New ff :Tere mere milan ki ye raina part 2 -page 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks for the support and encouragement to write further 
i will post the next part soon

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nice start
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
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intersting stry
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                                        Tere mere milan ki ye raina

Part 2

Priya reaching Kashmir

Jo kabhi jannat hua krta tha aj khamoshi ki chadre odhe pda h

Kashmir ki bebasi dekhkr priya ki aakhe bhi bhr ayi soch kr tho aayee thi logo ki himmat bnegi pr yha tho apni himmat hi khone k kgar pr h wo

Pr khte h na Dr hona tutne ki ijazat nhi deta

Priya phir sambhli phir udh kr khadi hui or usne phla kdam jaise hi zamee pr rakha usme ek nyi umeed ne jnam liya or wo nikal pdi humdardi jtane nhi balki unsb logo ko bharosa dene...

  • Priya and her team in army camp Kashmir

Priya as the team leader instructing others about the plan to be carried out suddenly someone call her

Army man: Dr. Priya boat is ready we have to leave

Priya along with other 2 staff members start the journey

The journey begins...

Priya instructing her team members.

Priya : guys we have to save as many life as possible but before that i would recommend u people to complete ur antibiotic course for the third day.

Staff: dr. x and dr. Y

Ram kapoor in one of the 5 star hotel in Kashmir struggling too save the lives of peoples over there

😊Ram found a wireless in the top floor of the hotel n immediately dialled the no.

Which get connected with the army officer sailing in the same boat as priya ..😃

Wireless conversation between army officer and ram kapoor

Ram kapoor:hello i m ram kapoor speaking from the hotel xyz...ther r many life in danger we needs help

Officer: sure sir actually we r sailing in between the old residential areas today they people want our attention more than u so sorry for the inconvenience but we will definitely reach there tomarrow ..😲

Priya interrupts the conversation saying ,who is there??

Officer: mam  koi 5 star hotel se h seeking for help saying many life in danger

Priya take the phone from officer

Priya: sir i m a doctor patrolling today <what kind of danger is there ??? Is there any one ill or something else..

Ram: mam there is many disease prevailing from the last 2 weeks due to the uncleaned drinking water

         And from yesterday morning many cases of dehydration have been reported, we have some medicine which i used to carry with me but i don't think its sufficient.

Priya : u r staying in 5 star so how many packed ware bottles r there on ur floor

Ram : 10 i guess and we r 50 members here😔

Priya : k then don't drink that water

Ram :r u mad😡 . khane ko h nhi pani peeyege nhi tho mar jayege😡,I m doubting apko doctor ki degree kisne de diya

Priya : ek min stop shouting on me and listen😡😡 carefully

Ram :why do i listen😡

Priya: because u need help nt me😉

Ram : k fine tell wht u want to say😕

Priya : collect as many water bottle as possible

Ram: really.. mujhe tho pta hi nhi tha. Thanz but no thnx.🤪

Priya : u will listen or not u r not the only person who need help ther r many more..

Ram :k😈

Priya : along with water bottle collect sugar and salt pack from the different rooms . dissolve these in water and drink in small quantity and emphasise on the dehydrated patients and collect the first aid box available in different rooms on ur floor only and first aid the people

Ram: (scratching his forehead)Ye tho mane socha hi nhi thanz

Priya : its kk wase degree kheraat me nhi milti...😉

Convo over

Priya : khadoos'...😈

Ram : hitler...😈

         Moving back to the boat

They r moving in different localities providing medical help and food suppliments

Mumbai kapoor mansion Still tere is no information about ram...

In helping the people pta hi nhi chala kase 1 week over ho gya..

After 1 week time to go back for priya as next lot of doctors arrived in the city and taken the charge of campaine...

Ram is also admitted in the medical camp as he is having high fever .His head was burning hot when army reaches to his hotel after lots off difficulty .

Priya refuses to go back as she is more willing to serve people in Kashmir rather then go back

Priya also in the medical camp where ram is admitted

She is treating patients with utmost care suddenly hear someone shouting in the camp

In another room ram after gaining conscious starts shouting over the staff

Ram : M ram kapoor hu  ase kitne hospitals khareed sakta hu  app mujhe samjhyege that i should wait for a call no i will not wait😡

Priya asking nurse outside ram's room which is audible to ram

Priya : sister kya hua kon shore mcha raha h

Sister : dr. Tere is a pt. Asking for seperate room but its not available

Priya : tell him its not his house its an emergency camp agr tbyat theek ho gai h tho he can leave

Ram: (who is listening to the conversation)😡 shouts how dare u to talk to me like that..

Priya without entering the room replyed

Priya : don't shout there are other pt. Also I  don't have whole day for u..

And leaves the place

After 2 days ram kapoor leave for Mumbai ...

Now its time for priya also to leave as she has to reach her college in which she is teachinggg...( she is teaching in a medical college).

 

Lo aa gye ram or priya waps Mumbai after seeing all the hardship of life...

                                               (ab age inki zindgi kya turn leti h janne k liye pdte rhiye  Tere mere Milan ki ye raina)

                                                                                                          

 

                                                                                                                                        To be continued...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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superbbb lines...
"
Priya phir sambhli phir udh kr khadi hui or usne phla kdam jaise hi zamee pr rakha usme ek nyi umeed ne jnam liya or wo nikal pdi humdardi jtane nhi balki unsb logo ko bharosa dene..."

ram as khadus priya as hitler seoson 1 ki yaad aa gayii...
nice convo on wireless...
awsme plz continue soonnn
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update bt I thought dey vil meet in kashmir..
Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous...
Beautiful start to the story and their is conversation is excellent
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for pm. 
Lovely update.
Waiting for next one.