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Posted: 9 years ago
Lol
Superb story
Ab tk jitne bhi story pade usme sabsejada mast๐Ÿ˜†
thanks for the pmEdited by SouLScOREr - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3


Ye Khajoor wali date nhi madam๐Ÿคฃ DATE ladka ladki ka๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Kamaal toh hum hai hi 
toh dhamaal toh mach hi denge hai na Naseem๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Haan apple Juice  jiss member ko pasand hai , kripaya dhyan rkhe unhe angrezi me bhaashantar karke suna diya  jaaye๐Ÿคฃ

NEEL this is 4 u baby , I L U๐Ÿ˜† translatign for u in English

No Sandhya we have ttaken only 1 apple in consideration no two apples Juice๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†, so this apple has got no relation with Jubine's two apple juice๐Ÿคฃ

sandy ne date ko khajur bana diya ๐Ÿคฃ
sandy last tym aap khajur pe kab gayi thi ๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: peeyara

sandy ne date ko khajur bana diya ๐Ÿคฃ
sandy last tym aap khajur pe kab gayi thi ๐Ÿคฃ

๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Naseem mkujeh bhi kuch comment karna hai ๐Ÿคฃ

Mujeh padhkar hasi aa rhi hai , ki isska head n tail kaha hai๐Ÿคฃ
aise lag rha hai kisi mahasangram me bikhre hue tukdoan ko jod jod k shape dene ki koshish kiya gaya hai๐Ÿคฃ

Upar se tumen story ka naam karan EK PREM KATHA kardiya๐Ÿคฃ kaha prem nazar aa rha hai iss me? mujhe toh  aabhaas ho rha hai ki story k elements k saath saaath title bhi chori kiya hai๐Ÿคฃ gadar ek prem katha๐Ÿคฃ RaYa ek prem katah ban gaya๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.

Thanks for posting. 
Mere sabhi sahiyogi ๐Ÿคฃ lekhiakavoan ki main bahot abhaari hoon, has has ke pagal ho gyi main๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† 
issko agar market me  chod denge toh , hamare body k parts bhi kisi Aircrash me bikhre hue ang k jaise fail jaayeneg๐Ÿคฃ

mujhe thanks kyu bol rahe ho ๐Ÿ˜•
mai usi din post karne wali thi but aap gayab the ๐Ÿ˜† next day bhi wait kiya buy nhi aaye toh post kardiya ๐Ÿ˜†
mujhe aapse title suggestion chahiye tha ๐Ÿ˜† phir maine hi socha love story hi thik hai ๐Ÿคฃ maine mention kiya na k dur dur tak prem nhi hai isme ๐Ÿ˜†
itni zyaada hindi, padhne mai difficulty horahi hai sahyogi n all ๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: peeyara

mujhe thanks kyu bol rahe ho ๐Ÿ˜•
mai usi din post karne wali thi but aap gayab the ๐Ÿ˜† next day bhi wait kiya buy nhi aaye toh post kardiya ๐Ÿ˜†
mujhe aapse title suggestion chahiye tha ๐Ÿ˜† phir maine hi socha love story hi thik hai ๐Ÿคฃ maine mention kiya na k dur dur tak prem nhi hai isme ๐Ÿ˜†
itni zyaada hindi, padhne mai difficulty horahi hai sahyogi n all ๐Ÿคฃ


haan but Title suit karrha hai, aise lagrha hai ek rcich , costliest packing me rotten food pack kiya ho๐Ÿคฃ to attract poor people๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Haan main gayab thi ๐Ÿ˜† bcoz was busy lil.
thx edit karne ke liye.

Aur main itni saari hindi issiliye daal rahi hoon atleast comment toh historical lage๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: peeyara

story thi yeh ๐Ÿ˜†
khichdi toh kabki pakani chod di humne ๐Ÿ˜†
me too want k malati should write, chahe ek Os hi kyu na ho ๐Ÿ˜† lets plan something ๐Ÿ˜‰
jodha akbar wali feeling aayi ๐Ÿคฃ
haww sirf prince princess nhi, humne swyamar rakha, jung rakha, bandhi ko rakha, raja n rani rakha, itni saaari historical cheezein use ki hai ๐Ÿ˜†
kise pasand hai apple juice, kahin neel di ko toh nhi na๐Ÿ˜†
"you all are good in writing" k saath itni gandi smiley kyu  ๐Ÿ˜† bolna kya chahte ho ๐Ÿ˜†

padkar muje koi historical story jaise nahi lagi๐Ÿ˜ก...nahi abb malu se nahi kahungi๐Ÿ˜†...haan sab tha tumhare iss khicdi mein bandhi saudamini ,raja rani sab๐Ÿ˜†
haan muje laga Neel ki story likh rahi ho๐Ÿ˜†
gandi smile...stern smile hai...jyada hass nahi paayi..meine yeh story raat ke 1 baje pada yeh sochkar ki historical hogi kaafi siyasati maamle honge aur mila khicdi...toh muje kaise react karna chHIYE.
Neel ko kya normal hindi pata logo ko bhi confuse ho jaayega ki kya ho raha hai๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: peeyara

story thi yeh ๐Ÿ˜†
khichdi toh kabki pakani chod di humne ๐Ÿ˜†
me too want k malati should write, chahe ek Os hi kyu na ho ๐Ÿ˜† lets plan something ๐Ÿ˜‰
jodha akbar wali feeling aayi ๐Ÿคฃ
haww sirf prince princess nhi, humne swyamar rakha, jung rakha, bandhi ko rakha, raja n rani rakha, itni saaari historical cheezein use ki hai ๐Ÿ˜†
kise pasand hai apple juice, kahin neel di ko toh nhi na๐Ÿ˜†
"you all are good in writing" k saath itni gandi smiley kyu  ๐Ÿ˜† bolna kya chahte ho ๐Ÿ˜†


Naseem Sandhya horse ko aur uski sound ki baat karrhi thi shayad๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† jo humne Car se replace kiya  hai๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: armanz

OMG first part padhke main ๐Ÿคฃ aur pet dard aagaya mujhe... deyyvudaaa ๐Ÿคฃ kya aithihasik prem kahani likha hain..shabash..esp Armani sut, Mercedes, Iphone and above all WA isse jyada purani era mein nahin likha aap logon ne..Thanks to u ppl..

Historic dekha toh I thought of horses and crown not of Iphone n WA ๐Ÿคฃ
biscuit ๐Ÿคฃ
Neha and Vik ka aithihasik side love story shuru bhi hogaya aur ye RaYa bhi na mirchi khilane jaisa bekaar challenges mein apna time waste kar rahe hain ๐Ÿคฃ
Loved the way Kappu got eliminated himself.. 
yaha bhi tedhi bindi ๐Ÿคฃ Raja ho ya business man Ram toh Ram hain๐Ÿคฃ
Thanks for posting this..will read 2nd part later.
Thanks for pm.


Doc U liked it na๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† itni pagalpanti ki Itihasik Raya ghatnaayein hum hi likh sakte hai๐Ÿคฃ  
Yes DOc i should tell u something , jis  Itihaas ko humen padha hai srif, dekha nhi hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† ussko depict karne se accha hai Mercedes WA le aaye๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Ghodi replaced with Car , Kabutar replaced with IPhone๐Ÿคฃ , sandes replaced with WA๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† 
aocho agar hum ghodi , kabutar aur sandes likhte toh wo pahuchen tak raya laathi pakadlete๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† jo humm me se kisi  ko bhi bardaasht nhi hoti๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† so latest technology ka prayog kiya๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† latest soch raya in itself is epic๐Ÿ˜†, so WA, ho kabutar, ghodi ho ya mercede kya fark padta hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

haan there trademark things won't change raja ho ya business man๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

thx for reading n  ROFLING๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: OrangeBlossoms

Rofl

Kya khichdi pakayi hai aap logon ne milke๐Ÿ‘
Hassi toh rukne ka naam hi nahin lerahi๐Ÿคฃ


Kissne mana kiya hai DIL khol k haso๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: peeyara

itni respect, mujhe ji kaha ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜†
pls itni respect na diya karein ๐Ÿ˜†
i too dont know from where i get such stupid ideas ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜† but yahan malati ne bht help ki, my total aim was to make sure malati give in but she is tough ๐Ÿ˜† 
CId wali toh meri personal favourite hai  ๐Ÿ˜† frustrate hokar likhi thi wo story ๐Ÿคฃ
make sure your floor is clean n tidy ๐Ÿ˜†

Jee yeh respect aapke liye nahin balke aapke Hindi prem ke liye warna aajkal toh Hindi bhasha aur Hindi bhasha bolne walon ko aise dekha jata hai mano voh dusre grah ke prani hon.