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[COMPLETED]ArShi SS: Humsafar/ Last Part PG 127 (22/08) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: shruti46

I M NOT GOING TO READ IT ..


Shivi this o.s?!!!!that too on sanaya 's bday...
bad bad bad...


πŸ˜†  Dont read it ... you will not like it 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Got tears in my eyes while reading this os.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: shona_arhilover



πŸ˜† Dont read it ... you will not like it



You bet
M th title dkh k hi samajh gyi thi kuch gadbad.thats why i scroll down for any note..there waa ur note that confirmed my suspicion..

Yh umeed nai thi..
sad hi likhna tha th atleast aisa th likhte jisme rekindle hone k chances ho skte nd i cud have demand its sequel..


But you th ..

Nevermind ...u cn write sequel...In AFter Life may be...
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Posted: 9 years ago
when there is no way u can take anymore pain especially from a loved one, u cant do anything other than going away. here kushi did it literally , going far from everyone's reach to never return. though its a punishment for arnav from now, still a young girl's beautiful happily ever after dreams were shattered. u have beautifully portrayed the scene. if possible, do write a sequel or anything related. 
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Posted: 9 years ago
That was beautifully written OS...

But i cant stop my tears... this is so heart touching OS...
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow this is awesome
Khushi pain and agony was very well written. 
the song you add in one shot is too beautiful, i love it too.
wonderful piece of your amazing writing πŸ‘
Edited by Javeria3991 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very emotional πŸ˜­
Written well
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Posted: 9 years ago


wow... beautiful OS... so emotional 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: shona_arhilover


you still want to read??😲
Warning diya tha ... baad me mat bolna bataya nahi πŸ˜³

Read the OS and cried 😭
what I want to ask is one more OS with happy ending please.
It's fairytale right so why a sad ending ???
if possible please do it for me ...😳

edited my comment.😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: shruti46

I M NOT GOING TO READ IT ..


Shivi this o.s?!!!!that too on sanaya 's bday...
bad bad bad...


Yes it's very Bad...
for Sanaya's sake please give us a happy ending.😑😊