BROKEN ARROW...! (Investigative Story submitted in FF Contest) - Page 2

excellent story..

Originally posted by: pappais

Thanks for the pm gd.
Story looks exciting. Will read soon:-)

Originally posted by: Veena..

Thnx popat gonna read it soon 😉

But yeh FF konse me comoetition tha or yeh kahan pe hoa hai?

Originally posted by: ...Parii...

Will read soon dada...
thanx for pm

Originally posted by: 1.KRITTIKA

yeah wo riya ka contest hey na?

including a new pair of trio..that too with some matured moments wonderful chemistry and sideways showing vivek's sweetness...its very beautifully written..

thank you..

per kya hey na yeah stry parke mere dimaag mey ek stry req ka idea agaya..

popat ko bura na lage to batau?

Originally posted by: ...Parii...

Go a head di...
popat is always ready..
kyu popat..😉

Originally posted by: duoa

u really worked hard GD 👏

but to read a story without our trio is also a hard work 😉

really liked ur effort and new trio hats off to u GD 👏

Originally posted by: gadhadada

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<font color="#ff0000" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Popat always ready to work for Elders...😉</font>

<font color="#ff0000" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Wo tou Chota sa hay na...😳</font>

popat to bus dikhne me chota hai..otherwise by age wo to sabke dada ji hai..
haina popat ji..haha

Originally posted by: honey71

excellent story..

read an awesome story after many days..

Originally posted by: ...Parii...

popat to bus dikhne me chota hai..otherwise by age wo to sabke dada ji hai..
haina popat ji..haha