Hey Diya...Nice OS!The soft knocks and their bickering...Loved it!Though I am not much of a KriYam fan but i love reading stuff on them 😊 Pretty cool work...Keep it up cutiepie 😊
Awesomest Loved it to much Kriya be a devil that the intresting Bechare reyam how they handle devil Kriyam friendship is the best and the awesomest part Then the CCD fun Manager bhi darta hai gang se hahahahahahaha Loved the fun and the masti dhamal Both r diffrent choice but both read eachother mind Dance rey ko jalane ke liye Woh bhi rumba par Nyc Passiniote bechara jal bhun gaya hoga Loved it so much Sharon the girl swayam bhi dead aab Amazing os Loved the concept and the masti and devilpanti
I liked it this way on kriyaam bonding. Was hilarious when she barge into his Washroom. And her jealousy she didn't even recognize Sharon. And what was abt cafe their are don's their. Hahaha! Funny how kriyaam are different yet same. Loved a lot & jealouse Rey bcoz of Swayam treat To read. And really kriya was evil 😉
Diyu... Such a nic OS dear. you r growing as a very gud writer day by day. Coming 2 d OS well penned down unique and refreshing concept. The bond of friendship *touchwood* kriyam wer depictd in their best ways. Jealousy doin wonders and challanges acceptd by kriya. Sorry 4 d late reply i had read it already . Wat i <3 abt ur writing is the uniqueness in deir concepts. And my most fav part:swayam in towel and kriyas gues dat he wud surely be thinking abt sharon. Thnx 4 d pm chotu love u chotu *imaginary hugs* :-)
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