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raina verma

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Posted: 9 years ago

PART 6
nk- mai tumhe kuch dikhana chahta hu ak
ak- kya dikhana chahte ho nk ki tum kabhi bhi kisi ko khush kr sakte ho apne dost ke kehne par
nk- nahi ak tumne mujhse dosti to kar li par shayad vishwaas nahi kia ,mai hamesha apne dil ki karta hu
ak- vishwaas kia tha tum par varna tuhare saath yaha na hoti par tumne hi use toda hai
nk- nahi ak ye dekho ye gifts ye cake iss par kya likha hai
ak unhe dekhti hai " always keep smiling" dekhkar vo rone lagti hai
nk- shayad tumne dekha nahi ki inpar kya likha hai hamesha muskurate raho ,pls ak ab ro mat
ak- theek hai nahi roti ab chalo cake cut karte hai aur waise bhi mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai
both ak and nk cut the cake and feed eachother
nk- chalo ak mai tumhe ghar drop kar deta hu waise bhi baarish hone waali hai
ak- pls nk kya hum kuch der yaha baith sakte hai
nk- ok as ur wish
ak- to chalo nk hum us boat par chalte hai
there was a small boat under a tree near the beach where both sat next to eachother
ak- ye shant jagah kitni pyaari lagti hai na
nk -hmmm
ak- tumhe bhi aisi jagah pasand hai
nk- ha jab bhi mai apne mom dad ko miss karta hu to aisi hi kisi jagah jata hu
ak- bahut akela mehsoos karte hoge na
nk -hmmm
ak- mujhe bhi lagta hai par iss baat ki kushi hai ki koi meri itni parwaah karta hai
nk's face lightens up
ak- rr uska pyaar mujhe saari kusiyaan deta hai
vaise nk tum kisi ko pasand karte ho kya?q
nk- kyu
ak- bas aise hi ab dost ke baare me sab kuh pata to hona chahiye na
nk- waqt aane par tumhe zaroor pata chal jayega ak
ak- ???
then nk realises some waterdropes on his face
nk- chalo ak baarish start ho gayi
suddenly they got up and again ak slips in nk's arm they both fell in the boat akshara is completely over nk and nk hands on akshara's waist
tabhi baarish tez ho jati hai aur dono bheeg jate hai
nk and ak both in awkward position
ak waha se utkar apni saaree ko theek karti hai aur kehti hai
ak- sorry nk ye meri saree bhi na pehli baar pehni thi to phass gayi aur mai gir gayi
nk- ( still feel some awkerdness) its ok ak hota hai, chale
ak- hmmm
ON BIKE
both are silent after that incident
after some time
nk- ak tum theek to ho
ak- ha nk mai theek hu
nk- thand to nahi lag rahi
ak- nahi
nk saw ak through mirror while she was shiviring
nk- ak tumhe nahi par mujhe bahut thand lag rahi hai mai aisa karta hu ki pass me hi ek shop hai waha chalte hai aur kapde change kar leta hu actually mujhe cold bahut jaldi ho jata hai
ak- shimla me rehker bhi cold tab to tumhe pure saal cold rehta hoga
nk- very funny ha ha ha
ak- theek hai nk jaldi chalo mujhe ghar bhi jana hai
nk and ak reached at the shop
where nk select a shirt and jeans for him
nk- mai change karke aata hu
ak- jaldi aana
kuch der baad nk aata hai
but ak is still shiviring
nk- ak pls tum kapde change kar lo varna fever ho jayega
ak- par nk mai apna purse nahi laayi hu
nk-in angry tone mai bhi paise de sakta hu itna to hai mere pass
ak- sorry nk jati hu
akshara choose a top and jeans and went to the changing room
idhar nk payment ke liye jata hai
here ak
ak- nk kaha gaya zaroor paise dene gaya hoga tabhi vo ek person se takraa jati hai
ak- sorry uncle maine dekha nahi
man - its ok beta maine hi aapko nahi dekha
ak is shocked to see him
ak- aap
man- tum mujhe jaanti ho
ak- ji unlce aap rr ke dad hai
man- yes
ak- par aap to
man- kya beta
tabhi nk payment karke waha aata hai aur ak aur rr ke dad ko saath dekta hai
ak unse kuch kehne jati hai tabhi
"dad " nk unhe peeche se bulata hai
man - nk beta tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?
ak is still in shock
nk- inse miliye dad ye meri aur rr ki dost hai ak
man- hello ak u r a very sweet girl
ak- thank u uncle
accha beta mai chalta hu mujhe apne doston se milna hai bye
vo nk ke sar par hands rakhkar kehte hai" good choice beta"
nk shocked
ak- ye sab kya tha nk koi mujhe batayega
nk- ak vo mai ??
PRECAP - ak slaps rr in canteen and nk said sorry to her Edited by rainanaksh - 9 years ago

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hirannaksh

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Posted: 9 years ago

hey raina please update soon love to see ak slaps rr for his mistake

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raina verma

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Posted: 9 years ago

hey friends i think no one is liking my ff ,only a single like and just a one feedback , so i think i should stop writing my ff i thougt i can write a good ff not the best one but i will try .but i think its a very bad story that u friends ignore it .so thanks its a great time here and i am very happy about that .
thank u all friends for these beautiful comment.

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hirannaksh

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Posted: 9 years ago

pls update soon i am eagerly waiting for next part

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raina verma

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Posted: 9 years ago

PART 7
NEXT DAY IN COLLEGE
ak, vr and an in there classroom
vr - hey ak ji to kaisa raha kal aapka birthday
ak- very very nice
an- kyu nahi hoga rr jo saath tha
ak- rr nahi nk mere saath tha
vr and an became shocked - kya !
ak- ha kyu kya hua
an- rr tere saath nahi tha phir bhi itni happy hai
ak- ha kyu nahi reh sakti kya problem kya hai vaise bhi rr apne dad ko delhi lekar gaya tha to maine socha ki kyu na bday nk ke saath hi mana liya jaye
vr- good going ak aur tujhe bura bhi nahi laga
ak- bura kyu lagega mai to khush ho ki rr sabki kitni chinta karta hai
IN THE CAR
rr and nk is on the way to college
rr's dream
vo ak se kehta hai mujhe maaf kardo ak maine tumse jhoot bola tha mai bday par nahi aa paya and ak in angry mode slaps him in front of all students.
nk- rr kya hua tujhe kya soch raha hai?
rr- bhai mujhe bahut chinta ho rahi hai
nk- kis baat ki
rr- yahi ki ak ko meri baaton par vishwaas to hoga na
nk- ha kyu nahi hoga tujhse itna pyaar jo karti hai
rr- ha vo to hai tabhi to mai ye sab kar paya
nk- uska vishwaas tod kar ( in a low voice)
rr- kya kaha tune
nk- yahi ki college aa gaya
rr- ha chal
nk and rr both went to ak classroom
ak saw rr and quickly hugs him
ak- thank god tum a gaye maine tumhe kitna miss kia
rr- maine bhi my love
ak- ab uncle ki health kaisi hai
rr-kaun uncle?
ak- tumhare dad
rr- oh ha ab vo bilkul theek hai
suddenly the bell rings
rr- accha friends ab mai apni class mai jata hu lecture start hone wala hoga bye all
nk and ak too join their seats
both are not talking to each other
after some time
nk- sorry akshara maine tumhe bahut hi hurt kia hai
ak- ha nk
IN FLASHBACK
jab rr ke dad shop se chale jate hai
ak- nk koi mujhe batayega yaha kya ho raha hai
nk- vo ak
ak-pls nk pls mujhe batao ki ye uncle yaha kya kar rahe hai?
nk- bataonga par tum mujhse vaada kar ki tum iss baat ko dil par nahi logi
ak- theek hai ab batao plss
nk- ak vo rr delhi nahi gaya hai balki vo...
ak- nahi gaya hai to phir vo kaha hai?
nk- actually uske liye ek rishta aaya hai to vo unse meeting ke liye gaya tha
ak- oh to ye baat thi vo mujhe pehle bhi bata sakta tha na isme kaun si badi baat hai
tum bhi na ab shaadi ke rishte to aayenge hi na .par mujhe rr par pora bharosa hai ki vo mujhse hi shaadi karega
nk- ha kyu nahi
ak- accha hua tumne mujhe ye sab bata diya varna mai na jane kya soch baithi thi
nk- ab chale ghar
ak- ha
IN PRESENT
ak- ha nk hurt nahi par ek best dosti nibhai hai aur ye friendship mai marte dum tak nibhaungi
nk- mai bhi
ak- ok nk lecture khatam ho gaya baad me milte hai
nk- bye
aur ak ,vr and an class se chali jati hain
nk- sorry ak maine tumhe puri baat nahi batayi par mai ye kaise kar sakta hu rr aur ak dona mere friends hai aur mai unhe alag hote nahi dekh sakta
aur mai rr ko ak ke saath dhoka dene nahi donga usse samajhna hoga ki ak usse bahut pyaar karti hai
IN CANTEEN
ak and rr talking to each other
rr - i am sorry ak mai tumhara bday celebrate nahi kar paya
ak- koi baat nahi phir kabhi celebrate kar lenge
rr- nahi abhi celebrate karte hai
ak- par kaise aur vo bhi yaha
rr- nahi tum aao mere saath
rr ak ko liberary lekar jata hai
rr- ha yaha abhi koi nahi hai
ak- par yaha kaise
rr- yahi ak tum aankhen band karo
ak- ok
she closes her eyes
rr gives her a packet
ak- isme kya hai
rr- tum hi dekho
she opens the packet
ak- wow rr ye wahi dress hai na jo uss din maine mall me dekhi thi tumhe yaad tha thank u so much
(a beautiful black sleevless gown )
rr- tumne jo kaha tha isliye. accha chalo ab tum mujhe ek aacha sa gift de do
he pointed on his lips
ak- ji nahi ye sab shaadi ke baad hi
rr- kya ak jab bhi mai aisa kuch kehta hu tab tum yahi kehti ho
ak- to galat kya hai mai aisi nahi hu
rr- to theek hai raho jaise rehna hai
aur vaha se chala jata hai
ak- par rr suno to
ak coming from liberary with a sad face and nk saw her
nk- hey bhagvaan phir dukhi
ak- pata hai nk mai kabhi kabhi ye nahi samajh paati ki rr mujhse pyaar karta bhi hai ya nahi
nk- kyu nahi karta aakhir tum itni pyaari jo ho tumse to koi bhi pyaar kar le
ak- shayad par rr ko mujhse kuch aur bhi chahiye
nk- kya ak
ak- tum nahi samjhoge
nk- mai kyu nahi ? khair jane do mai tumhe ye batane aaya tha ki rr ne aaj tumhare liye aur tumhare saare friends ke liye tumhare bday ke liye ek party di hai
isliye tum shaam ko ready rehna mai tumhe pick karne aa jaunga ok
ak- tum aaoge
nk-koi problem hai mere saath aane me and he become sad
ak- ji nahi koi problem nahi hai aur vaise bhi bike par baithne ki mere practice bhi ho chuki hai
they both laughing together
PRECAP- IN PARTY AK SAW RR WITH BINDIYA

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice part.. continue writing

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hirannaksh

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Posted: 9 years ago

eagerly waiting for next part

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 9 years ago

so friends here is next par
PART 8
AKSHARA'S ROOM
akshara is confused in her dresses
ak- kya ak tu apne bady party ke liye ek aachi dress bhi nahi choose kar pa rahi hai
after some time she chooses a dress which was gifted by rr
ak- ha ye hi theek rahegi
she wore a white coloured miniskirt with sleevless top and from back it was backless
she take atleast 2 hours to get ready
ak- aa ha ak tu to badi hot lag rahi hai dekhna jab rr tujhe dekhega to paagal ho jayega
aur vaise bhi mai aaj use uska fvourite gift bhi doongi jo vo chahta hai
after some more time she heard a voice of car honk
ak apni balkani se deekhti hai
nk neeche uska wait kar raha hota hai aur vo neeche aati hai
nk apni car ka mirror clean kar raha hota hai
tabhi ak " sorry nk wait karane ke liye"
its ok ak " he did'nt notice her
ak- kaisi lag rahi hu
then nk saw her and surprised to see her in this attire
nk- acchi lag rahi ho par
ak- par kya nk sach batao
nk- uss red saaree me zyada khubsoorat lag rahi thi
ak- tumhe kya pata nk par rr ko ye hi acha lagta hai
nk- to tum rr ke kuch bhi karogi
ak- ha kyu nahi ab chale hum hotel
nk- ha
he opened the car door for akshara and while sitting her top sring was about to open suddenly nk holds it " akshara he said
ak- kya hua aise kyu chillaye
nk- ye vo tumhare top ki dori open ho gayi hai ye lo
ak became very much embarras infront of nk
maine dekha nahi thank u nk
nk- hmmm
nk aur ak dono hotel pahuchte hai
whole hotel was fully decorted with white nd curtains baloons and flowers with disco type set up .all decorations were very expensive
ak is astonished to see the surprise.
rr vr an all are coming from there to welcome akshara
rr- happy bday my love
ak- thank u rr and hugs him
vr aur an bhi ak ko wish karke waha se le jti hai
here nk and rr
rr- thanks yaar jo tune ye idea dia aur itni jldi sab arrangement bhi kar liya tu mera saccha dost hai
nk- nahi yaar apne friends ke liye to kuch bhi kar sakta hu accha ab tu ak ke paas ja
rr- ha tu bhi aa ja cake cut karte hai
bday girl ak apne saare friends ke saath cake cutting karne jati hai tabhi
a girl came infront of her
happy bday akshara she said
ak- aap kaun ? sorry maine aapko nahi pehchna
she said " i am bindiya "and here rr and nk shocked to see her
ak- sorry
bin- mai rr ki friend
rr ki jaan me jaan aati hai
bin- rr tumne apni friend ko mere bare me nahi bataya
rr- ha nahi sorry bindiya mai bhool gaya
nk cuts in between chalo ak cake katoo
ak- ha
she cuts the cake and feed to rr nk vr and an
all are dancing with eachother in disco light but bindiya is standing in corner
rr- hey jaan chalo na dance karte hai
bin- nahi ,kyu na hum bahar chale yaha bahut shor hai
rr- ok and they both went out from there
here ak is dancing with nk
ak- nk rr kaha gaya ?
nk- pata nahi abhi to yahi tha
ak- mai dekhkar aati hu
nk- ruko ak and he also goes behind her
here rr and bin gets cosy with eachother
he is kissing her lips when ak saw them
ak- ye sab kya aur mai paagal but she went from there without saying anything
here nk comes
nk- rr ko dekhkar
aap log ye kya ?? rr mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni hai vo bhi akele me
rr- ha bol
nk- ak tujhe dhoond rahi pls andar chal
rr- theek hai mai bindiya ke saath aata hu
nk- nahi tu ja mai use lekar aata hu
teeno wapas party me jate hai
suddenly antara came and said" guys tum yaha ho aur waha ak ko dekho kitni drink ki hai usne
nk and rr ak ke paas jate hai
aur uski haalat dekhkar pareshaan ho jate hai she was totally talli.
rr -mai ise ghar lekar jata hu
bin- tum kyu jaoge rr ?
rr- vo mai theek hai aisa kar nk tu isse pls ghar le ja
nk- par mai kaise vo bhi iss halat me
rr- in nk's ear" pls bhai le ja varna mai gaya
nk- ok and he takes ak in his arms and goes from there
it was already late night aur ak ki aisi halat
IN THE CAR
ak resting her head on nk's shoulder
nk- ye ak bhi na pata nahi kya zaroorat thi itni peene ki
ak- - (in babyish voice) maine nai pi hai nk ye mera dukh rr bindiya kiss bday party tum friends hai
nk- pata nai tabse kya bak rahi hai?
when his car stops on a empty jungle type road
nk- ab ise kya ho gaya ?
he came out from his car "ab dekta hu"
aur car theek karta hai .
nk- chalo te theek to ho gayi ab le chalo madam ko apne ghar
he is about to sit in his car but found akshara missing
nk tensed- ye ak kaha chali gayi .kahi jungle me to nahi
nahi mai ak ko kuch nahi hone dunga and ready to search her calling ak ak every where
jungle me har jagah dekne ke baat nk sadly ek pond ke pass baith jata hai
nk- kaha gayi tum ak
tabhi nk talaab me kisi ko tairta hua dekhta hai
white dress ye to ak ne pehni thi matlab ye ak
he suddenly jumps in pond and brought ak safely on the ground.
nk- ak pls apni ankhen kholiye dekhiye mai nk
but she is unconsious .
PRECAP- naksh romance in cottege its dream or reality ?

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Riddhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome part
Please next part today itself
Can't wait

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hirannaksh

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Posted: 9 years ago

ya i think now ak will fall for nk pls update next part soon

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