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BROKEN ARROW...! (Investigative Story submitted in FF Contest) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: rosepink.

kuku and baba- uff maza aagya..sach yaar, duo ki memory loss se related tum jo kuch b likhte ho na bada nirala or mazedar hota h..u remember mote sipahi..hehe..nd also since maine wo epi dekhi hu jisme abhi bachho jaisa bhave kr raha tha toh tumhari story me abhi ka role mai visualize kr payi..sach me maza aagya, again stress buster for me..do write more nd share..u r indeed a great writer..all d best for future..


OML! Guy here...😲😲
its really a Heart Attack Surprise...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Shuker Parrot ka Dil Buht Sakht aur Dheet hay...😈
Thank you for Ur Laughs, Smiles, Enjoyment and All...πŸ˜³πŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
Completed story !!!! πŸ˜ƒ
GD...
Bahut Maza aaya tha story padhte mei...
I loved investigation part...
Trying to guess what that sign could be was real fun...
I loved your new TRIO πŸ˜‰
The way they solved clues and the way they hid and then disclosed things to ACP sir was great...
So salunkhe sir is young boy πŸ˜‰
Toh Mao is still not born πŸ˜›
Your narration skills are excellent...πŸ‘

Yaar, but what was the explanation for guy who is killed at airport. His reason for being with Sudhakar explicitly. You didn't clarify, so I assume it was accidental...

BTW party me DUO ko bulayenge na πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice investigative storyπŸ‘ hats off to you.liked the new trio vivek freddy sudhakar. I liked kiyun k aap ne sudhakar ko bhi add kiaπŸ˜ƒ 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Absolutely and truly enjoyed this GD!

Pehle toh title kafi interesting tha. Broken Arrow.

I liked this new trio. Kafi alag hain. πŸ˜‰ Freddy sir especially was such a nice surprise.

Research bhadiya kiya hai aur investigation bhadiya tha. Mujhe acha laga duo ko aise role main dekhne main. They were consoling Freddy sir.

Aur ending first class thi. A lighter note and sweeter note.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: bluetides

Completed story !!!! πŸ˜ƒ

Thank you...😳

GD...

BT...πŸ˜‰

Bahut Maza aaya tha story padhte mei...

Really...πŸ˜›

I loved investigation part...
Trying to guess what that sign could be was real fun...

for Me too...😳😳

I loved your new TRIO πŸ˜‰
The way they solved clues and the way they hid and then disclosed things to ACP sir was great...

awww, I remember Lately that I will make much more TRIO in CID...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

So salunkhe sir is young boy πŸ˜‰
Toh Mao is still not born πŸ˜›

Hahahaha... ye bhi Theek hay...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Your narration skills are excellent...πŸ‘

Thanks again...πŸ˜ƒ

Yaar, but what was the explanation for guy who is killed at airport. His reason for being with Sudhakar explicitly. You didn't clarify, so I assume it was accidental...

Basically yaar, I wanted to Start the case and thats the Start Point of Case but I accept that I cant Explain it Clearly...πŸ‘ŽπŸΌπŸ˜’
I m so Sorry Boss...

BTW party me DUO ko bulayenge na πŸ˜†

Shayed...😈


Thank You so much for Reading, Liking and giving FB for this MAO...😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: start1234

Very nice investigative storyπŸ‘ hats off to you.liked the new trio vivek freddy sudhakar. I liked kiyun k aap ne sudhakar ko bhi add kiaπŸ˜ƒ 


Meray liyey FREDDIE Sir and SUDHAKER Sir always like Second DUO in CID...😳😳
while VIVEK is a Joining Point in these Two Bond too make it TRIO...πŸ‘πŸΌ
Just like First TRIO in CID...πŸ˜ƒ
Thank You so very much...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: KhotaSikaShreya

Absolutely and truly enjoyed this GD!


Thank you yaar...πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ

Pehle toh title kafi interesting tha. Broken Arrow.

Cheat from an English Movie...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

I liked this new trio. Kafi alag hain. πŸ˜‰ Freddy sir especially was such a nice surprise.

Thank you again...😳
FREDDIE Sir kisi say Kum hain kya...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Research bhadiya kiya hai aur investigation bhadiya tha. Mujhe acha laga duo ko aise role main dekhne main. They were consoling Freddy sir.

Yes, Research nay Mujhy Pagal kr daala...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Aur ending first class thi. A lighter note and sweeter note.

Yup...πŸ˜ƒ


Thank You so very much SHERYU...😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank You so much for Reading, Liking and giving FB for this MAO...😳😳


aaw don't say sorry after sharing such a great story GD... πŸ€—

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Posted: 9 years ago
Lo story me kahi sorry bhi hai kya..πŸ˜•
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: ...Parii...

Lo story me kahi sorry bhi hai kya..πŸ˜•


Story ki FB ki Replies mein hay...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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