Ek Mutthi Aasmaan

RAGNA FF-TUM PAR BAS HAQ HAI MERA part 70 pg 165 (NO PM) - Page 27

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Aaree khushi haldi wala doodh banane meai itna time lagta hai kyaa?😑😑 jaldi se typing suru kar or update kar.please maan ja na😭

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Hi dear where r u...plz updare soon..u knw how much v luv ths ff...waitg...plz...update dear...
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I'm so sorry to all of u...I was busy with my friend birthday preparation...so here u go πŸ˜‰ enjoy & leave ur comment & feedback 

Part 15

Breakfast table raghav was hiding his hand which got hurt from everyone,Kalpi ask him

K:how is your hand now 

Raghav stare at her in anger

N:oye wht???? (Run to him) show me ur hand, kya hua (wht happend)how this happend 

R(in mind:that was the reason I was hiding my hand,bt thank to u Kalpi,now I have to answer all the Qs) 

R:nothing mom, I'm fine, don't worry

N:don't worry ya u can say tht u don't have a child when u will have then I will ask u how it feel when ur children got hurt (crying) 

S:raghav how this happens, y don't u take care of ur self...

R:I'm fine, don't ask me again & again (walk away from table) 

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Raghav in room sitting very angry, when neetu cme with haldi ka doodh (turmeric milk) 

N:raghav here drink this, it's good for wound..

R:mom I hate this haldi ka doodh,pls take it bak 

N:no, have it & I call doc too

R:mom pls mujhe nahi peena (I dnt wnt to drink) leave from here nw 

Neetu walk out of room without saying a word & push Sammy in

S:here (giving glass to him)

R:W*F,...leave nahi chahiye (I dnt want it) 

S:it's good for health

R:didn't u heard me (working on laptop) Sammy..get out 

S:stp showing these attitude to me...I'm going

R:good,leave & shut the door 

Sammy did same & goes to neetu

S:here, he don't want to drink aunty he hate this!!!

N:Sammy pie make him drink pls,it's good for him 

S:it's Sammy only & he don't like it & I'm nt going in again he will kil me this time 

Kalpi was walking pass when neetu call her 

N:Kalpi pie,can u pls do me a favour 

K:ji aunty 

N:beta can u go & give this to raghav 

K:aunty...ummm...hmmm

N:pls beta

K:u can send Sammy in, pls Sammy u go

Neetu signal him to leave,& Sammy make excuse of important call 

S:I'm sorry bt I have to make important call,sorry bye 

N:dekha, he alway do this pls tum jao (u go)

K:aunty how can I 

N:pie (caress her face)pls for me,don't say no pls pie 

K:ok,I will go 

N:ok thanks (in mind:yes now very soon she will be my bahu & will control him haha)with smile

Kalpi goes to raghav room & walk in without knocking 

K:here  u go

R:Sammy get out, u knw I hate this milk (looking at laptop)

K:I'm kalpana 

Raghav look at her

R:Kalpi tum yahan (u here) 

K:haan neetu aunty na haldi ka doodh deya hai tumhare liye (neetu aunty send this turmeric milk for u)

R:Kalpi mujhe doodh nahi pasand hai (Kalpi I don't like milk) 

K:raghav pls have it, it's good for u wound...

R:Kalpi pls don't force me 

Kalpi sit on bed hold his hand & say 

K:pls mere liye pee lo(drink it for me) 

R:acha do mujhe (ok give me ) I will drink 

Kalpi give him & he drink it, & then feel sleepy,

R:Kalpi I'm feeling sleepy 

K:ok the sleep na 

R:nahi mujhe sone nahi hai (I dnt want to sleep) 

K:kyun (why)

R: kyunki tum chale jao gaye (becuz u will leave) 

K:nahi jao gaye (I will nt go) I promise tum so jao (u sleep now)

R:pakka (promise)

K:pakka (promise)

Raghav sleep, Kalpi give him blanket & sit on other side on bed, & stare raghav & fall sleep, some hours later raghav wake up & saw Kalpi sitting on coner of bed & sleeping there, he smile & kiss her forhead & went to bathroom for shower, some time later Kalpi wake up & not find raghav around her...she start panicking & shout 

K:raghav...where r u 

R:I'm in bathroom, wait I'm coming out 

K:ok (sit on bed) 

Raghav come out,pass smile to Kalpi,walk to his cupboard, pick his shirt & try to wear It can't becoz his hand hurts 

R:ouch

Kalpi run to him

K:raghav give me I will do it 

R:no I will manage 

K:haan u will bt let me do it 

R:but 

K:no more word raghav, (sit) 

Raghav sit on bed, & staring her 

K:hand up (avoiding eye contact) 

Raghav did & Kalpi put him shirt & then went to dressing table get his hair brush & did brush  his hair & change his bandage & tie new one 

K:all done now I'm going take care of ur self bye 

R(hold her hand):Kalpi mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai (I have to say something to u) 

K:kya (wht)

R:kya tum mujhe ek chance nahi day sakti ho pls (cnt u give me one chance pls)(holding her hand)

K:raghav duniya mein sab ko second chance nahi mila tha(in world not everybody get second chance) aur waise bhi mujhe tum par trust nahi rahi hai (& I don't trust u anymore) 

R:pls Kalpi mujhe maaf kardo (pls forgive me) 

K:pls let me go (goes from there)

& run in her room & cry 

Song in background 

Akhiyan nu khwab wakha gayi ae...

Sanu jhute laare laa gayi ae...

Ishq da radula pa ke tu sadde dil nu kya thi kar gayi ae... 


R:I will do everything to gain ur trust, becoz I love u & can't loose u 


Ki Daisye tainu asi haal-e-dil..

Assi sooli uthe tange aa..

Na din langda na chain aunda...

Asi darr darr ruled firde aa...


K:how did u except me to forgives u & give u chance, what If u left me again, no I can't give a chance (tear come out of eye) 

Payal knock the door 

Pa:Kalpi u in...

K(wiping her tear):haan wait & open the door 

Pa:chalo we r going to mandir...

K:I'm not coming 

Pa:Kalpi chalo it's for baba..we have to do this puja 

K:ok only for baba

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Kalpi raghav Sammy & payal reach the mandir for puja 

K(in mind:don't think I'm here for u, u took away everything first my love & then my baba,today I came to mandir only for my family)

Pa:Kalpi let go in 

K:hmmm 

Kalpi & payal did puja for vitthal & get ready for away bk,while going back tire of car puncher 

R:oh shit!!! 

S:kya hua (wht happend)

R:tire puncher ho gaye hai (tire puncher )

Pa:oh shit 

K:wht a big fuss raghav & Sammy change Karo 

S:I dnt knw how to do it

Pa:wht???

Kalpi look at raghav 

R:stp stare mujhe bhi nahi aate (I don't knw either) 

Kalpi & payal laughs 

K:OMG u guys don't knw how to do it 

R:wht funny in it nahi aate toh nahi aate & if it is that funny y don't u do it

K:oh sure 

S:do u knw how to do it 

K:haan wo I learn from prem darling 

Pa:ohhh 

R(jealous on prem name with darling):really then do it 

K:shut up pagal & mr great raghav Singhania, give me spare tire 

R:wo kahan hota hai (where it is)  

K:aapko yeh bhi nahi pata,(u dnt even knw tht)u only knw how to driver, it's in back

Raghav give Kalpi tire &I she fix new one with old one 

K:ho gaye (all done) 

R:r u sure 

K:haan & if u r scared come home by walking

Raghav give dead stare to Kalpi  

All went to home...


------precap:Kalpi is running in house & then jump in raghav's arm    

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
waiting for next
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Kalpi getting Raghav to drink the milk and then taking care of him was so sweet
Raghav asking Kalpi for a second chance was awesome but he can't feel bad that Kalpi dont trust him after his little stunt he pulled on her. Aww Kalpi can change a tire while Rammy can't lol
Superb update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Good update. This new rags is good hopefully kalpi gives second chance. And loving Neetu.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Plz rag ko aur toda tadap me do kalpi lage raho apni ziid par
Nice updt
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Posted: 9 years ago
tq very much 4 ur lovely updateπŸ˜ƒ
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tq again 4 translate in English language..πŸ˜ƒ

i luv ur story vm..πŸ˜ƒ

Plez UPDATE soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
Liking the way the story is progressing... Do update soon...
N sorry for not commenting often πŸ˜­ my mobile gives me trouble...