||Unbreak Me||~A SaHil & SeHan FF~Ch1 on Page 8 - Page 2

This is some gorgeous stuff out here! <33

Loved it update soon 👏👏

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

This is some gorgeous stuff out here! <33

Loved and just LOVED the character sketches you have written there. This is so so relateable to the characters, feels like watching them! 😳 

Amazing. Amazing  and AMAZING! Already in love with this! 

"She is loving the feeling of being Sanam Aahil Raza Ibrahim" :') Who wouldn't?! ;) 😆 

And the alst para about love! That is so damn beautiful!! The last line regarding the "Unbreak me" part. Splendid! You are one brilliant writer! Can't wait how it turns out! :D

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

 "It isn't about fixing a relationship, or fixing someone you love, it's all about breaking you to pieces, tearing you apart, so you can find the real you, and then someone special to Unbreak you."

I can't help but quote these lines! These are just so painstakingly beautiful! <3 

Originally posted by: jojo1986

Loved it update soon 👏👏

Wow..It was beautiful start for both SaHil and SeHaan.❤️.Eagerly waiting for the next chapters.😃..PM me whenever you update..😳

Originally posted by: ..-DeViLiA-..

Wow..It was beautiful start for both SaHil and SeHaan.❤️.Eagerly waiting for the next chapters.😃..PM me whenever you update..😳

Love, a word formed with four alphabets, so simple. Love, a word with complex and different meanings attached to it. Love is like an intangible force, that hits you so hard that it breaks your insides, your soul into millions of pieces. Falling in love isn't your choice, it just happens. What one needs is someone, someone so ordinary yet so special, to find the exact you out of the million pieces you got shattered to. It isn't about fixing a relationship, or fixing someone you love, it's all about breaking you to pieces, tearing you apart, so you can find the real you, and then someone special to Unbreak you.

^^this was seriously the best part! This part touched my heart! It is so beautifully written, I wanna cry! I cannot wait to read the actual story. If that was really good, I'm sure the story will be even better! Can't wait! Please update ASAP! Lol    


Edited by bindasss - 9 years ago

Really beautiful