Ashu k ishq me shayar ban baithe-thread 3- 16/9 updated

deepa

@jayanti_dj

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Posted: 9 years ago

hey there..

hope some of my old pals are still out there...

wrote a shayari after like ages ...and as always,here to post it.

link to previous threads-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2849249?pn=17

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3777319

here we go-

kafan pehnane ki jidd na karo

ki ek aadha saas abhi baaki hai

tanhaiyion ki gufaon me bhi kahi

ek saathi ki aas abhi baaki hai

aas chod bhi de bhale saas ka daaman

par jindagi ki ek aakhri jaam ki

kambakht pyaas abhi baaki hai

shayari 2-page 2

Edited by jayanti_dj - 9 years ago

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 9 years ago

Me first

Hi, how r uDeepa ?

Wud read n comment later

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Vidisha

@Veni-Vidi-Vici

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Posted: 9 years ago

welcome back Deepa...nice lines

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Sagi97

@Sagi97

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Posted: 9 years ago

Deepa Aunty How are you? and where are you?

I read your HNS and top 7 now and then. They bring a smile on our face.

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shobha21

@shobha21

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice shayari Deepaji.👏👏👏

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rayafan17

@rayafan17

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Posted: 9 years ago

Welcome ji DJ missed you here., always enjoyed your musings

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ttrocks

@ttrocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello Deepaji. Nice to hear from U after such a long time. 😃 How are U?

Nice shayari!! 👏

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parmarA

@parmarA

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Posted: 9 years ago

@Deepaji nice shayri.Seeing your shayri after long time.

Hope you are doing fine.

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mudraswathi

@mudraswathi

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Posted: 9 years ago

where have you gone madam?

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-rhythm-

@-rhythm-

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Posted: 9 years ago

hello hello ... look who is here.. 😃 very nice to see u here ..

Deepa.. missing you .. now chand sa ID dikhake kaha chali gayi..😆

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