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Awesome update 
Thanks for pm

awesome update dear

Omg
so emotinal
but ye hai kon
nice interesting
continue soon

nyc story
touchng nd emotinal start 😊 😭

nice concept.plz update soon

very emotional one...update soon

Awesome story
Loved it
I guess the couple is Arni
waiting for the next part
continue soon

awesome start 

Awsum Shivi.. Thanxx fr pm! Continuee Soonz!!

what was that
starting kisi fairy tale se kam nhi thi
but part end end hote hote sad story me badal gya
baby girl ki prepration ki but baby boy aya
khushi k sth gam bi aya
1 saal coma me rehne k bd death. maine ye nhi socha tha k tum end me aisa kuch likhne wali ho...
uff too emotional.
i know ye pakka raisha hone wala hai Edited by chulbuliannu - 9 years ago