naksh ff ** tum mile ** PART 33 on PAGE 59 - Page 4

Posted: 9 years ago
PART 9
nk took ak from there nd in a jungle way
nk- ab kaha jaao ak ko dhundhte waqt maine raasta nhi deka ab
then he saw a small cottage in jungle
nk- chalo yaha kuch to dikha yahi sahi
IN COTTEGE
nk- yaha koi hai kya ,lagta hai yaha koi rehta tha tabhi ye aag yaha jal rahi hai
nk ak ko ek hay ke dher par leta deta hai
nk- ak pls aankhen kholiye
she was shiviring badly due to cold
nk- ek to inhe hosh nahi aa raha aur upar se ye thand .inke to saare kapde bhi geele hain
aur mai inke pass kaise jaao mai bhi to bheega hu .
he took off his shirt and came near ak
nk ak ke pass to jata hai phir door ho jata hai
"mujhe inhe heat deni hogi aur inke kapde bhi change karne honge " he said
nk apni shirt se akshara ko cover kar deta hai
nk- ha ye theek hai mai inke clothes utar kar kisi tarah ye heat ak tak pahuchata hu
and he took off all akshara's clothes too
nk took ak in his arms and brought her infront of fire
he brought some hay in front of fire and laying ak there.
nk apne haath se heat lekar ak ke haath pairon me malta hai but usko thand lagna band nahi hota
nk- ak ki halat to aur bhi kharab hoti ja rahi hai mai kya karu?
while thinking
ha nk tujhe ye karna hi hoga
par mai ye nahi kar sakta ak meri friend hai
par agar use kuch ho gaya to tu rr ko kya javab dega
nahi mai ak ko kuch nahi hone dunga
suddenly he realise the reality
and he took off the shirt which was covering akshara and lay on her to give his body heat to her and start kissing her here and there
IN MORNING at 3 am
nk saw ak sleeping besides him peacefully and get up from there
tabhi nk ko bahar se kuch aawaz aati hai aur vo bahar chala jata hai
here ak wakes up
ak- uff mera sir ! aur ye mai kaha hu mere kapde sab kaha hai?
tabhi nk andar aata hai
ak is shocked to see nk here
ak- nk tum? aur ye hum kaha hai?
nk- happily tumhe hosh aa gaya ak, but suddenly notice her ,par pehle tum apne kapde pehen lo ak mai abhi aata hu
ak- shocked mere kapde
AFTER SOME TIME
nk- kya mai andar jaoon
ak- hmmm
nk- thank god ak tum theek ho pata hai mai kitna ghabra gaya tha
ak came infront of nk and slaps him
ak- tumhari himmat kaise hui mere sath ye sab karne ki
nk- ye sab matlab kya?
ak- itne bhole mat bano nk tum sab ladke hamesha ek hi baat sochte ho
nk is blank
ak- jaha ladki dekhi nahi bas unke saath yahi sab karna chahte ho hai na batao
nk- nahi ak tum mujhe galat samajh rahi ho
ak- mujhe tumhari ya tumhare dost ki koi bakwass nahi sunni hai
aur waha se jane lagti hai tabhi
nk- jana hai to jao ak par itna sun lo ki agar mai tumhare saath raat bhar na hota to shayad tum ...
ak- to mar jaane diya hota mujhe nk mar jane
and she begans to cry
" jisko itna pyarr karti thi aur aaj bhi karti hu usi ne mujhe dhoka dia hai nk"
pata hai nk maine aaj tak jisko pyaar kia hai sab mujhe akela kar gaye hai chahe vo mere mom dad ho ya phir rr koi mere saath nahi raha .
nk- tum aisa kyu keh rahi ho ak?
ak- maine rr ko bindiya ke saath dekha tha
nk- vo dost hai ak aur kuch nahi
ak- jhoot bol rahe ho tum maine unhe kiss karte dekha hai
nk-kya ?
ak- ha nk isiliye mujhe nahi jeena hai
aur tum ne bhi mera vishwaas tod diya nk ,rr aur bindiya ke baare me kuch na batakar
suddenly she took a burning wood from fire and try to burn herself but nk stops her
nk- paagal ho gayi ho kya aise koi jaan deta hai kya bhala
ak- to kya karu mai nk ? mujhe nahi jeena
while crying she hugs nk tightly
nk-pls ak tum ro mat ok
ak-mujhse nahi hoga nk
nk -shhh...
ak-nahi
just then he cupped her face and kisses on her lips passionately
in return ak closes her eyes...
sorry friends i know this part is not so romantic but i will try it in my next part
PRECAP- nk promises to ak that he will not tell anyone about them
sorry for many grammatical mistakes
    
Posted: 9 years ago
nice part dear
naitik's kiss to akshara but they are not in love so why?

keep continue soon
waiting for next part
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by hirannaksh


nice part dear
naitik's kiss to akshara but they are not in love so why?

keep continue soon
waiting for next part
thanks dear for liking it
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Nakshiranridz


Please update next part
ya dear i will update soon
Posted: 9 years ago
PART 10
nk turned more passionate ...he just held her tight assuring that he will never keep her apart nd seems like that nature was enjoying the union of two soul with the gust of wind blowing around ,with the thunders making the music awaking the great sensation...the beautiful desire to surrender themselves to eachother ...making them enjoy the beauty of love. the emotion started to play its role ...he slowly apart his lips from hers and moved his hands towrds the beautiful face of her which was shining beautifuly due to her tear drops...his touch enthrilled her soul...slowly he cupped her face and move it closer to his face ..their souls were about to meet now...he placed his kiss on her forehead ...she was shiviring with the new sensation on emerging within her ..it was so natural...she was enjoying it...but soon akshara regained her senses .and just then she apart from him...
ak- nahi nk ye sab sahi nahi hai ..hum ye sab nahi...
nk- sab kuch sahi hai ak agar tum sahi ho..
he could'nt resist more and moved towards her.she tried to move away...but could'nt
nk moved to his lips towards her ears and with loved filled voice he said" bas ak ab kuch nahi" ..he carried her in his arms and places her on a hay ...he bent towards ak and covered her with himself and started kissing ak deeply on her lips ...ak ran her hand through his back and kissed all over his chest and on his shoulders and neck...she gave him hickeys all over his body and nk's senses were running wild and he could'nt take it no longer...he pinned her tightly and took over her body.ak dug her nails on his back..ak going mad at all the differnt sensation nk was giving her ..they both felt sensations like never before .nk lay on top of her and she ruffels his hair .they finlly relaxed in eachother embrace..tears ran from her eyes and nk wiped her tears,and kisses her eyes" don't worry ak i am always with you" they looked into eachothers eyes and assurance there.they were completely unware of the world outside.
IN MORNING
they were lying peacefully in eachother's arms when the first rays of the sun broke ak's sleep and nk was peacefully sleeping .ak got up from there and wearing her clothes .
then nk also got up
nk- tum uth gayi ak .kya baat hai kya hua ak?
ak- kuch nahi bas mai ghar ja rahi hu
nk got up from there and wearing his clothes
nk- ha chalte hai .vaise mai tumse kuch kehna chaha hu .
ak- mai janti hu par mujhe nahi sunna hai
nk-tum chinta mat karo ak mai hamare bare me kisi ko kuch nahi bataunga
and ak suddenly goes from there
nk- mai to tumse apne pyaar ka izhaar ...and he also goes from there .they reached there houses without talking to eachother.
NK HOUSE
nk apne room me aata hai and in frustation he broke his mirror
nk- ye tune ak ke saath theek nahi kia
and he went for shower .here rr comes in his room
rr - nk yaar tu kaha hai ?
nk- baathroom me
rr- jaldi bahar aa ja bhai tujhse jaroori baat karni hai
nk came outside ha bool kya hai ?he said
rr- pehle ye bata tu raat bhar kaha tha? ak ko gahr drop karne ke baad kaha gaya tha ?aur ye tere back aur ye neck par nishaan kaise?
nk- nahi aisa kuch nahi hai basss.
rr- accha sun na kal mere saath bahut badi tragedy ho gayi
nk- kyu kya hua?
rr-vo mera bindiya ke saath break up ho gaya
nk- what kaise?
rr- aree yaar jane de na . mai ab soch raha hu ki ab dad ko akshara se milva deta hu aur hamari shaadi ki baat kar lu
nk- shocked
rr- aare bhai kuch to bol sahi rahega na
nk- hmmm ..par rr tu ak ko dhoka to nahi..
rr- nahi yaar aur vaise bhi hamara chakkar to chal hi raha hai aur vaise bhi theek hi hua ki mera bindiya se rishta nahi hua .na vo zyada rich aur na hi vo hot. to mai uske saath kaise rehta?
nk- lekin rr
rr- lekin vekin kuch nahi aaj hi mai ak ko pure college ke saamne propose kar dunga tab to vo na bhi nahi kahegi .accha tu ready ho phir hum ek ring khareedne chalte hai
nk- nahi yaar mari tabiyaat theek nahi hai tu chala ja ok
rr- ji nahi tujhe mere saath chalna hoga
and he goes from there
nk- mai ab kya karu maine apne dost aur uske pyaar dono ki zindagi barbaad kar di hai
he just then pick his phone and try to call ak but she was not answering his phone.
PRECAP- rr proposes ak in college for marrying him and here ak saw nk to say something .    Edited by rainanaksh - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
nice ff ur amazing writter  read all da part cont. soon 
Posted: 9 years ago
mindblowing part dear
but why rituraj proposes ak. hope to see naksh love story soon .pls cont.
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by neeru84


nice ff ur amazing writter read all da part cont. soon
thank u very very much dear for liking itEdited by rainanaksh - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by hirannaksh


mindblowing part dear
but why rituraj proposes ak. hope to see naksh love story soon .pls cont.
thanks dear
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Nakshiranridz


Please update part 11 asap
definately dear i will write next part today itself but firstly u have to say something good or bad about this part whether u like it or not...sorry but i am not giving u orders but wanted to know that how i writing it..because only few one two people are commeting here...    

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