Asya TS-kaise connection hai mrKhan- imperfectly perfect part5@14-21/9 - Page 12

Posted: 9 years ago
Part 5 was just perfect...,.

Zoya saying no n then agreein after five mins...a little sugar in the coffee...n the best part was Zoya in Asad's bed already asleep(like a wife of-after one year if marriage 😆 )


Just perfect...I had really wished for Zoya n Asad to somehow happen this way..,it was soo nice reading it 😊
Posted: 9 years ago
👏Kalyani,
I am so so sorry My darling!

I am terribly late. I often wonder how all you writers update so easily and quickly.

I am seriously struggling to write mine. 
Oh well I am late but I am here.

That update was some Heat overload.

Fanning myself. Phew! I need to get a room Hun.

Excitement and thrill put together.  I loved how you kept shifting POVs back and forth. It could get confusing for some readers but this was simply engaging, I really wanted to know both Asad and Zoya's thoughts together.

And bloody hell all those Blossoms😛 had we blossoming like never before.

You call me your guru eh?😳 But really darling the credit is all yours. You wrote a few before too.

So you are in the league, In your comfortable zone now. I am sure you had heaps of fun writing it...

Chapter 4- Thank god Najma left. Oh Zoya just got bold and Asad just proved to her, Tameez is left outside the bedroom😆.

Loved it My dear. Enjoyed it too. Yes I read the next chapter too. Like wine the more you write the more delicious your writings become...

👏👏👏

Love Juliet!
Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful story kalyani ...
read in one go...
loved it... specially the first part...
keep writing..
sorry fr not being able to comment
earlier...

thnx fr pming me fr all parts inspite of my nt beibg able to get back to u...Edited by aarzoo50 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Part 1.
Loved it!!!
Asad declared in his way!!
Dil ka connection!! ❤️
Posted: 9 years ago
Part 2.
Asad confessed his feelings!!!
Zoya Happy!!
AsYa shared their first kiss!!!☺️...
Posted: 9 years ago
Part 3.
AsYa so bold!!
I can imagine Dil-Naj shocked faces and covering Naj's eyes!!!🤣
Posted: 9 years ago
Part 4.
AsYa are one now in every sense!!
Kash tanveer dekhti aur jalti !!!
Dil khush hojata!!
Posted: 9 years ago
Part 5!
Sweet and lovely part!!
Asad and Zoya their home lies in each others embrace!!!
Loved it di!!
thanks keep sending PMs
Posted: 9 years ago
PLEASE POST THE EPILOGUE PLEASE
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story 
Just read from the starting it was fabulous!!!
Thanks for the pm😉

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