi.

'Mujhe toh bohot acchi lagi. Kitna cute tha'.

'Arre yeh sab movies mein hi acchi lagti hai, aise real life mein nahi hai aisi perfect love story'. Priya said, still barely concentrating.

'Kya bol rahi hai? Aisa zaroor hota hai. Teri mummy papa ko hi dekh le. Woh dono pyaar karte hain. Tu kaise bol sakthi hai yeh ki tu pyaar mein believe nahi karti? I'm sure tere liye bhi koi zaroor bana hai iss duniya mein'.

'What rubbish. Mujhe nahi lagta ki mere liye koi bana hai. Waise bhi aise bakwaas cheezon mein believe nahi karti mein. Aur meine kab manna ki thi ki pyaar ki cheez nahi hai? Of course hai. Lekin har ek insaan ke liye nahi. Mere liye koi nahi hai banna hai, woh toh bhagwaan ki marzi hai. I don't believe in sabke liye ek insaan hoti hai. Mujhe kissi ko nahi chahiye. I'm living a wonderful life, I don't want any pyaar vyaar. Mujhe iss simple, decent life mein hi khushi milti hai'.

'Abhi yeh bol rahi hai, baad mein dekhte hain ki yahi sochti hai ki nahi'. Shruthi said.

Priya smiled and rolled her eyes. There is nobody for her. It's just fantasy that people believe in. She's just happy with the way everything is. Just like this.

                      -xxx-

Okay. So that was quite a long prologue, and it was kind of like a chapter, but well, I'm just thinking I'll leave it as a prologue :P

Comment below, let me know what you think of the prologue. Chapter 1 will be up on Saturday. Let me know if you want to be PMed but please add me as a buddy first, so it is easy for me to PM you.

Love
Sanjana



Posted: 9 years ago
Nice prologue.
Waiting for 1 chapter.
Posted: 9 years ago
Very Beautiful Prologue Sanjana
Eagerly waiting for the first chapter 
Thanks for the PM😊
Posted: 9 years ago
Really loved the prologue pls write soon the 1st part lovely intro waiting how Raya will meet
Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice and interesting prolugue
Ram Priya are so opposite to each other
let's see how their destiny will meet
continue soon will wait for chapter 1
Posted: 9 years ago
Very Nice prologue
Waiting for the 1st  chapter

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